I like this story. It is pretty cool, plus I think its funny that his memories are with the people he has had as you describe "experiences" with. I love you and your stories, they are nearly as addictive as Rowling's! 10 out of 10! WOOT!Author's Response: Thanks :)
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What I want to know is where's Ron and Hermione? They can't have given up too!Author's Response: ROn and Hermione's whereabout will soon be revealed :) Report Review
I am with Mrs. Black here, I hate to think about Harry dying, but hey, sounds like a great story. I am in the middle of reading your Founders series, so hurry with this, so by the time I finish with those I can just read this all at one time!Author's Response: Thanks for the R and R. I hope you will like my Founder series. tell me what you think about it and how I can improve it :) Report Review
Hehe. I don't know if I'm just insane and I am the only person who does this, but when I hear certain songs, I think of certain books, fantasy worlds, stuff like that. And ironically, the title of this story is the name of a Coldplay song that makes me think of Harry Potter. Probably just a coincidence, but just I'd thought I'd throw that out there. For a first fanfic, exploring an area as unknown and unpredictable as the pairing of Malfoy and Hermione is quite outgoing and adventurous. But you've got a lot of competition out there with all them romance addicts that think the darkest kid in the series should date the most do goody one. Being more of a complex, actiony writer myself, I may not be the best for advice on how to spin a luvvy duvvy tale, but hey, I try to help.Author's Response: (: You're not insane. I do that all the time. Songs and books and fantasy worlds, I mean.
Yeah, I know. There are a lot of good stories out there. Well, I think the problem with a lot of romances is that nothing really.. erm happens. Apart from the obvious 'oh no we can't be together, I'm going to push you away and not tell you anything anymore and then I'l break down and get into trouble with something', they always try to turn it into a.. relationship since 3rd year or soemthing. (x that's just my opinion.
Well, I'll check out your story, if you have one ofc.
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Good, but I think you kind overloaded too much info into one chapter, and Bill and Ron? I was having some trouble seeing the two of them full on assaulting Harry, for whatever reason, after all he's done for the wizarding worldAuthor's Response: Thanks for R and R. Hopefully, you'll like the rest of the story. A few more chapter and I am sure you'll understand Ron and Bill's motivation Report Review
Alright, now the Lupins and Crabbe are dead. I like how you included Lupin returning to aid Harry. Sweet. But be sure to get the story moving soon.Author's Response: Yes, the Lupins and Crabbe are dead. And thank you - I included that because I'm adhering to canon for as far as canon takes us. Aye-aye, the plot should be moving in one direction or another fairly soon.
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I really like the idea of this story, and I think you could go really far with it with some advice and guidance from the fanfic community. I like how you introduced Fred and Colin right after they died at the Battle of Hogwarts. Keep working on the story, dont give up!Author's Response: Thank you, PotatoLord. I eagerly anticipate your advice and guidance.
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I'm sorry, but I just don't like this story.Author's Response: You read all of that and then decided? I usually decide within the first chapter. Well done for sticking it out and giving me a review anyway. I value your honesty and advise you not to read on :D Report Review
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