Ah YOU BETTER HAVE A NEW CHAPTER UP SOON! I'm like waiting on the edge of my seat!! Do you want me to fall???Author's Response: :O haha im sorry! I just am so busy with everything and a bit of writers block and I'm a beta too, also, check out my new story, "The Wound of Remembrance" which is a plot that jumped into my mind! Report Review
Aw.that was SO SAD! I loved it! Beautiful...It was very realistic I felt like it was very possible and could happen to anyone! I was about to cry for Hugo.
Love, LylaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review :) Report Review
Oh my goodness that was lovely! I think you portrayed Lily's thoughts and feelings beautifully and really brought out the stress and tension of the situation she was in. She was going against everything she knew for her love and her family of friends. You showed a brilliant piece in which Lily shines brightly in a heroic light. I think your grammar was really good. I couldn't find any mistakes which usually I do but this was amazing!!! It was a sweet and sad one-shot that went straight to a person's heart and touched it. The way she wants to protect her friends even though she can't really fight well is so courageous. I don't even know what I'd do in that situation! Keep writing your stories.
Love, LylaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!
I'm glad you like my Lily. I wanted to give her a different perspective than usual, and this is what popped out!
And I try really hard to work on my grammar and make sure it is what it needs to be.
Thanks so much for the review!
~Cassie Report Review
Um well ur my beta but the thing is I don't exactly know how to pm on hpff I suppose it's on the forums so my account on the forums is under the same pen name do contact me!Author's Response: I'll try, do you have MSN? Or any other contact way? Report Review
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