this is really good, especially as English isn't your first language! This is one of those times when I wish I could read characters out of the pages, seriously me and Meg would be best friends. Countdowns are amazing. I just get ridiculously excited! Actually, I'm pretty like Meg- I've currently got a countdown that's nearly at 250 days but has been going since over 300! Yes I'm sad, I know!
keep up the good work and update soon :) Report Review
I thought you really captured Hermione's character in this and I loved the quote 'It's magic Dad. Anything is possible'- it pretty much sums up everything I feel about Harry Potter :)
I just had one queery- isn't Luna in the year below the trio?
Oh and I loved how you presented Neville! It reminded me why he's one of my favourite characters!
Keep up with the good work! :)Author's Response: Thank you! I've already had a review about Luna & Ginny being in the year below and that, I just changed it so you could see Luna and Neville were friends from the beginning and that Ginny is jealous of Hermione (spoiler, lol!) I'll put a notice on the chapter, thanks for the reminder. And I love Neville too, it's why I've tried to write a lot about him, hehe :) Report Review
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