I love it!!! I love Molly/Dexter. This made me happy! :)Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it! I loved writing about Molly and Dexter :D Report Review
I cry everytime I read about Sirius/Remus, but I do feel such a gut wrenching sadness.
But, this story made me cry. Actually, it made me sob. I loved it.
Fantastic job.Author's Response: Awh thanks for leaving me such a lovely review! Sirius/Remus is just heartbreaking and horrible and ssooo god, so thank you very very very very very very very much :D
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I must say, I will always wonder about Hollis. Hollis and Lee, and their happy little family :P
Thank you for the closure. Fred may have been her first love, but he wasn't hers. He was free, taken before his time. In his death he became a distant memory.
I think that one of my favourite lines from P.S I love you, will fit with exactly I'm attempting to explain here.
"You made my life, Holly. But I'm just one chapter in yours. There'll be more. I promise. So here it comes, the big one. Don't be afraid to fall in love again."
(side note; loving how her name is Holly, and her name is Hollis :P)
Fred didn't live long enough for anyone other than Hollis. She was his love, but he wasn't her one any only.
P.S; Poor, dear, Al. :DAuthor's Response: You're very right. Hollis was Fred's only love, but Fred was not Hollis's only love. It would be unhealthy for her to dwell on Fred for the rest of her life. I imagine it would hold other men to impossible standards, constantly comparing them. He'll always have a special place in Hollis's heart, but she has moved on to find happiness. :)
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I've read many stories. I've cried and got angry, and continued to read. I must say, "So Listen..." Has been the best story I've read so far. Thank you for making me cry, and thank you for making me hate you. I loved this more than I can say, and I wish I didn't. it would mean they'd have a happy ending, but reality isn't always about happy endings.
Fred. I think you captured him perfectly. I've never read another story that seemed so realistic. Great job. Fred has always been my favourite character. Always. George coming in second, but Fred always seemed a bit more competitive. A bit more outgoing, I would like to think I could tell them apart, if I had been on paper in a story(:
I used to want to believe that Fred and died without love. Died young, forever twenty. But, that's unrealistic. It makes sense that he had someone, before he could have someone. It someone makes his death seem more tragic, much more realistic.
Again, thank you for the tears, for the hate, and thank you most of all for giving Fred this story. For making sure he wasn't another name, another number. Thank you telling his story, ensuring that he indeed, had one.Author's Response: *jaw drops* I can't even tell you what an amazing compliment that is, saying this is the best story you've read yet.
I prefer Fred over George, too (obviously :3). And you're right, he's more outgoing. I'm currently rereading Goblet of Fire and JKR seemed to give him the wittier lines. He's a bit rougher around the edges than George, too, and more quick to prank.
Thanks to fanfiction, Fred has many, many, many stories and will never have to just be another name or number. I am so, SO grateful and appreciative that you chose to read this particular one, and that you left me such a lovely review telling me your thoughts. Thank you for the tears and the hate, and for being a fellow Fred-lover. :) Report Review
I simply love this story! I have to tell you, I'm getting so sick of "happy endings" I like tragedy. Tragedy is real, it makes you think. Even though it they were together in the end. (which I LOVE how it ended) It was still tragic. Thank you for such a great read! I hope you write more!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, I couldn't bare to give them a completely sad ending, but at the same time, I didn't really want to give it a happy ending, as the situation wasn't really appropriate for a happy ending. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks. :) Report Review
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