Ahhh!! The plot thickens! So good! What's up with Benjamin? Will Sally-Anne ever get the story from Prof. Lupin? So many question, to be answered later. Keep on rockin', girl! :)Author's Response: I felt like I should rub my hands together like an evil genius while writing this chapter. All of your questions will be answered later on in the story! (Of course, you know that!) Thanks for reviewing! It's going to get even better really soon! Report Review
Wow!! Great job on this! Like I've said before, I'm not really A fan of Hogwarts fanfics, but you are doing a fab job keeping it canon. And Padfoot has made an appearance! And this bit with Crookshanks was entertaining, he isn't a ver nice cat. Can't wait to see what happens next!! :)Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you're still enjoying the story! (Hogwarts era is still intimidating me.) Thank you for sharing your appreciation! It was fun writing Padfoot- I hope I made it clear enough that he recognized Sally-Anne as Marta's daughter. I will definitely try to post a new chapter before April! :) Report Review
Ohmigodness this is really quite amazing. Between this chapter and the previous chapter I just had tears rolling down my cheeks. Granted, that's not always saying a lot because it doesn't take much to make me cry, but it was very beautiful and touching and sad. I'm not really sure how you managed to make me feel so sad, but you did and it was pretty cool. Anyway, this is a very sweet story and you did a lovely job. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) It's the highest compliment on one's writing to hear that it produced this kind of effect in others. Strange as it is to say, nothing makes me happier than hearing that a sad chapter made a reader cry! Means I did something right. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
"Those who don't learn from history are doomed to repeat it." FORESHADOWING. I wonder what Lupin will do now that he knows that Sally-Anne can see Benjamin as well. And I think it's really cool how she can draw notes as pictures. I really can't draw, at least not quickly. Anyway, another great chapter!! Can't wait till next time! :)Author's Response: Too much foreshadowing? It's one of my favorite lines and holds too true for her family. Lupin will certainly have to be careful, both because of Benjamin and because he doesn't want to scare a student. I had actually wanted Marta to be good at art, but I never had a chance to flesh out that skill in Friend, so I reassigned it to Sally-Anne here. Thank you for sharing these thoughts! They are much appreciated! Report Review
Yay for the story!! :D I rarely read Hogwarts-era stories so this is something new for me, too! I am really excited and curious for this lovely story, because, these are pretty original and it's awesome to read something that actually has some thoughts going into the plot. Kudos to you for being different! Also, this interests me 'cause Sally-Anne is in her third year and just about every fanfic on this site is about the character in their final years at Hogwarts. And I'm just wondering if Remus will recognize her or something. So, until next chapter. :)
P.S. You're forgivenAuthor's Response: I hate to admit, but I don't really read many Hogwarts-era stories either (authors who specialize in Hogwarts-era, forgive me!). But I wanted to keep writing Benjamin so I'm conquering my fear of writing in the same era as the Golden Trio. And I agree with your other comment about practically every story being fifth through seventh year based (to which I am guilty of doing myself until now). By writing in third year, this story will be different in that it won't be romance-driven. I actually have a mostly clear vision of where I'm going, so worrying about the plot won't be a problem. As for Remus, you'll definitely get an answer by the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing (and sorry it took me sooo long to respond!)! Report Review
Hi! This story is a whole lotta fun to read. :) I really like the spazzy Sirius and the witty, sarcastic Remus. And I think my favorite part of this chapter is when Sirius' hair is turned pink. And when everybody notices that he still has a pink spot. Good stuff there. Anyway, thanks for the chapter! :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like reading this story! Pairing Remus and Sirius in a battle of wits, albeit an unfair fight, helps me move the story forward just because I love seeing what they'll do next. I used the pink hair prank back in the first three chapters and couldn't resist using it again. Thanks for letting me know what you like! Report Review
Please continue with this story!! I like it a lot and hope that you will post more chapters! :) Report Review
HA! That kid... So amusingly oblivious/ignorant of how simple stuff works. Brown eggs aren't defective, personally, I've always thought that they are much cooler than white eggs. Anyway, another fun chapter! :DAuthor's Response: haha, thanks for the awesome review! hope you keep reading! Report Review
Cool story, brah! ;) Pretty excited to see James' story. Nice to see how incredibly modest he is. hehe To the question... Hmm.. Amortentia. Probably cookies, minty stuff, and chocolate :) I'm going to go read the next chapter, so I'm out! :DAuthor's Response: I'm excited to write his story! thanks for reviewing!
Thank you thank you thank you!! You've done it! You've finished it! Yay! Thank you so much for not ever giving up, even though you had your doubts, I have really enjoyed being with this story through the last several chapters and knowing that my reviews are helping and encouraging. :) As for a sequel, I am totally ok with not having one, this is awesome enough. Thanks for the ride! :DAuthor's Response: I know! I finished! Still can't believe it half the time, because this story was like... my life.
