Ooh! Can I have a cupcake...hmm...possibly with some icing on top...vanilla? xD.
Anyways, I should get on with the review. I cannot stress the fact that I despise Bellatrix. And I am guessing when she said that Draco was staying with all of them, she meant the other death eaters...pretty obvious.
I really want to know more about this X person...who is she exactly...as this is a version of Beauty and The Beast, she must be the witch that tries to teach the prince a lesson...but is she someone we know or will she just be known as X and nothing else.
I am just get more and more curious about the things that are happening in this fanfic thats all, because it's so engaging!
Hopefully, maybe Hermione will figure out what needs to be done so that Draco will learn his lesson. And before we know it...they will be together! ^_^
Anyways, update the next chapter as soon as you can!!! ^_^Author's Response: Pshh of course you can have a cupcake! Do you have a preference as to what kind of cupcake it is? Aside from the vanilla icing of course? :p
I do as well, that woman is a loose canon and loves to push people to the edge and beyond and she's just not a good person at all. It does, but Draco doesn't know *which* Death Eaters it means, which is what makes him nervous, I mean it would be one thing to have Goyle's family staying there and another entirely to have Greyback in his house.
Oh gosh, I cannot wait to reveal who that woman is! Took me a while to come up with a suitable character and I'm quite excited with what I've chosen, but more on that to come. :p
I'm so glad that you're excited, because I'm getting more and more excited with each chapter and it's nice to know my readers are enjoying it as well. :)
*sigh* let's hope so! ;)
I shall update pretty soon hopefully, this coming chapter should push the story forward, so we'll see. :)
Thanks for the lovely review,
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I am itching to read the next chapter! I found this chapter a little funny: the part where Hermione asks Draco where he is hiding them and he tells her that in the cupboard...he has hidden his broomstick which was not even out yet! ^_^ Update as soon as you have finished with ur studies! Good Luck! ^_^Author's Response: Hahaha i loved writing that confrontation ^^
I just got a chance to come on and update Bloodlust and Ive finished the next two chapters of TRTL so they'll be up as soon as I can manage!
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Oh my god! You totally had me on edge there! Seriously! Draco being yaken away was really unexpected! But I knew that there was something going on with that Ace character...you wrote him really well, in my opinion. And...I KNEW IT! SHE HAS FEELINGS FOR DRACO! STILL DOES AND ALWAYS WILL! I hope Draco gets saved soon! And then, Hermione and Draco get back with each other soon! (though obviously not straight away). I see you soon...on your other stories which I had been waiting to read for so long! ^_^Author's Response: Nobody seemed to expect Draco being taken away! Like actually! I thought it would be obvious!
Thank you ^^ Ace would've been charming if he wasn't a serial killer -.-
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You are finally back with this story! I am so happy, I was so happy when I noticed that this story had been finally updated! ^_^ So...Draco! What the hell did you kiss Hermione for?! He shouldn't have done that, we all know that he has feelings for her but that was really uncalled for!!! Hmmm...I am wondering about this Ace character...I dk why...but I find him interesting
..looking forwards to the next chapter! (: Report Review
I am just eagerly waiting for the next chapter...so update soon!!! ^_^ Report Review
How dare that weasel do that to Hermione!!! I swear...I wouldn't mind doing an Unforgivable on him. Anyways, loving the story so far! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to hear about the new baby. ^_^ Report Review
Awww! You're not going to make another one for this story? Le sigh...wel, it doesn't matter because your story is still top notch. ;) I was so happy that Draco finally proposed ! And now I am eagerly waiting for the wedding!!! Update soon! ^_^ Report Review
Your chapters are quite short, yet they are so good! How do you do it? Seriously...loving the story. Draco and Hermione get their little alone time together. So cute ! I can't wait to here Hermione's answer! Hoping so badly, it's a yes! ^_^ Report Review
Oh my god! Loveeed it! A lot! Hermione's sad about Draco not visiting her and Draco's stuck with Daphne...poor guy. Hopefully, things will go great in the next chapter
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I really like the way Hermione and Draco bicker. I find it quite funny. Though Hermione might be different from all the other way people portray her, i really think this is a very interesting portrayal and I like this Hermione very much. I wonder how Draco.will get her back. Hmmm...well, thus far, I am enjoying this fanfic and I hope that you get to update very soon! ^_^Author's Response: Im so glad people aren't hating on me for portraying Hermione the way that I did :P Thank you so much ^^ xx Report Review
I loved the chapter! I was glad that Draco convinced Hermione to attend the party, that way Hermione got to confront Ron and Astoria. The look on Ron's face...i can just imagine it right now. How rude of him to call Hermione and Draco's son stupid! I can't believe him! The nerve. Anyways... i am eagerly waiting for you to update! Soon! ^_^Author's Response: Aha, I know! Hyperion is probably 10 times cleverer than Ron so HA.
