Reading Reviews From Member: ExplosiveBlunderbuss
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Review #1, by ExplosiveBlunderbussBloodlines: New Year's Eve - Part 2

28th November 2016:
Aww, what a lovely chapter. I'm glad we got to find out what happened with Lyra's muggle friends, and I'm also really happy she opened up to Sirius. Not to mention Lily and James finally kissing :D I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it! it was about time that Lily and James got together - everyone'/ only been conspiring for it for forever haha :P
It would seem that Lyra's finally realized and started to accept that she's got people she can trust in her friends and Sirius

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Review #2, by ExplosiveBlunderbussBloodlines: New Year's Eve - Part 1

26th November 2016:
I really love this story! I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank-you!! It's really amazing to know that people are enjoying it! And don't worry, I've got another chapter in line to be posted soon :)

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Review #3, by ExplosiveBlunderbussMoondance: Chapter 1

22nd November 2016:
I like the start of this, can't wait for more :)

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Review #4, by ExplosiveBlunderbussOut Of The Ashes: Silver Tongued Wizards

12th November 2016:
Since you left such a lovely review for me and I saw you posted a chapter up, I thought I owed it to read and review in return :)

I really like this so far. It's interesting to see it all anew from Teddy's perspective, very refreshing.
I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: That's so nice of you, thank you!

I'm glad that you like it, I've been away from fandom for a while and was nervous. Teddy's adventures at Hogwarts have always intrigued me, so I wanted to try my hand at writing them out.

Thanks again for reading and leaving a comment, it really made my day :)

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Review #5, by ExplosiveBlunderbussThe Could Have Beens: Sirius and Edora

28th October 2016:
I really like this idea, it's interesting to see Sirius going back to somebody after he escaped Azkaban. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much.

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Review #6, by ExplosiveBlunderbussMiss Mary Mac: Secrets

9th October 2016:
I really like this story so far, I like your characterisation of Mary and I also find Remus really sweet. I hope to see updates soon!

Author's Response: Thanks!! It's so nice to know somebody's reading! I have the next chapter written but I'm currently teaching English on an island in the middle of nowhere and only get horrible internet at the most awkward of times so stick with me, you'll have an update soon!

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Review #7, by ExplosiveBlunderbussWitching Hour: Complicated

5th October 2016:
Okay so I really, really love this story and I would love to see you continue. You're doing such a good job of telling the story of what happened that year at Hogwarts!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I definitely intend to finish this story. Stay tuned for more!

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Review #8, by ExplosiveBlunderbussI Don't Have a Choice (But I'd Still Choose You): Sleepover

14th August 2016:
Oh my god I totally love this story so much!! I cannot WAIT for an update!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you! :)

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Review #9, by ExplosiveBlunderbussI Don't Have a Choice (But I'd Still Choose You): Prince Charming

14th August 2016:
I really like the start, but I have to admit I'm just a little confused. Is it canon except for Fred being alive? Anyway, I'll continue to read!

Author's Response: Yes, Fred's death is the only change I made.

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Review #10, by ExplosiveBlunderbussBelladonna: Exchange

11th February 2016:
I really like this so far. It's so rare to see a story written from Bellatrix's point of view. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

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Review #11, by ExplosiveBlunderbussHigh Hopes: Quidditch-ed

12th September 2013:
I'm glad to see another chapter of this is up! I'm surprised you don't have more reviews! Anyway, again I really like it. I think it's interesting to see the different dynamics she has towards Finn and Sirius. I foresee some headbutting later on of these sides. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh thank you :) haha yep, definitely more headbutting to come! Just waiting for a new chapter to be validated now...

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Review #12, by ExplosiveBlunderbussHigh Hopes: Back to (Ab)normal

8th September 2013:
I like it so far, it's funny :) I hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: haha thanks :) more soon, promise!

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Review #13, by ExplosiveBlunderbussBrighter Than Neon: A colorful ending.

23rd July 2013:
It's sad that this is the end, it seemed like a great story that kind of ran out of steam. Well done anyway :)

Author's Response: I agree with you - I think I ran out of steam in the writing of it. My co-author and I lost touch, so the ideas didn't flow for me so well at the last. But I'm glad you enjoyed it up to then. :)

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Review #14, by ExplosiveBlunderbussCareful What You Wish For: The Dementor on the Train

23rd July 2013:
Another great chapter! I think someone's getting a little crush on Oliver ;) I think that someone might be me! Haha :)
I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review - haha, your comment made me laugh! How could you not have a crush on Oliver?


