Another wonderful chapter, thank you! And I am so happy that you are now posting more frequently. (: Can't wait for the next chapter, should be interesting.. Report Review
I just read through all the chapters and I really-really like it. ^___^ I am glad that you are writing something like this.
Pippa is like me in a lot of ways, so I somewhat find support in seeing someone else who thinks the same things that I do.. eh, and I also like to clean when I am stressed out. Everything has to be in order!
Hm, I don't think I have much more to add.. other reviews already did a very good job with it. I hope you get a chance to update soon! Report Review
Yay, finally, a new chapter ^_^ I was so afraid that you had left the story behind.
It really was a sad chapter, but like the last reviewer said, it helped to move the story move forward and make idiot Siri understand his brother isn't as bad as he thought.. naw. I guess you have to make sacrifices from time to time. Report Review
I really liked this one ^^ But I really wish that things would get easier for them, they have suffered a lot.. will be waiting for the next chapter. (: And congratulations on your mom getting out! Report Review
I can't believe I just finished 72 chapters in such little time.. I lately discovered your story, and I really love it. Decently long chapters, characters stay in character and otherwise well written. (: I really hope that there will soon come another chapter. How long are you planning to make this?Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure about the length, at first I was going to have 40 chapters, but then that changed as I added new plot lines and so forth, so I can't say as there is still lots more to come, including the birth of the babies!
Thanks for reading, I should have a new chapter up soon. Report Review
It was really annoying in a way, but of course, that is what Mary Sue stories always are, and considering that it was a challenge, you did wonderful.
One thing that confused me a bit was the flow of the time. If your plan to was to make it like it usually is in bad fanfics, then towards the end, it was good, but at the beginning, everything went by too fast. What I have noticed reading all kinds of bad fanfics is that the time goes fast and slow, in a manner of 50 pages of dialogue and descriptions that happened in a split second and then jumping to ten years later in the story. Uh.. I hope I managed to make it understandable. ^^
But all in all, it was quite good and I enjoyed reading it.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I took your thoughts to heart and adjusted the time issues. Hopefully, this will make it a smoother read. Report Review
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