Reading Reviews From Member: AccioTeddyLupin
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Review #1, by AccioTeddyLupinWe are Magic: Bad to the Bone

6th May 2017:
Okay, I loved the opening! It's unique and sort of anti-heroine, but it descalates through the chapter. The correspondence between Ivy and James seemed slightly forced, and of course Mcgonagall is spelt wrong. Not to mention, I don't think She would force Harry to call her Minnie when that was just a stupid nickname James and Sirius gave her 50 years before. Anyways, I'm going to keep reading and hope these problems sort themselves out.

Author's Response: Critique noted. Thanks!

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Review #2, by AccioTeddyLupinFanged Geraniums, Familial Obligations and A Farmer's Boy: Fanged Geraniums, Familial Obligations and A Farmer's Boy

27th April 2017:
Hello. I love it. Also, I need more. Thank you and good night.

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Review #3, by AccioTeddyLupinNautica Pheonix : Resignation

21st April 2017:
I've never seen anything like this on HPFF before! I can't wait for it to unfold. Good luck!

Author's Response: Awh well, thank you:) I'm hoping to keep it going on a good path.

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Review #4, by AccioTeddyLupinAgainst the Shadows: Chapter 1: Fatal Mistake

30th March 2017:
Oh, this is so intriguing! I can't wait for the next chapter.

xx Sammi

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Review #5, by AccioTeddyLupinA 1960s Cadillac: The Art of Angst

6th March 2017:
This was HILARIOUS, I tell you.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Plums xo

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Review #6, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Modern Slytherin: The Holy Terror of Hogwarts

3rd March 2017:
The Scorpius quotes are always the best!

Author's Response: Haha thank you! He's sort of my favorite, and I got too much pleasure out of the Monopoly money Joke! :)

Abby Rose

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Review #7, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Modern Slytherin: Life among the Serpents

3rd March 2017:
I love love love this! The dynamics of each character is superb, although it's hard to think James Potter would be so unkind to a muffle born, however, I'll keep reading to find out more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I love reviews especially three! And I think it's important to remember that James was very young, and he will get a chance to redeem himself. It also goes to show you how different Gryffindors can be from each other.

Abby Rose :)

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Review #8, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Modern Slytherin: The Sorting and the Pairing

3rd March 2017:
Well this is different. A good different, mind you. Can't wait to keep reading!

Author's Response: Thank you! In fan fiction, different is what you want to aim for :)

Abby Rose

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Review #9, by AccioTeddyLupinIce Queen: Ice Queen

2nd March 2017:
I completely in love. More please!!

Author's Response: Aw, you're so cute! There's another one up (Fanged Geraniums, Familial Obligations and a Farmer's Boy) as well as more on my tumblr if you wanna check them out. Thanks for the review!

Plums xo

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Review #10, by AccioTeddyLupinFluorescent Adolescent : eng-ger-land!

25th January 2017:
A future sequel, please!

Author's Response: your wish is my command!

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Review #11, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Human Factor : The One Where Things Are Mended And Broken

24th November 2016:
*Waits 9 months for the next chapter*

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Review #12, by AccioTeddyLupinI'll Be Seeing You: Grey

1st November 2016:
This is beautiful writing, by the way.

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Review #13, by AccioTeddyLupinRush: bolt

20th October 2016:
This is amazingly written! I am impatiently waiting for the next chapter.

xx Sammi

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Review #14, by AccioTeddyLupinNocturnal: Prologue

18th October 2016:
Oh my, this is different and completely brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter.

xx Sammi

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm so glad that you like it, next chapter will be up soon xx

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Review #15, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Rules Of Law: Black Rock

17th October 2016:
It's getting juicy! Can't wait for the next chapter.

xx Sammi

Author's Response: It is it is!! Stay tuned for the next chapter...
And thanks so much for reading and reviewing xx

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Review #16, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Switch : The One Where Nick Saves The Day

25th August 2016:
Well look who's back! Great chapter as always.

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

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Review #17, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Rules Of Law: Puddingshire

25th August 2016:
Love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter, as always.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm hoping to post the next chapter much sooner than my last update, so thank you for sticking around x

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Review #18, by AccioTeddyLupinMy (Fake) Wedding: Epilogue

16th August 2016:
Still so in love with this fanfic!!

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you are! It makes me happy! Thank you for a lovely review, it puts a smile on my face!

~Aimee xxx

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Review #19, by AccioTeddyLupinBeing a Falmouth Falcon: Sometimes We Need a Drink

17th November 2015:
Totally knew the break-up was coming. Sadly both of your characters have changed dramatically, and I just have to hope Gigi doesn't sit around a weep, but become the better player and person in the end!

Author's Response: They need to spend some time away from one another and get back on their own paths. Gigi went to England for a reason and she lost sight of that

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Review #20, by AccioTeddyLupinThe Sacred Twenty-Eight Club: The Benstrument

13th October 2015:
Don't be discouraged, I love your story!

Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry, I'm definitely not discouraged. The exact opposite actually!


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Review #21, by AccioTeddyLupinSt Mungo's Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries: Accident and Emergency

18th August 2015:
aaannnd walking on pins and needles until the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Sorry! Couldn't resist! :D

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Review #22, by AccioTeddyLupinCount: When You're Late and I'm Alone

16th August 2015:
Haunting, yet real. I love it! Can't wait for more.

- s

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

- Leigh x

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Review #23, by AccioTeddyLupinBeing a Falmouth Falcon: The Challenge

30th March 2015:
F*ck no, is Gigi going to far. You can take a man, but dignity is a whole different thing. I literally jumped for joy when Jacobs punched Silvia

Author's Response: I liked writing her punching Silva. Made me feel empowered in a weird way ;)


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Review #24, by AccioTeddyLupinCell 489: Close Encounters

22nd February 2015:
Hi!! Love the story but the second chapter says Bea's POV, when its Elle's. Just letting you know and keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Oh gee, thanks for letting me know!!!

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Review #25, by AccioTeddyLupinBeing French.: Welcome to Hogwarts

24th July 2014:
i am so confused...although i like the story, i'm concerned Aur is going to turn into some sort of Mary-Sue, not to mention you go back and forth between tenses so fast i have no idea if we're in the same time or in the past!
Please fix soon!

Author's Response: Hi, Sorry I haven't written in so long- I need to get my head in the right place...
I'm really starting to think about her character development and I don't want her heading that way, and while it's still early days- I'll consider that when writing!
I will go back and correct, promise.

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