Oh my god. No. No. NO. WHY DID YOU MAKE THEM HAVE SEX?!?!?! Oh god she's going to get pregnant. That's what happens in fanfiction. Oh please don't. PLEASE. I will cry. Because then this fanfiction will turn into all the other ones: teen pregnancy. It happens in every fricking one. Oh please, please don't. Or just pretend it was all a dream. Or erase that part of the chapter. I really want to cry. Report Review
Well, fudge! What the heck is going to happen now? Please please pleas please update son!Author's Response: i will try! thank you so much for the review. :) Report Review
You know, I never thought of the idea that Amy's friends didn't know her secret. But this just makes the whole story much more interesting. Constructive criticism: Amy's thoughts are funny and random, but try not to make them TOO random, or we get bored as readers. Anyways, nice work! Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon, Megan. Report Review
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