omg i seriously just wasted a whole day catching up on being summer. damn you and your awesome writing powers! now how am i going to get my ap euro essay done?

on an unrelated matter, you know what i noticed about summer? she hates it when people pity her, but shes rather big on the self pity. not that she doesnt have a lot to feel bad for herself about, but i think that sometimes she can let people feel bad for her without assuming that they are judging her.

This is in no way a comment on your writing, your writing is ten zillion times better than anything i could do, exhibit a my fanfic, but i am merely making an observation about summer as a person.

Keep being amazing
Bethany

Author's Response: how are you going to get your ap euro essay done indeed? poor, poor you. ahaha, but i'm glad that you enjoy being summer enough to spend the day reading it :D and thank you :D

exactly! ah, i love it when people realise things that i've wrote in but most people don't realise. she hates it when people try to give her some sympathy but she's always moaning herself about how rubbish her life is. exactly, with james, he isn't judging her, but she doesn't even like to talk about it because she always thinks that james is going to laugh at her for having to deal with so much.

don't be ridiculous! i'm sure your writing is fantastic. as soon as i've finished answering some of these reviews i've let build up then i am going to go and check them out :) and you got your observation just right ;)

thank you so much!

ellie :) xx

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I like it it is different but in and intruiging and want to know more way.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing this- it's prompted me to actually update anytime soon *hides* :) You will know more soon!!

-LWG

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no no no no no no! Fix them soon please! (James and Summer that is)

Author's Response: yes yes yes yes yes yes! i will try to fix them as soon as possible, i promise.

ellie :) xx

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I like the storyline so far. That said I don't think it would be the end of the world to use a contraction. People don't really say things like "I will" that often. Also, you should proof-read a little more. There are a lot of sentences that don't make sense. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Alright, thanks for the review. I'm going to proof read it and maybe I will find a beta-reader. :)

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