Reading Reviews From Member: AsphodelMoon93
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Review #1, by AsphodelMoon93Harry Potter and The Twilight Dragon: The Edge of Knowledge

4th August 2012:
I am confused from chapter 4 and five. How did Harry and Ron went from fighting to like being best buddies???


Author's Response: This was during the beginning of my writing "career". I wasn't the clearest writer, but I've learned a few things between then and now. Technically, Ron wasn't fighting Harry...Harry just went berserk on him. Obviously, there's rough patches throughout their entire history, so it's nothing big.

However...certain other things are more deeply rooted, as we find out later on, and those provide the real conflict between Ron and Harry.

Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by AsphodelMoon93Harry Potter and the League of Luminatis: Letters From A Second Son

4th August 2012:
Hi, it's me Asphodel from TDA.

Just thought I'd check this out because to get a feel of it, and it seems quite interesting.

And I must admit, I love this chapter. I love how you describe the foreboding. It was really deep and imaginative.

Keep up the good work and you'll have your banner soon. :)


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Review #3, by AsphodelMoon93Journey of a Lifetime: Confrontation

13th July 2012:
Wonderful chapter. Short. But nice just the same.


Author's Response: Thank you! :) x

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Review #4, by AsphodelMoon93Harry Potter and the Shattered Pieces: Full Circle

15th June 2012:

I finally finished this story and I'll totally regret it if I didn't at least have a final opinion of what I thought of this story as a whole, so be prepared because this might be a long review... I'm not sure.

So, I really and tremendously enjoyed your fiction. And to think I finished this in two days, hehe.

You really stuck to canon which not everyone could do. Even I, as being a fanfic author, cannot achieve that. So I give you a lot of props.

You really know how to bring emotions out of me. It wasn't too dramatic but it wasn't too... I don't know, but you really didn't overdo anything. You provided a good mixture of action, suspense, romance and so forth.

I read a few comments that was left and this chapter and one specific person who pointed out your weaknesses, and saw that you said it was an old fic so I won't bother you about that.

In addition, I loved how you brought a whole different perspective of Post DH instead of being similar to others. I thank you for that, you gave me something new and refreshing to read, because I've been looking a good fanfic for months, and I'm not exaggerating. You don't know how many times I came onto my computer to search for a good one but my search was practically fruitless until I came across this one, which I'm glad I did.

All in all, I'm writing a fanfic of my own which I'm not finished yet but do know that you inspired me to keep going and write a post Deathly Hallows of my own which will be out soonv- but I'm not trying to propose my stuff onto my review... Anways, love it, and I'm glad you have a completed sequel to this which I'm going to read after this.

Keep up the good work and when I'm done with that one, I hope to see more works from you


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Review #5, by AsphodelMoon93Harry Potter and the Shattered Pieces: Descent into Darkness

14th June 2012:
Wow, awesome well descriptive chapter.

Way different from others.

Can't wait to read more

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