aw. I love Richie :'( And Lily, ooh i wonder what shall happen??? So have you got the traitor in the group planned? I'm so very confused coz i thought it was James but it wasn't, i thought it was Lily but now i'm not so sure, but i think it might be Dom... hmmm... upload soon!Author's Response: Sorry about Richie :/
I've known who the traitor in the group was right from chapter one! I'm glad I'm keeping you guessing, and thanks for the review :) Report Review
Yeah first review of the chapter! Oh! Okay sorry onto the review.
Well, i thought it was very good and i like the bit you put in with Lucius and Narcissa. It wasn't that long (unfortunately) but fillers never usually are.
Twas very good, can't wait til the next chapter!
-Pottergirl7Author's Response: Thanks for all of your support and encouragement! Hopefully the next chapter will be a bit longer. Report Review
I liked this story but personally i don't think there was much suspense. From the beginning i pretty much guessed that her children were Scorpius' and all the truths seemed to come out all at once without leaving any cliff hangers or surprise. Oh and in the last chapter you wrote descending, i think the correct word is condescending. Descending means going down whereas condescending means cynical. What is your native language then because i wouldn't have guessed you weren't English from the story? Nice story :) Report Review
I love Eddie but i reckon they're gonna bump into Scorpius... i think the date will go well coz i don't think Eddie's just out for sex, i think he's a genuinely nice guy but hey i've been wrong before. I love Rose and her wacky ways. And i love Scorpius too. I really want them to get to the next level coz i love scorose! You're a very good comedic writer, keep goin!!! Please upload the next chapter like now! I'm dying to know what happens next. Oh and just thought i'd say, my favourite character would have to be Lucy. She's so individual and doesn't care what other people think. Lucy is just awesome!
-Pottergirl7Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue and currently going through a five date wait, so should be out soon.
Scorose will happen, not yet, but soon. I love Rose too, she is so much fun to write. Glad you like Lucy, she's great too!
Ok, loved your review, thanks for leaving it :) Report Review
tis scorose and i love it! And yeah i started off with Marauder era so... it is kinda what everyone does but after reading a few i quite like them now and started to write my own :) love the chapter, i always pictured scorpius as a work addicted party boy. i swear you got him down to a T. Nice workAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll have to have a look at your scoroseness :)
Hope you liked the rest of the story! Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
IT'S REGULUS!!! I'm sure of it... great chapter by the way and the last few had me in stiches :) hurry up and upload!! I must know if i'm right!
-Pottergirl7Author's Response: Ask me no questions and I'll tell you no lies... ;) Report Review
Aw that's quite sweet. I would've checked this out sooner but i've been busy. I loved one of your other stories Letters to Lily. But this was really sweet. Kinda cliche but hey, it makes for a cute read. I like Al he was like all-knowing and smirky :) awesome work!Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry, at least you've managed to read it, I have so many stories to read still! I'm glad you liked both this and Letters to Lily. Yeah it is quite cliche haha, thankfully a lot of people seem to like a cliche xD
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I'm pretty sure it's Al because of the emotional range of a teaspoon bit (only hermione says that) and the fact that he was the only one not being described in the last chapter why Al Potter??? I like Louis... :( but, doesn't that mean they're related coz Louis is her cousin? But i love the story so far!Author's Response: Thank you :D and yes, its Al! :D I have a slight (meaning major) obsession with him :) I know! I love Louis too! But I just needed something really dramatic to happen, and Louis ended up mixed up in it :( broke my heart to do it! Report Review
I found this through TDA and i was curious. So i read it and i must say i thought it was amazing. I absolutely loathe Umbridge too but at times i actually found myself pitying and sort of understanding her! Only a good writer could turn the tables and make the readers walk a mile in someone's shoes so effectively. Well done.Author's Response: Hi! How lovely to get an unexpected review!
I'm glad this story piqued your curiosity... and that you found yourself almost pitying her. I'm even more glad that you still hate her - if you didn't, I'd have failed in my mission to understand her, but keep her just as dreadful.