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Review #15, by ExplosiveBlunderbussThe War Generation: Chapter 2: Beginning a Legacy

20th July 2013:
I love the first two chapters I've read so far. I like the way you're showing that Voldemort is starting to get well known. Also, there's not many stories of the Marauder's earlier years at Hogwarts, so I'm finding this intriguing :)

Author's Response: I noticed that-it is harder to write, because it's tougher imagining how an 11/12 year old thinks and acts through things, but I like the challenge! thanks for reviewing

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Review #16, by ExplosiveBlunderbussCareful What You Wish For: Brothers and Sisters

13th July 2013:
Normally, I don't read Oliver/OCs because well they usually suck haha. But this one caught my attention because of the reference to Percy and whatnot, and I decided to give it ago. Anyway, I definitely plan to keep on reading because it's funny and looks promising in terms of plotline. I hope to see an update soon!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Whoop, whoop, I have a 'catching attention' summary, haha! Yay, I'm happy you've decided to keep on reading, I'll do my best to not make it suck, I promise!


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Review #17, by ExplosiveBlunderbussBrighter Than Neon: Out of the Eye of the Hurricane.

1st July 2013:
I'm glad you updated, even a small amount, though I am looking forward to more. It was great as always, I hope Teryn knocks their heads together!

Author's Response: Thank you! - I figured it would be best to update with a small bit rather than continue to wait until I felt I had a decent sized chapter and make everyone think I'd forgotten about the story altogether lol.

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Review #18, by ExplosiveBlunderbussSwimming against the tide: Chapter 1

17th May 2013:
Ooh, interesting. I love that Severus has a sister!

I know you said you already edited this, and though it's well-written, I have one little suggestion that you can ignore because I don't want to seem like I'm criticising when I'm actually just fussy, but the first line "it was like a moment of complete serenity" would probably be better as a metaphor "it was a moment of complete serenity" however, like I said, you can ignore me. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hehe please honey, I have a lot I could improve, so all constructive criticism is welcome, and I think your suggestion is great!! It actually sounds so much better, im going to change it as soon as possible :) thanks lovely, keep reading ^_^ x

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Review #19, by ExplosiveBlunderbussFalling From Cloud Nine: Prologue: Um... What?

6th May 2013:
This looks good so far, quite interested to read more. It's nice to see Dominique being the brat for once instead of Victoire :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it :D

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Review #20, by ExplosiveBlunderbussAgainst All Odds: A Turn of Events

4th May 2013:
I like this so far, I hope there will be more soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you do and more should be up soonish! Thanks for the review :D

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Review #21, by ExplosiveBlunderbussWendy Can't Fail: Who Are You?

3rd May 2013:
I was meant to finish reading this last night but I fell asleep so. yeah I like this a lot! I love Wendy's personality, much better than the usual American-moves-to-England fanfiction. Also, you have impeccable music taste. That is all. I hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: I understand the falling asleep. I was entirely too tired yesterday. With Wendy, I tried to write around the usual types of OCs. I wanted a more realistic reason for an American in England than the standard transfer to Hogwarts story.

I'm glad that you liked the music choices! I actually give a lot of thought to what works for the chapter. Thank you for the thoughtful review.

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Review #22, by ExplosiveBlunderbussWendy Can't Fail: Lily Is A Punk Rocker

2nd May 2013:
I really like this so far and I've been reading through it, then on this chapter I realised your pen-name is Abhorsen! Awesome, a fellow Garth Nix fan :) anyway, off to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you've been enjoying the story! And it's always great to hear from another Garth Nix fan. When I first got this penname, no one ever commented on it, but I'm hearing from more and more people now.

Thanks for leaving a review!

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Review #23, by ExplosiveBlunderbussShallows: Introduction

2nd April 2013:
I like the ideas in this so far, please update soon!

Author's Response:
Yay for my first ever review! -throws confetti-
I'm so glad you're interested in my story. I'm in the midst of writing Chapter 2 as we speak, so I will most definitely try to update soon. Thanks for reading!
♥ Rixa.

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Review #24, by ExplosiveBlunderbussBrighter Than Neon: Bridges made of straw.

2nd April 2013:
Ah, I hope you get over the writers block/plot block. I liked this chapter a lot, although I'm upset at the way Chloe is treating Alex!

Author's Response: Me too! I guess I just have to figure out where I want the story to go lol.

I'm glad you liked the chapter! I know this one didn't get the positive reviews/vibe like the others lol. I don't plan on writing any chapters with fights like that in the future - so far as I know, that'll be the only one. :)

Thank you for the review!!

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Review #25, by ExplosiveBlunderbussBrighter Than Neon: Words of a private nature. . .

25th March 2013:
Eek! At last! Love this.

Author's Response: :D

I love that you love this! It makes me happy to know people are enjoying my story.

Thank you for the comments!!

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