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Review #1, by hollyberryrIf Wishes Were Fishes: The Nicest Thing

3rd July 2012:
Yesss! New chapter! I think my only complaint about the whole note thing is that no one has really made Lily consider that James wouldn't have even written it if not for the wish Sirius made, at least not to the point where she's really reflected about it. Also, that she's been very blunt about what she dislikes about him in the past too, even to his face. So maybe someone should have told her she's kind of being a hypocrite?

Other than that, it was a really great chapter, and it's good that she didn't just fall into his arms, or whatever.

And in regards to two chapters or one chapter, whatever makes you post faster. ;) I prefer when things are posted faster, because often I have trouble remembering what happened in previous chapters.

Keep it up, look forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Indeed, you make some good points about Lily which will be addressed in the next chapter :) But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review :)

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Review #2, by hollyberryrIf Wishes Were Fishes: Deja Vu

3rd June 2012:
ahhh this was amazing! i'm so happy we're back to the beginning. when are you posting the next chapter?

Author's Response: soon, soon! Glad you liked it!

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