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Review #1, by MissMandarinOf the Weird and the Lovely: Dare You to Move

8th October 2012:
I love this chapter! I love Dean and Luna together, even though there isn't much of Dean's character to go off of, but Luna was beautifully portrayed. The Luna at the end of the story may have been my favorite, I always thought her as much more fierce than she was given credit for. I do hope you finish this or add to it soon.

Author's Response: I'll try expanding Dean's character in future chapters. it's my first time writing both these characters, so i struggle a little bit in places. It means a lot, though, to hear you liked Luna. She's especially hard to write. I really hope I'll be able to update, too. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

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