And of course I didn't give up! I had put too much effort into this story to ever do that, despite my doubts. And yes, your reviews definitely helped me continue. I definitely wouldn't have finished without the amazing encouragement I got :)
I'm happy you're okay with not having a sequel! But yeah so I kind of started one anyway... I don't think I'll post it, since it kind of ruins a lot of stuff that happened in this story, but I might end up posting it anyway for my own enjoyment.
Thank you so much for reading the story :)
-Rebecca Report Review
Reading this story makes me really like Peter as a character, which makes knowing how he turns out really quite depressing. I also really like Aly, and am excited to see their relationship grow, but sad that it started for all the wrong reasons. Otherwise, great job! Please keep updating this! I only just started reading this and I'm already excited for more! :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review,
It means a lot when I open up my profile to find a new one even when I haven't updated in like a month.
I'm glad you like Peter. That means I've been doing a good job. And honestly, I think its a bit more than depresssing knowing how things end ;).
I've been working on the next chapter one word at a time. My life has been crazy lately, and I simply have had to put this on the back burner for a little while. I hope to have the next chapter up really soon though, so fingers crossed :)
-BW Report Review
What a great story!! I can not wait till the epilogue comes out! Thank you for posting this even though you were sick, I think this chapter, the last official chapter, was well worth the wait. Thanks again. :)Author's Response: Thank you I'm so happy you like the story! And since it took me wayyy to long to respond the epilogue is already out and the story is officially over. Thank you for sticking with it and reading it and for reviewing :)
-Rebecca Report Review
I like where you're going with this! Very creative! Please keep writing this! :) Report Review
Another great chapter! Thank you for going ahead and posting this even though you had your doubts. You are a great writer and I have very much enjoyed reading this chapter. Don't be worried about whether people will like your next chapters or not, if they decided to not like what you've written then it's just too bad for them. Don't give up! :)Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm so happy you liked the chapter :) And i'm so flattered you think I'm a good writer.I can't help but worry about what other people think seeing as I'm writing this story with the intent of people wanting to read it, but thank you for giving me confidence XD
Thank you so much for a lovely review!
-Rebecca Report Review
So. Much. Cute. !! Anyway, it's been a while since I've read this story so I forgot just how amusing Shaylee's inner monologue is. It just cracks me up :) please update sooner rather than later! :) Report Review
Fun chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :) Report Review
Hey! I really enjoy your story and hope that you intend on completing it. Don't give up! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm currently extremely busy and unlikely to make this a priority writing-wise but I'm so happy to hear that you like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
And I say again, Freddy is AWESOME!! And the dance scene was cool as well :) -Sarah Report Review
Fred is the best character in the entire frickin story. Enough said. Report Review
I do not like the character Sarah. Mostly because we share the name Sarah. And also because she's a little conniving... I'll let your imagination fill in the blanks here. Yeah. -Sarah Report Review
ARTEMIS YOU ARE SUCH AN IDIOT. SERIOUSLY. I'M REALLY NOT LIKING YOU RIGHT NOW. WHY MUST YOU PUT SUCH AN ADORABLE GUY THROUGH SO MUCH PAIN AND INNER TURMOIL. (LOVE THAT WORD) I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO WALK AWAY FROM THIS STORY AND NOT LOOK BACK BUT MY WILL POWER IS WEAK AND I'LL PUT MYSELF THROUGH THIS MENTAL ANGUISH ANYWAYS. BYE. SARAH. Report Review
1. LOVE THE FROSTING SCENE EVEN THOUGH ARTEMIS IS CRUSHING OUR DREAMS AND HOPES WITH HER STUBBORNESS. 2. SILVER OR BLUE I'M NOT REALLY SURE. 3. PLEASE KEEP WORKING ON SPEAKING IN RAINBOW CAUSE I REALLY LIKE THAT STORY. KTHANKS BYE SARAH Report Review
Yo yo yo!! I think manwhore Matt should be introduced to the fine torture art of bamboo up the fingernails, while being attacked by a pissed off cat while having to do the Double Dream Hands dance in a shimmery pink tutu. In front of the school. I rest my case. Sarah. Report Review
Aloha!! Imma skip right to the chase... FAV SCENE: When they all start IM'ing and right before when they are trying to grasp how a computer works. Makes me laugh when they tell about their typing problems, as I'm quickly typing this without looking at the keyboard. Oh wizards. Until next time, Sarah Report Review
Hola! I don't find it overly sadistic that you enjoy making your characters lives miserable. I'm working on a story and have no problemo with making their lives crapola. FAV MOMENT: when Artemis predicts fog. So much LOL'ing. Peace out, Sarah Report Review
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