{reviewid: 2786805, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
14th May 2013:
A lynx maybe or a cougar
Author's Response: Close one, but she is not either :) x
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4th April 2013:
I love it!
You so perfectly capture the heart of a girl thats lost and alone. Of a girl that has everything except the one thing she needs so badly.
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1st April 2013:
I really like the story, but there are some serious wording issues. Like puppies for eyes and hamsters for I'm assuming lips. It makes it really difficult to follow what's happening in the story.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you so much for bringing that to my attention! I hadn't even noticed, which is crazy because I read my chapters twice before submitting them. I'm fixing them as I find them and again I'm so sorry for the confusion!
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30th March 2013:
I keep rereading this story because I am absolutely in love with it. It's short simple and so sweet. I'd love to read about their lives down the road, but I think it's perfect as is!
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9th March 2013:
Oh my Merlin! I'm in love with this story! I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Brilliant, glad you like it! :)
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{reviewid: 2771856, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
20th February 2013:
Love love love! I'm absolutely in love with this story especially with Sadie.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! And, yeah, a lot of people love Sadie in this story. ^_^
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10th January 2013:
Please please please tell me there's more to this story! I absolutely love it!!6
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9th January 2013:
As always amazing! Lee's letter had me cracking up. Im wondering if Lee's showing up is a premonition of things to come. Especially considering Fred and Hermione letters had just mentioned hiring help. Could Lee be that help? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love Lee Jordan...just as a character he's so funny and just like the twins are he's quite charming! Well you might just be psychic or maybe your not! All will be revealed in the coming chapters...as soon as I write them! ;)! Thanks a million for all the lovely reviews and as always all the endless support! Thanks again! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2756804, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
7th December 2012:
Fantastic. I'd love to read about what comes next for them. This is a really good story. I hope you write more. :)
Author's Response: I was considering making a second part for this story, but I'm not really sure yet. (: Thank you so much for reading.
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{reviewid: 2756306, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
4th December 2012:
I love it :) I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're still enjoying the story and still leaving such great reviews! The rest is coming so don't you worry but it may take a very short while for me to finish up the next chapter since I've only just started! Thank you so much for the awesome reviews! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2754044, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
23rd November 2012:
OMG LOVE IT! I can't wait to read more.
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{reviewid: 2754042, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
23rd November 2012:
ok so I'm in love with this story & dying for an update. Please PLEASE PLEASE! I have to know
a) who ginny cheated with.
b) Hermione's reaction & most importantly
c) does Hermione get her happily ever after with Draco?
Author's Response: Aww yay I'm so glad!! I shall update within the next couple weeks or so, I promise! :)
Some of your questions might get answered in the next chapter, we shall see! ;P
~Mischief_managed18
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{reviewid: 2753372, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
19th November 2012:
I'm in love. I read the entire previous story tonight & all that there is of this story. Please I'm begging more, more :) I can't wait to read the rest.
You're doing a great job with the complicated relationships and hinting at what could be. I can't wait to see if the things I'm guessing at will come true :).
I have one suggestion though. Before submitting read back over it. I've noticed a few times that names tend to get switched around it's usually pretty easy to figure out what you mean, but it can be hard at times.
All in all I love the story and can't wait to read the rest.
BTW I'm writing a story too (Lost Maurader[sp] Love) If you get a chance check it out and let me know what you think.
Author's Response: im so glad :') Ill be putting the next chapter up sometime early next week or later this week- Im done typing it!
thank you so so much! And I love guessing at ships in stories so I hope you're having fun too haha.
Yesss I know about the name thing because of the two gens so if you see any mistakes, do let me know but I usually proof read it unless I'm in a real hurry. So ill check it out (:
thank you so much and Ill check it out when I get the time! xx
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16th November 2012:
Love it, but I'm kind of hating Ginny at the moment. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! After that chapter I think everyone is hating Ginny but if I'm honestly I actually love Ginny as a character but it was all in the name of a bit of drama! Thanks so much! I won't keep you waiting too long don't worry! I should finish the next chapter soon and I'll update especially for you as soon as I have! Thanks again! Hope you continue to read, review and enjoy the story! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2752059, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
11th November 2012:
more need more! Please!
THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY :) I think I may actually be in love :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is on its way up!
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{reviewid: 2749191, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
29th October 2012:
Fantastic! Love it can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll get it up soon!
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{reviewid: 2681286, reviewer: 'HPismygodson'}
4th April 2012:
ok I love your story. This is one of the few that I've read that doesn't make Ron look like a horrible guy. Please keep posting.
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4th April 2012:
Lilypotter1307~
This is a great story. You're story line is so different then most of the ones I've read that take place during the seventh year. I love that you've made this story more real especially since so many women experience miscarriages. My mother had one herself before she had me before the year was over I was born. You're story is so realistic.
In a previous chapter you asked for suggestions. I wouldn't change a thing with the relationship between Harry/Ginny & Draco/Hermione. My suggestion has to do with Ron & Pansy. I think they need to be taught some sort of lesson. Maybe they fall for each other or they get in some serious trouble & it's Draco & Hermione that save them.
I really love your story.
HPismygodson
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I wanted to give it a realistic apsect for the fact that life aint all roses there is some heartache and pain. i really do appreicate it. i have been stuck for how to continue my story but over the past few weeks and months i slowly getting ideas.
Please keep reading.
LilyPotter1307
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4th April 2012:
This story is amazing. I love how you brought back the Amortentia. You're doing a great job with this story I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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4th April 2012:
Clumsy,
I'm Jewish and I love you're story line. I love the diversity class. I think it's a great story line and it's definitely different then all the rest of the stories. I love that you're story spends more time focusing on their live's as a whole and not just having them wrapped up in each other. I can't wait to read the rest of your story.
HPismygodson
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am loving this story as I'm writing it.
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3rd April 2012:
omg this is amazing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is one of the best stories I've read on here.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. Glad you liked it, all though if you look there are some way better writers here on this site, lol. You came in at a good point the ball is rolling and hopefully it wont take long to post the rest up asap. Thanks again ~S
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3rd April 2012:
omg I am in love with this story. Please please please keep writing. If you're still thinking of doing a follow up please do. To many of these stories end with them getting engaged. None of them continue on to their wedding and beyond.
Author's Response: Thx, and trust me, this will not end as an abandoned story, I happen to be in love with it also. The sequel idea, well I'm still wrestling with it, I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
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