Oh Artemis and Apollo, can't the two of you just do what us readers want you to do?! Well. Here I am raising both of my hands. I mean, come on! Who turns down a nice, muscular, smexy guy like that? Gah. Buh bye now. At least until the next chapter. Toodles. -Sarah

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Hello again!! Still loving and laughing the story!! Fav quote/scene: when Jason is singing. Badly. Just so funny. Also when Missy names the beetles to avoid awkward conversation. Hilarious. Hugs and butterfly kisses, your Sarah (LOLOLOL)

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OHMIGOODNESS I'M LAUGHING SO FREAKING MUCH!! I love Artemis! She's so funny!! And my favorite quote for this chapter has got to be right after Quidditch practice. "Oh, yes. I am a master at all that involves the English language. You will all bow to my mad speaking skills." I just cracked up at that part. Love the story, hun. :) -Sarah P.S. I also really like the part when Dom is giving Missy scarring information

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Cool story!! Let me tell you, just about every chapter had me cracking up. Which, unfortunately, looks rather odd to everybody else in the room. Anyways. keep going, girlie! :D -Sarah

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad it made you laugh.
Haha, that's happened to me many times too... I think quite a few people left the room wanting to book me a room in a mental hospital with the looks I was getting :D
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, next update should take about this much time or less.
xx

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NO!! ME NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NOOOWWW. Anyways... Love the story and please for the love of chocolate post another chapter soon!!

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This is a great story!! I really like Roe and how you portray Lily and the Marauders and everything! Post another chapter soon, because I'm aching to find out what happens next. Awesome job so far! :D

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Ahh! I can't believe the story is nearly over!! I think you are an ahmazing author! Hugs and butterfly kisses, AlmostInvisible :)

Author's Response: I know! It's hard to believe. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I wouldn't mind being your beta, but I'm going to be away from Internet for most of July but I can do it whenever after that. I'm pretty good with grammar and stuff like that, so if ya want me ya got me! :)

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Hi there, just me here with some constructive criticism. First off, I'd like to remind you that there's a spell checker where you put in the text of the chapter for a reason. Second, all it takes is a 5 second google search to get the correct spellings of the professor's names. Third, if Anna has been around scary people for almost all her life, wouldn't you expect her to be a little traumatized? In the story, she just slips right in to normal life with little more than scary memories. Also, in JKR's books, werewolves get tired and somewhat irritable before and after full moons, whether there's Wolfsbane involved or not. I've read some of your other stories and enjoy your writing and feel this story could be improved. Thanks.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot! I'll be sure to go back and fix these things when I get a chance, and implement these ideas into the story. I'd glad you've enjoyed some of my writing! Thanks for the constructive criticism, I haven't gotten very much, and this is great! thanks for taking the time to tell me!

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Adorable chapter AND an AVPM reference? OH YEA BABY. COUNT ME IN. Keep up the good work, you supermegafoxyawesomehot person, you. BECAUSE I'M WORTH IT.

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks so much! Thanks for leaving me such an awesome review!!

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I really like this!! Your grammar is good, you have a promising story line, you introduced your characters well, you're awesome!! Please, keep updating! (P.S. your story title is really pretty) :)

Author's Response: Ah you are too sweet! Thank you! I really hope you continue to read! I just love it so much when people give me feedback, so thank you so much!

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You're a very creative person and an amazing writer and I love reading your stories. Can't wait to read more!! :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoy my stories and hope you continue to! :)

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Exciting beginning!! Can't wait to read the rest! :) -Aeryn

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I'll be posting soon :)

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You should continue with this, it shows promise. :)

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Hey there! I just wanted you to know that I enjoy your story a lot! Keep going with it doll! You have a unique plot and I'm finding it very refreshing, so many of the stories on this site are built from the same mold so this is great! :)

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Hey! Nice going with the story here, you totally have me roped in. :) Keep going with this, I think it's really interesting and I want to know what happens!!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much :) I'm glad you're interested and i really hope you return for future chapters, Thanks for the review :)

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Oh my goodness I LOVED this chapter!!! Draco and Astoria were so funny! I adored it though :)

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You should totally write a sequel for this!! I really want to find out how it all works out, plus, I love Nellie and Izzie. They make me laugh a lot and then my parents give me strange looks :) thanks for all the time and effort you put into this, I think it was very much worth it :). Thanks again! -Aeryn

Author's Response: Hey :) I'm not sure about a sequel yet! I still have to finish this story but I'm going to see what I feel after I'm done with this story. I'm so glad you like the story, it makes me happy and I'm happy you like the characters! I put a lot of effort and thought into them, so I'm always pleased when people like them. Thank you so much, I hope you'll stick around for future updates :) Thanks so much for the review and I hope you have a great day! Xxx

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I really like all the facts and whatnot that you have in this story. I also really like your reference to The Cask of Amontillado, it's an interesting/creepy story and works quite well in the context you use it. Same with the changelings. A lot of people on this website don't really put a whole lot of extra research and thought with their stories and I want to congratulate you for proving the mold wrong. Great job so far!

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