Thank you so much, I'm glad you loved the chapter and I promise I will update as soon as I can :D Report Review
I am looking forward to reading the next chapter! Enjoying this story very much! Interesting plot you have come up with...^_^Author's Response: I've got myself a new system for updating, hopefulky it'll stick until at least one of the stories is finished (: Report Review
Hey you! I see you are back with yet another interesting plot. Hehe. Hermione getting revenge on Draco for all those years of insults and humiliation; yes Hermione. You show it to him. Hmm...I wonder what Draco's got in his Slytherin mind, but I can tell it is not going to be pretty for Hermione; after all, he is a Slytherin. All I can say is - Hermione, watch out. Anyways, I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter for this fanfic, and Bloodlust. Update soon! ^_^Author's Response: Hii (: Yess haha, thank you so much ^^
Why doesn't Ron understand that this is all his fault? Honestly Ron, if you had just told Harry and Ginny the truth about Astoria and yourself, you wouldn't be in this.position now, would you? Well anyways, I am looking forward to reading more of this story! ^_^Author's Response: Errr, I know right, if he had told the truth then everything would be fine (stupid Ron) I'm glad you like it though :)
More should be up in a few days :D Report Review
I totally love this chapter! I knew they were going to change into each other. Ginny even winked at Hermione, she must have known about the exchange! But yh, I will awaiting the next chapter, so update soon! ^_^Author's Response: i will try, im currently writing it, but its hard, as i am on holiday, so its difficult to try and fit in writing, but i should hopefully post it up sometime this week, just depends on validation time, (as you would probably know) so, i'll be as quick as i can :) Report Review
The bakery scene was funny, in my opinion. I just can't wait to read more! ^_^Author's Response: will be up soon xx Report Review
Why doesn't Draco just go back with Hermione!? What is wrong with him!? He abviously likes her! Anyways, I hope you update soon. Can't wait to read more! Report Review
Please let them stay together! They are just so perfect for each other! I absolutely love this story! All this betrayal, bitterness, love, anger, every emotion there is in the world, is shown so beautifully in this fanfic! You really are a great writer. This story seems so realistic, and that is what makes this concept so amazing. You have everything so beautifully planned out that it is just utterly amazing. I cannot wait to see what happens in the library with Ginny talking to Theo and Blaise, Pansy. The next chapter is going to be an interesting and exciting one for me, and I simply cannot wait! ^_^ Please update soon!!! Report Review
I wonder what X is going to tell Hermione. And I also find it so cute that Draco is eager to see Hermione and get away from all this Death Eater business. Will be looking forward to reading the next chapter! Update soon! ^_^Author's Response: Bum bum bum! I guess you'll find out, won't you?! xD Gahh I love Draco so much! I have the next chapter written up and it should be posted in the next week or so. :) *crosses fingers* Thanks for yet another lovely review. :)
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Aww, this was a really sweet one-shot! I loved it. :)Author's Response: thank you :) Report Review
Oh my god! THIS CHAPTER WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME! I LOVED IT TO BITS! ^_^ I really liked the way you you stuck, in your own way, to the book/film. It's a really brilliant fanfic of it, I have to say! I loved the part when Hermione spins, she seems like she's floating in the air; really cool. Also, when Jeremiah asked Draco if he had any tricks up his sleeves, and then he says, "No, that's just Granger for you.". Also, the part when Hermione and Draco are staring out of that window, and when they are talking. There a little Dramione moment there; a little one. I now, cannot wait to read about the actual games. Now, that, I'm pretty sure, will be truly amazing! ^_^ Update soon!
MsJacksonMalfoyMellarkAuthor's Response: Thank you thank you thank you :D Ahh I loved writing this chapter because i finally brought in Dramione a bit :') see you next chapter! Report Review
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)Author's Response: be up soon! xx Report Review
Update the next chapter soon! Enjoying it so far! :D Report Review
Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God! Hermione wants him; HE wants her! THAT IS SO ADORABLE! THEY KISSED! THEY KISSED! OH MY GOD! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER THE MOST OF ALL! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!Author's Response: MJMM,
I love your enthusaism, it does my heart good! This has been a love time coming for me and I wanted to make it right. Thank you for the amazing review, I loved it very much!
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I'm glad that Hermione and Astoria seem to be getting along with each other. Anyways, I just really want to thank you for reviewing one of my stories! ^_^ I really appreciate it! -About your story, I can only say that you are doing a great job with it and that I will be reading further for sure! :DAuthor's Response: MJMM,
Thank you for review again. I'm glad you like the Astoria and Hermione "friendship". I think Astoria is protrayed as petty a lot but if she was truly in love with Blaise she would be happy for Draco.
Thank you again for the review. It means a lot.
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