Great Chapter! I was wondering, who did you put on your banner as James, cause I'd like to use him for my story! Let me know and update soon!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Hey there! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Jonathan Bennett is the actor who's James in my banner :)
Thanks again, and I will try to! Report Review
Wow! This is really intense, but really really good! I love it! You should write more stories like this one!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thank you :) I love reviews! Like so much! I think I will be writing more stuff like this, I've decided fluff isn't all I like to write :D Report Review
This is a really good story so far! I'm always interested in Sirius Black stories! Just one thing (I know you'll probably hate me for this, since I don't like it when people criticise or critique my work, but) I think people would enjoy the story more, if the chapters were longer! PLEASE don't hate me! Anyway, great story! Update soon!
WildCat Report Review
Really Great Chapter! I loved it! Hollie is so funny! I love her! Anyway, Update soon!
WildCatAuthor's Response: hi! Haha your penname has immediately made me think of Dom's cat Pythagoras lol! coincidence huh?! Thank you for reviewing! ;) xx Report Review
Really good story! I'm enjoying it tremendously! Its also really well written!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you like the story so far, because I literally cringe whenever I reread the first chapter. I hope you like it as you keep reading :)
-Rebecca Report Review
Great Chapter! It's really interesting! Update soon!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. Report Review
Great story! I really enjoyed this chapter!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thanks! :D Report Review
Great story! Is Astra actually a witch? Wait, then surely she would have got the letter? Anyway, is her dad a witch! That's my guess!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thanks :D You'll just have to wait and see about Astra. All shall be revealed sometime. I know how it's going to pan out, I just don't know how to get there yet... Chapter 4 is in the queue so should be up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing :D Report Review
I liked this story, but it was a bit short! Are you going to write another chapter?
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thanks so much. I do have plans for adding several flashbacks to this story, about Percy and Audrey's relationship, but I'm having some writers block about it so it might be a while.
Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Mystique Report Review
Great Chapter! It was so moving! At one point I actully thought I might cry! Update soon!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Great Chapter! I was wondering, which pratronus was Jade's? Was it the sheep dog? Oh, hang on! A ram's male so of course hers was the sheep dog!
Anyway, Great Chapter! I still think it's Albus!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Ya, her patronus is a sheep-dog :) its my fav animal :) Thank you so much! I've entered a bunch of challenges so I'm not sure when the next chappie will b out :D soon I hope! Report Review
So, I heard you abandoned this story! It's really good! If you don't ever take this up again, will you tell me who screamed and why? Was it because of Frisco? Let me know if you take it up again!
Again, great story!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Oh, I'm taking it up again. You will figure out who screamed, I promise ;) Chapter 3 is about 30% done, and I have a plot. So it should be out soon :) Report Review
So, I had to come back and write my review on this chapter! It's definately Al! The navy boxers were the clue weren't they! Also, at the party in the Gryffindor Common Room doesn't mention Al! And I've decided James and Jade would not be good together! It's just to obvious! I don't think she should end up with Fred either, cause they are just not right!
Please keep writing!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Don't worry, I've got a sketchy lay-out for the next chapter. I promise I'll write it sometime before the end of the week! Report Review
Hey again again again,
I'm going to have to stop writing that eventually! So, I thought the mystery person was Albus, but I'm not sure!
Please keep writing more chapters soon!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Maybe, mebbe not :P Report Review
Hey again again,
So, I have already given you my oppinion on who Jade should be with, but I was thinking! Is the mystery person Albus?
WildCatAuthor's Response: Well, I don't want to give away anything too soon, so you'll just have to keep reading :P THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING :D It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy :) Report Review
Really good chapter! Louis is really funny! So, the Marauders win the match! I don't like James very much, since last chapter especially, but I still think he and Jade should get together! Or Jade should be with Louis!
Hope you don't mind me saying that!
WildCatAuthor's Response: I love Louis! Like, so much :) Report Review
I like your story alot! You say you don't know who Jade should be with? I was thinking it could be James or Albus Potter! I know they hate eachother, that's why it wouldmake a good twist! However, you may have already picked someone!
Again, I like your story. Jade's tough, specially when James is being sexist!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing :D Report Review
That was a really good story! You should definately write more like it!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you like it. :)
I'd love to write more of it, but I just don't know where I'd go with it. You already know who killed him, and all that, and I think I just like it as a one-shot, for now at any rate.
Thanks so much for the review though! I'm glad you like it, as it's fairly different from my other work. If I find inspiration to continue it I definitely will. :)
- Adele :) Report Review
Great chapter! Just wondering, how many chapters are there going to be?
WildCatAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing again! In my current plan, there are 20 chapters, and that's unlikely to change :)
-Naida Report Review
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