My heart is completely melting here! The ending is so sweet and cute and ugh, i loved it! I'm so happy they're together and with nothing to stop them or get in the way (well, if you forget the fact they will be on the run but that is just a little hitch!)
I didn't think it was possible to love Viktor anymore but you have proven me wrong! I kind of knew he would take the blame because he loves Rose too much to let her go down for it but the way you have written it is just amazing.
And as for Rose, you have completely turned my opinion of her around. I never used to like Rose an awful lot and used to avoid stories with her in, usually because of the cliche of her and Scorpius together (i'm being hypocritical because i put them together in my story but that's another matter!) so when i came across this story, i was so reluctant to read it as it was Rose centred but it was one of the best decisions i have made! You've made me like Rose and i think only a really awful Rose story would make me change my mind again!
While i'm upset that this story is over, i'm so happy you finally finished it and you should be really proud of it! Your writing skills are just incredible and i could definitely read your stories over and over again. I would most definitely recommend this story to anyone and i can't wait to read more of your stories!
Congratulations on an amazing story!Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tears! I'm so glad you liked the ending, and the story overall. I tried to make Viktor "worthy" of the sacrifice Rose would have to make to be with him in the end. And it's so cool to hear that the story changed your opinion of Rose a bit. I tried to write her in a way that I really thought a person raised by Ron and Hermione might turn out.
Thank you again for reading. I plan to start working on After We Fall again now that I've finished this one if you're interested. And thank you for the wonderful review! Report Review
I'm completely and utterly speechless at this moment in time. Words cannot comprehend what is running through my head.
I did not expect it to be Regina, i had completely forgotten about her! But now i remember her and i hate her. HATE HER I TELL YOU!
I can't believe you've done it again. Two cliffhangers in a row? I feel like boycotting this story but i have no willpower whatsoever, i am seriously addicted now.
This chapter was seriously amazing, i've read it twice now and i am still jumping up and down with anticipation for the next chapter. How dare Regina try to kill Rose! Just because she can only get fame by writing saucy novels for bored house-witches doesn't mean she has the right to do that!
I'm going to stop ranting/praising your amazing skills and i am now eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Update soon!Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad it was a surprise! I was hoping people wouldn't see it coming but at the same time sort of think back and go, yep, she's evil enough for it. Sorry about the second cliffy in a row, though. Hopefully you can forgive me since the next chapter is the last one and all questions will be answered.
Thank you for such a nice review. The rough draft of the next chapter is already written, and I hope to have it posted in the next few days! Report Review
You can't leave me hanging like that!
Apart from the cliffhanger, i loved it although it does make me sad that the book is finally written, i feel like it could mean that any minute and their relationship could fall apart and i don't want that to happen because i am now an avid Rose/Viktor shipper! But then i'm glad because Rose will finally have her book out and i want her to do well...conflicting feelings here!
I also want to know what Viktor's surprise was...you're getting mean by leaving these things untold!
Amazing writing, as per usual. Your skills make me unbelievably jealous! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tears. It is a little sad that the book is written, but it's also supposed to be a really exciting time for Rose. So many possibilities in front of her. And it makes me so, so happy to hear that you like the pairing. I know it's a bit unusual, but I always hoped that by the end, readers would be routing for them as a pair.
Gah! Sorry for all the cliffhangers with this one. And the ones in the chapter that follows! But thank you so much for the review. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! Report Review
So, i have just read all 8 chapters in succession and i am seriously hooked. I haven't laughed that much whilst reading a story in a long time, i enjoyed having aching stomach muscles because it was so completely worth it. The muggle references are hysterical; James Herriot, Thomas Hardy, DH Lawrence, Katie Price (if that one was intentional, then i salute you!) ...i absolutely love spotting them! This story is so witty and amazing that i need more. More i tell you!
I may have just become a little obsessed with Archibald!
Ps - Your writing is incredible! :)Author's Response: This review properly made me grin and announce to my flatmates the glory of humanity. Thank you! I loved slipping in all those references (and that one was intentional) and I'm so glad you appreciate them! More soon :D Report Review
This story is absolutely amazing! Why i have never read it before now, i don't know but now i have and i don't want to stop! Usually i'm not the biggest fan of Rose and most Rose stories annoy the hell out of me but this is a different story! I would never have even imagined Viktor Krum and Rose together but they work so well! And i love the fact she is naive but can still hold her own in the world! And as for Krum, well i would happily be in Rose's position. I'm so glad he is flawed and not perfect, it's the flaws that completely draw me to him. Anyway, enough of my rambling, i love this story (if you hadn't already guessed) and i can't wait to read more!
PS. You're writing is amazing! :)Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, tears! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I think they are both pretty flawed characters, but in a way, I think that makes them well-suited for one another. I'm glad you're enjoying them as a pair.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice review! Report Review
I don't usually read Percy/OC stories but i was pleasantly surprised by this and i find myself wanting to read more!
I absolutely love the letters at the beginning, it's a refreshing change to a beginning of a story and i think it immediately says a lot about the character's, especially Penny and the way she feels.
I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review. Your comment on the letters was really welcome as I was rather concerned about whether or not they were distracting from the story.
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