This was incredible! I loved it! I'd always pictured Rose like this, getting the pride from Hermione and the jealousy from Ron and them exploding in such a negative way inside her that she couldn't control. You painted such a clear picture of her and what was going in inside her head. Amazing!Author's Response: Okay, first of all, I'M FREAKING OUT! You are an AMAZING author and I love Girls and Sectioned!
Second, now that you mention it, that is indeed the case. And thanks so much!
-Akansha. Report Review
I loved this. It was so different to most of the other stories i've read on here. It was much more... raw. Closer to the bone, I guess. It tapped into a fear that i'd never even heard of before and put it into a situation so by the end of it I felt like I had the phobia myself. Very, very well done.
It confused me a bit at the start, the quote threw me off a bit as well, but by the end it all clicked, and the quote made perfect sense and I genuinely felt like a light bulb had just switched on above my head. Well done with that too. It's a very comedic line in the film and to make it work with such an emotionally complex and raw story is amazing.
I don't really know what else to say apart from the fact I adore this piece in every way and would like to thank you for writing it.Author's Response: Hello!
So I really wasn't sure about how the phobia would come across - honestly, I hadn't heard of it either before I was set this challenge - so that's a relief.
I love messing around with quotes and context, and while I do love Mean Girls, I love my angst better. Doesn't work for everyone, obviously, but I'm glad it works for you.
Thank you so much for this wonderful, unexpected review. Report Review
This sounds absolutely wonderful! I love the way you've portrayed Al, Rose and Lucy, I think this is the first story i've read where those three Wotters make up a friendship group, and Ivy sounds marvellous too. I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Merci ;) I hope you like the rest of the story too! Report Review
This is so beautifully written. Report Review
I love this so far! I'm going to keep on reading. c: Report Review
I'm really enjoying this so far! I love the idea of Rose and Scorpius having things to teach each other, and i've never read a story on here that has a story line/story setting quite like this one.
I look forward to the next chapter! 10/10 and bookmarked!Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far! Thank you so much for the review! I really wanted to do something different. Report Review
That was amazing. I loved it so, so much.Author's Response: thank you so much for your review! Report Review
I just read this straight through during an all nighter and i'm in love with it! I love the characters, the plot so far, everything! One of the best things is that you didn't dive straight into the romance after 3 or so chapters, that you developed everything and GAH. IT'S SO PERFECT! Report Review
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