Good chapter. It will be interesting to see how Char copes in the tournament. I liked that Kingsley told them to put there name into the Goblet when all their freinds and family were there.

Hope to read more soon! :)

Author's Response: Well thank you!! (:

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Nice start to the story. I like Avery, she's a bit snarky but still kinda funny and likeable.
Love to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing :)

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Nice chapter. I like Teddy, it's good that someone involved with the family is close with Char and Al, that they're not completely alone!

The Wotter's aren't being very subtle about following them are they? Haha! And Luke should make things interesting!

It's a good idea to have Aurors present during the tournament, but I get the feeling that there will be trouble regardless!

Look foward to more! :)

Author's Response: o no good can come from aurors being around.

thank you for continuing to read my story and review!

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Liked the chapter, it had some funny moments.
Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: ahhh those funny moments are just a hoot aren't they?

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Nice chapter. The Tri-wizard tournament should make things interesting! So will Charlotte and Al's family and friends following them, though it's unfair for them to say that they've changed and were acting weird, considering how badly they treated and neglected/avioded them after they were sorted into Ravenclaw.

Look foward to reading more!

Author's Response: thank you for continuing to read and thank you for your response! right!? people are so mean sometimes...lol

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Interesting story, I don't think I've read anything quite like this before. I like it, especially the main characters of Charlotte, Al and Scorpius.

However there were a couple of spelling/grammar errors throughout, but nothing so bad that it detracted from the story.

Look forward to reading more! :)

Author's Response: thank you for your review! and sorry about the grammar mistakes, when i have an idea i type really fast, and not only does my laptop not detect everything, but i'm not a great speller in the first place.

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Nice chapter. So close to knowing everything! I think I've got it figured out though haha! :)

And I'm glad that Charlotte and Oliver have made up! I guess I can kind of understand where Oliver was coming from now, and his reasoning for avoiding Charlotte.

Also, I love the way that you write Lupin. He's seems very true to the way he was portrayed in the books. I love each time he just pops in with his wise words and advice!!

Can't wait for the remaining chapters! I think this is probably my favourite story on the site!! :)

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Wow I did not see that last line coming!! This story looks really interesting. Love to read more!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! A lot of people have been saying they did not see that coming. I am planning on writing chapter 2 soon!

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Interesting start to your story. I like Arwen, and the mystery regarding her mother and past.

The chapter was well written, and I couldn't see any errors, but I was a little confused over what happened at the end, I still liked it though!! :)

Look foward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you. Well yeah I edited the end and the story it a bit (gone for validation)... I noticed some errors and typos, they are sooo annoying =P.
The end will work out as we move on in the story. It's more like a trailer...=P
Thanks again for reviewing! =)


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I like this, it's interesting, funny and really well written. Look foward to seeing reading more!!

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Interesting start to your story. It's easy to read and flows well. I like what we've seen of Emmy, even if she is a bit unlikable and snarky, she has her moments.
Hope to read more soon! :)

Author's Response: First review! Hi there :). I'm glad you like her so far. Because yes, she does have her moments where she's nice, or sweet. Even if at times they are far and in between.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. The next two chapters are already written, but I can't update until my computer's returned later this week.

Leigh

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Nice chapter, I liked the bit about responsibility. Unkucky for James to be surrounded by such scary/glareful women!! Haha!
Look foward to reading more! :)

Author's Response: The responsibility part was my favorite to write. Thanks for the review!

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Interesting start to the story. I like all of your OC's, especially Evie, she seems quite real. I like the way that the chapter flowed, it didn't seem rushed and read quite well.

Look foward to reading more! :)

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Great start so far. I like that it's in James' POV-it's different. I like what we've seen of the characters, especially Selene and James, they're both a bit crazy!! But in a good way!
Hope you continue with this! :)

Author's Response: Thank you :) James and Selene are a lot of fun to right. I'm kind of basing Selene's personality around myself. You know, except for the whole pregnant thing. Also, the next chapter should go up soon!

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Wonderful chapter, I really felt for Charlotte and what she was going through.
I can't beleive that Oliver was ignoring Charlotte after everything that was being said about her! I really hate how people will believe such outrageous rumours about others, especially when they don't know anything about them. I just really hate gossiping!
Glad we're finally going to work out the whole Claudia/Isabella stuff...I think I've pieced it together, but I want to know if I'm right!! Haha!
Congrats on being a trusted author! Can't wait for the next update!! And only four more to go!

Author's Response: Ugh. Rumors. Don't even get me started. :( And Oliver...I think, personally, is just really awkward. He doesn't know what to really do so he does what any teenager does -- avoid the problem...which is bad. But it's also quite wishy-washy on his part...cough.

And yes! Claudia/Isabella stuff. :D I think a few of you have pieced it together -- which thrills me to no end! I left tons of little, itty-bitty clues throughout all my chapters so knowing that you guys have picked up on them makes me feel really happy. :D It's like reassurance that I'm not wasting my time putting them there ;)

Thanks so much! :D I can't believe this story is so close to being finished...-cradles first story like a baby- Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. ^_^ ♥

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Good chapter, even if you didn't think it was your best it's still pretty good!! I like Ophelia, and the comparisons between potions and cooking was quite interesting.
I'm so glad that Oliver ended things with Isabella, but I'm worried for Charlotte, it seems that Isabella is gonna take it out on her.
And what is happening between Claudia and Isabella? The plot is thickening indeed!!
Look foward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D And yes! I was thinking Potions was like chemistry but Gina was saying how she always thought it was like cooking -- which makes sense when you really think about it! Maybe it has a little bit of both? What do you think? Hehe :D

Claudia and Isabella are in some dep doo-doo. Just saying. And you should be worried.

I'm worried, even. :)

Thanks for taking the time to leave a review! :D It makes me feel so happy to read them. ^_^ ♥

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I really like this story. It's so different seeing a teen pregnancy story from the fathers point of veiw.
I like the humour that you manage to infuse throughout.
Look foward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review :) I was really excited to tackle the popular pregnancy story from a male's point of view. So much fun! Thanks!

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Love this story, Charlotte has really grown on me and I love her progression and growth as a character. I really like Alex, she makes me laugh!! And Claudia is such an intriguing character, as is the mystery about her family.
I'm glad that things with Drew are over, initially I liked him, but he gave me the creeps a little the more that I saw of him. He's just so cold and calculating.
Oh, and I love that Oliver was the one to find Charlotte! Perfect timing!!
Look forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks so much ^_^! Charlotte has grown on me, too. Is it weird that I didn't like her too much as a character in the beginning? Is an author allowed to not like her main character?

I think Claudia has always been my favorite. There's just something about her, you know! And Drew...he's actually based on a boy I used to kind-of date. It's a long story! But yeah. The reaction you're having to him is the reaction my friends had! Like, but he was nice...and then...creepy...and not nice anymore. :z

Anyways, thanks for the review! It made me smile. :3 ♥

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