OMFG I LOVE THE WELSH MOUNTAIN ZOO! It's actually awesome, not been since I was little :) she finally realised! I've been waiting for this for ages, I hope she makes up with Dom though, they're both kind of bitches so. Is it bad that I find Jack to nice? He's just too cheesy for me, glad he's going to be helping her mum though, she sounds like she needs it ;) oh and I think ConDom should get back together, just thought I'd let you know, update soon! x Report Review
TEAM SPAJAMES FOR THE WIN. I do still like Robyn, just siding with Spencer dearest :) And so she finally found out what James is, this could get interesting. God, 'what' makes him sound like he's a turtle or something, sorry. So you're american? I'm actually very suprised , you are amazing at being british! (I'm british, english actually, and I don't live in London so I don't live in a palace but I do drink tea, stereotypes ;) ) So tell me, do all americans act like the characters in the OC and spend all day sunbathing and surfing? jokes, I know they probably don't but ANYWAY. Please update soon, need a dose of Wonderlandish-funniness, I have a cold, the weather's miserable and there are only so many times you can bribe your mates into buying you a Costa Frosted Mint Hot Chocolate, so yes, update soon ;)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter!
And I'm glad that you still like Robyn - unfortunately, not many people do at the moment; they're very unhappy with her.
And it totally does! Haha it sounds like he's an object or something when I say that XD
YOU THINK THAT I'M AMAZING AT BEING BRITISH?!?!?!?!?! OH MY GOD THAT MAKES ME SO HAPPY YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW!!! Just...wow, thank you! I'm grinning like an idiot now. This is what you English folk do to me when you compliment me like that jkadjldfhskjfgjfdsjd
And as for the American stereotype: well, I don't even really like being in the water haha. I've always wondered what we Americans look like to you Brits. Does it make me egotistical to hope that you all think we're super cool? Cuz I think you all are super cool :)
And the next chapter is finally in the queue so I hope you enjoy it when it's posted!
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Gah, this is just OFMDJSOABX (so cute) I love how you've compared them to Wendy and The lost boys, it's actually one of my favourite books ;)) your writing just flows, I love it, I mean I love wonderland and hipster too, but this is just adorable :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I've always loved Peter Pan so I was really excited when I noticed the connection and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! And my other stories :) Report Review
I think you should have some epic multi-scene epilogue to tell us where they are in maybe 10 years, are they married? Do they have lots of little cute kids running around? Are they dead? Jokes please don't kill them off ;) I loved the ending of this chapter though, can't imagine Lara finding out in a better way ;) are you going to make a prequel or a sequel of is this it for Brighter Than Sunshine? I love this story and I think your writing is brilliant so I hope so :DAuthor's Response: THEY'RE ALL DEAD.
Just kidding, they all have friends who are bestest friends with each other and the little Als and Laras are really smart and annoying and listen to like classical music and only wear clothes that was popular in the 20s.
Hehehe I'm kidding but can you imagine? Their kids would be fun.
I think the epilogue will be multi-scene cause that's what most people want. :) I don't think there'll be a sequel/prequel because there's not much more to say about them. I'm kinda planning (yep, I have a notepad with crazy notes) on having like my own 'verse with Next Gen where there's tons of overlapping stories but we'll see if that works out. I've started writing a Lily/OC that may never see HPFF, but we'll see. :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Hello there! I thought I'd return the favour and review this lovely little on-shot ;) so first points for your idea/plot thing. That scene where Sirius died was always one of the saddest parts of the books for me but this is the first one I've found from Sirius's point of view. I love the part where he mentions seeing Harry's heart broken face and a tear rolling down his cheek, it makes me think that Sirius was not crying from pain or fear of dying, he was upset because Harry was. I don't know wether you meant it to come across like that but hey ho! Anyway thank god for writers block! It gives us brilliant little one-shots like this one!
WELL DONE! :D
Sorry it wasn't longer, I'm rubbish at reviewing ;)Author's Response: Oh, hello :D Thank you so much! Although, I'm disappointed that this was the first one you read of mine, it's one of the worst!
No, not thank God for writer's block, I hate it! Do you know how long that one lasted for? About 3 weeks!!
Aahh, it's ok, a review's a review, doesn't matter the lenghth :)
Thanks again *hugs* x Report Review
I actually love this story. I was freakishly, happily suprised at that conversation between Al and Lara, Arctic Monkeys are my favourite band ever and I love the Kooks, The Smiths and Joy Division. I was just sat reading like, this is too cool. I'm liking the fact that Lara is sort-of starting to catch on a bit about the identity of 'Raven' I was wondering when she would, it was kind of obvious to anyone but her ;) Overall I cannot wait to read more of the story, WELL DONE! I have a giant Smiths poster on my wall by the way, just thought you'd want to know ;)Author's Response: Oh that's awesome! Yeah I love the bands I mention. It's fun to write about magical hipsters. xD Ahh I'm jealous! I don't have any music posters. Hmmm maybe I should remedy that...
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