Such a great story :) I love it. Laura's such a lovable character and I cant wait to learn more about her. Curse myself for not finding this story sooner! It's pretty original and that's what I really love about it.
I was really disappointed when there wasn't a next chapter. I don't know if it's really the awesome writing or I'm just a sucker for Oliver/OC stories.
Nah, It's the awesome writing :)
I cannot wait for more Laura and Oliver interactions! And his friends sound very interesting and funny. I'd love more of them too. Maybe they get to meet Laura and totally embarrass Oliver in front of her.
By the way, Oliver sounds very believable in this story and I love how you did that. You write him very well and thank Jesus Laura isn't a Mary-Sue. She's not one in the slightest. :)
Cant wait for more!
-Biggest PotterheadAuthor's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for the lovely review! :) It's okay, there are a lot of stories on the site that I'm sure I was reading too, but what with over 70,000 up, that's just not really pliable! :P
I try to update once a month at least now, since I have four WIPS that I try to update that often and it's a struggle, but I really am going to see this story through, so don't you worry! :) I, too, am a sucker for a good Oliver/OC story, hehe!
Yeah, that really will be fun, won't it! :) I'll be sure to fit in a scene with them for you soon! ;) I'm really glad you said that about Oliver and Laura as for me, as a writer, characterization and believability of a character are of the utmost importance to me. I was actually worried that in this chapter, Laura was behaving oddly, but I'm glad you thought she was alright!
Thanks again for such a day-brightening review! I really appreciate it!
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