Thanks so very much, getting a review like this really makes my day!
Athene xo Report Review
This is really good. I'm totally in love with Rae, she's just awesome! Keep writin, and can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: AHH!! First review ever!!! Thank you so so much!! I've got the next 2 chapters written and the 2nd one is just about to be put through validation! :D Thanks so very much for putting a huge smile on my face! Report Review
i was just sitting here enjoying the witty banter and wondering how this story could include a james/lily pairing without some form of incest, when BAM! you introduced lily evans' diary. awesome. please update soon as this is really good!Author's Response: AHAHAHAHAHA, yes. Best opening sentence of a review ever. Thank you so much for reading this! And for your lovely, hilarious words. I'm so glad I could find a way around the next-generation-James/Lily-pairing-incest thing. I'll do my best to update this as soon as I can! Thank you again! :D Report Review
This was a really lovely way to end such a sweet story! i kinda don't want it to be over... great work! also what pairings are your next gens? Coz i'm really into Rose&Scorpius, so just wonderin!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the ending! For both of my next-gens the main pairing isn't ScoRose, but there is ScoRose in my humour/romance one. I have a one-shot which is ScoRose so I'd love it if you took a look at that :D
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i've never read a parody before but that was really funny!Author's Response: Parodies are fun! You should read more :D Thank you so much :) Report Review
This is really good! I love Remus' witty view on everything Hogwarts. It made me smile just reading it. Keep writing and update soon. And... if you have the time, in between drafting and writing awesomely and want a bit of a break... then check out my story The Marauder Chronicles- Witch against the World. It'd be nice to have some input from someone writing about the same characters/era... Thanks!Author's Response: Thank you! To be honest, your review made my day. It's always wonderful to receive positive reviews, such as yours. If it weren't for your reviews, I wouldn't be motivated to keep writing. The next chapter should be published within the next week. I'll be sure to read your fanfiction!
Voldy Needs a Hug Report Review
this is awesome. I love how Scorpius is so different than what you'd expect but he's still quite sweet. I'm dying to know the whole story behind Teddy & Dom, as Teddy didn't really strike me as the kind of person to cheat, especially when he acted so sickly & in love in France. Please update soon!Author's Response: I think the problem is is that Rose is extremely biased on all her opinions of the characters. I think if you should take anything away from reading this, it should be that you shouldn't always trust someone's character judgement. Rose is particularly blinded by her love for Teddy - it makes everyone else (including Scorpius) look less than great and it makes Teddy seem way too good to be true. And in this case, he definitely IS too good to be true. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
This is really cool, i like the ideas. Update quickly!Author's Response: thanks! the next chapter is my favorite, i put the death eaters in ;) Report Review
awww that's awesome! Please update soon so i can see what happens to James and Lily they're so cute together! Report Review
This sounds awesome, i really like Lily! Please update soon! xAuthor's Response: Thanks, I am trying to make her sound spunky but am having difficulty. I am working on chapter two now, but it may take a while, cuz they always find something for me to fix before validation. Report Review
i've been following this from the start and i think it's awesome. Everytime i see you've updated a new chapter i get all excited! Please keep them coming! I'd love to read a longer chapter but if it means you update quicker short is okay too!Author's Response: Thank you so much! My chapters are getting a bit longer, this one is the longest so far and the next one is even longer! Though it's only a short story so they'll never be more than around 2000 words :/
I've already written the next chapter so it should be in the queue in the next few days :)
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This is really funny please post more soon! Report Review
That's awesome! I love the storyline and the length of the chapters. The only thing is the massive spaces between each paragraph are kinda annoying coz u have to scroll down a lot. But other than that please update soon!Author's Response: yeah, sorry about the spaces, but for some reason hpff won't let me take them out! :/
sorry about that and thanks for reviewing! :)
-jenn :P Report Review
That's really good, it sounds like an awesome storyline. Can't wait to read more! xAuthor's Response: thanks, good to hear you liked it! next chapter will be up soon, i promise. Report Review
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