I really enjoyed this, it was so well written and exactly how I imagined them as characters. I'm so glad I found this and I hope there'll be more additions soon! :)Author's Response: aw thank you so much!
The next chapter just got validated if you want to take a peek! :D
Thanks for the lovely review! :D Report Review
This is really good, I hope you'll continue! I really like all of the characters, and I already think that Lily and Oliver make an incredibly cute couple! The only thing I would say is that some of your sentences need breaks because they're a bit too long. Other than that, it's got loads of potential (you could pair up other people like Rose and Scorpius if you wanted to)! Nice job! :)Author's Response: Thank You! I'll deffinately look into the sentence issue but I'm glad that you're enjoying the story Report Review
Is there ANY way the babies can be Chase's?? Please!? Seriously, good chapter though! I really hate Bray, he is an idiot!
:)Author's Response: Haha, no, I'm afraid not :p
I'm so glad you liked it :D
Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
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