Wow, Ray is such a wise girl :) . This is my favorite chapter so far, it felt like you we're describing my thoughts, it was so real and brilliant! I LOVE it Report Review
I loved the part where nahuatl culture is mentioned, maybe because I'm Mexican ;). Great story! It is one of the best fanfictions I have read lately.
Ps: I love Scorpius!Author's Response: I did enjoy my research for this! So many references in fanfic to magical history and so forth draw on Celtic and Greek mythology and the like, so I wanted something else to spice it all up a bit. Glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I love Aiden and i love Sirius .and Remus!! I'm so confused right now, first I feel kind of sorry for Sirius, why did she tell him she liked Remus, WHY?!! Then Aiden kisses her and ...I loved it :D Report Review
I can't believe I'm saying this, but I missed Benjamin!!!Author's Response: That's okay, I missed Benjamin too. Maybe he can redeem himself a little with Sally-Anne? Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I read the whole story in one night, it is amazing! I love the plot it is very intriguing. In some parts of your story I thought I really liked Benjamin, but then he had to reappear and I just knew I hate him.
I really want to know what will happen next .
Good story!!Author's Response: All eighteen chapters in one night? Wow, that must have taken quite a while! I'm delighted that you like the plot so much. What makes Benjamin totally evil is that he can do nice things when he wants, tricking you for a bit. Thanks for reviewing, and I'll work on getting the next chapter up soon! Report Review
This was brilliant! I absolutely adored it:) I just have a tiny little question, didn't you use to have a different banner?Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it so much :D Yes I did but I requested a new one, well spotted ;) Report Review
I couldn't stop laughing at the last part! By the way, who is the guy in the picture? Great storyAuthor's Response: Thank you! The guy is Adam Brody (: Report Review
I love your story! But poor Remus :(Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Don't worry about Remus, he'll be okay next chapter :P Report Review
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