Reading Reviews From Member: crimson_creamcracker
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Review #1, by crimson_creamcrackerRevival: The Interview

17th November 2012:
I love the concept of the story and I think it's really beautifully written however I'm having trouble connecting to your main character, she feels too cold and I'm not feeling her personality properly. I just don't get it, I'm going to keep reading of course because I'm interested to how it's going to develop...

Author's Response: Hello again (:.

I'm glad that you still like the concept, and that you think that it's well-written. The concept's still new to me, so I'm still struggling a bit, but I'm glad that you're enjoying it anyway.

As for Norah. When you say that she feels too cold, are you meaning in the sense that she seems emotionless? Because I've been trying really hard to show different aspects of her. When she's being the boss, she has to be somewhat detached, despite the fact that she wants to connect with her players too. She's having a hard time trying to find a centre because it's all still new to her. (ha, sounds like I was describing myself there a little. in terms of writing the story, that is xD) But then I threw in some bits of her outside the office. I figured that the little interaction between her and Fred/Roxanne, would show her natural personality a bit more, but I'll see if I can add more to show even more of it.

Do you have an account on the forums, by any chance? If so, my name over there is Caizir. If what I said above isn't what you were meaning, it'd be nice if you could drop me a message and expound a bit on what you meant. I really want my character to connect with readers, so any help on that end would be nice.

Thanks for the feedback, and for reading/leaving a review!


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Review #2, by crimson_creamcrackerEscaping the Friend Zone: Happy Birthday Ollie

15th November 2012:
I really like this, interesting to read from a boys pov not a girls like most other fics. I want to like Abi (cos my name is abbi) but I just don't like her. Lily and Ollie are meant to be right? she's acting a bit crazy atm but still TEAM LILY. YEA. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Lily/Ollie have some very good stuff coming up in the next few chapters

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Review #3, by crimson_creamcrackerRevival: The Tryouts

4th November 2012:
Nicely written, love the concept for the storyline.
look forward to next update.
Good Job.

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm glad that you like the concept. I've seen a lot of quidditch stories, but none from the owner's perspective. So, I thought, why not?

I've already begun the next chapter, so an update should be soonish.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


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Review #4, by crimson_creamcrackerEscaping the Friend Zone: Another Time, Another Place

24th October 2012:
Lily has been awful to Ollie but I can't help wanting them together - like they belong together right?

Author's Response: Possibly.

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Review #5, by crimson_creamcrackerNotorious: Lego House

2nd September 2012:

nice chapter, some cute blake/james action.

just a note that you mention at the start of the chapter that 'ava' is suppose to be seven months old then later in the chapter you refer to her being only three months old.

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