Awe- so sad. I feel for her, truly I do. Report Review
It wasnt terrible, though my favorite part of the whole thing was your authors note. Lol.
I like it so far And will probably read more, I'm sure.Author's Response: Haha. I'm so scared about writing the trio...
Anyhow, thank you. :) Report Review
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate it! Report Review
I like it! Will definitely continue to read. Report Review
It was short lived but undeniably captivating.
I wasn't sure who you could put into it, and I must admit it was that mystery that made me want to read it in the first place.
Marvelous, job!Author's Response: Hi, and thank you! I'm glad you thought it was mysterious as that's the main aim of the fic :) thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I'm sorry to disappoint, I didnt get the significance of the dates or place of birth, But this could be an interesting story, i look forward to later chapters. Report Review
beautiful, truly beautiful.Author's Response: thanks so much for your thoughts! Report Review
Well written, a tad confusing as to who "I" is, but after reading your authors note, I am rather okay with that. :D Anyway... I like Liberty as well, though she doesn't seem like a Liberty to me. perhaps Justice or... Athene, which means intellect. -nods- Either way, can't wait to read. Report Review
LOVE!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much :) This is definitely one of my least favourite stories, and I really want to go back and clean it up one day, so I'm so glad that you liked it how it is, lol.
~Soraya~ Report Review
I don't really know what to say. The story itself is thought provoking. But like some of the other reviewers, (and yourself by the looks of it) I think that it could be better. Still I understood it, I myself think like Sirius does in this fic - like you did that night.- Anyway, well written, and a beautiful concept.Author's Response: I haven't reread this in years, but yes, I'm sure it could be better. I was young when I wrote this, if that's any kind of legitimate excuse. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a review! Report Review
Very well written, partially confusing: But very very beautiful.
I love it.Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, I suppose I wanted it to be kind of confusing because I really wanted this mysterious sort of atmosphere to be created, but I hope it wasn't too confusing! Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
I've chapters 1-4 and i enjoy them wholeheartedly! It's a very unique idea and I cant wait to see how it turns out!Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it very much. I hope you continue to enjoy. :) Report Review
Amazing! I want to know more. Report Review
In your first sentence you have ear where air should be. And in one of the scorpius you've replaced the o with a p. -nods-
^ just had to put that out there lol.
But! I like it, it's just a moment it what could be a bunch of great moments! I kind of want to know how Hannah died. 0.0 and what happens after the graveyard? And all that other stuff in between. Lol good job.Author's Response: Thanks! I'll edit this soon. x] Report Review
I think you did a good job! I enjoyed the read anyway, and agree with Lilly (and you) it only takes a word. -nods-Author's Response: Hi! Yes, one word can be so incredibly powerful if you think about it. Life changes, i'm pleased that you connected with that idea. Thank you so much for taking the time and reviewing this! Your words mean so much to me! Take care. Report Review
Well dear, I've read both chapters, and currently, I like it.
BUT (because there is always one of those) it wasn't as smoothe as I thought it could be. A few times I had to go back and read again, but maybe that's just me. I always find that reading the story out loud helps with that! Anyway, I'll be back to find out what happens. Report Review
Very well written, and you do indeed make the pairing work well.
I didn't read it, I listened to the podcast.
All I kept thinking as I listened was, "wow, this is beautifully written, I should go read it!" I've never truly been one for podcasts... lol.
So in light after I tell you that i LOVE LOVE LOVE, how this is put together, I'm going to go read it for myself.Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad that you listened to the podcast! They are all so awesome so you should definitely go back and listen to more, even if you don't think they are your thing, we have something for everyone :D
Aww, thanks :D I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I hope you liked reading it too! Report Review
I love it, I adore it, I will definitely reread it!
You're astounding.Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for this. It totally brightened my day because of the unexpectedness and the loveliness!
xChar Report Review
I didn't cry -has a heart of stone- But the tears are sitting there, just barely forming. It's well written, and true to heart.
Brilliant.Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Report Review
Wow, simply wow.
You do a miraculous job of writing pain. I love this story, it's beautiful.
My hats off to you.
~ NeverKnew.Author's Response: Thank you for your review :) I'm really glad you liked this one -- pain is difficult to write, so it's great to know you thought I did a good job of it.
~Soraya~ Report Review
Genius. It's enticing, and beautifully written.Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much :) I'm blushing, I really am. I'm so glad you found it enticing and beautifully written -- this story gave me a lot of grief, so it's lovely to know you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for the review, and I hope to see more reviews from you soon! (Pssst, I have another femmeslash up if you want -- Flicker and Fail. It's Katie/Leanne, only three chapters long, though at the moment, chapter one has been posted, and I'd love to know what you think of it. /shameless self-promotion :P)
~Soraya~ Report Review
I like it, and yet I'm not sure I really do. It's a brilliant read none the less, and written very true to character. Well done, I'll be sure to read more of your stories :DAuthor's Response: Well thank you! I was very nervous about this since it was out of my comfort zone and I had never written Neville as the main focus. Always as the secondary character. Thank you for the review. Report Review
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