omg so good. Can't even express how happy I am that Rose is stuck in the hospital wing - she's finally going to get better again!
I love how you've developed her eating disorder, so well portrayed.
And she loves Scorp! Aahhh ifkl;sdjfa;lsdhAuthor's Response: :0 you're happy she's in hospital?! Kidding, it's awesome coz she's getting help :)
Thanks for your continued reading and reviewing, it's really amazing how you've kept up with my story... so thank you! Report Review
gah you are great. lovely new story. update!Author's Response: Hehe hello to you too. I shall, i shall.. thanks for reading (another of my stories!)! Report Review
Yay another chappie! So sad, I wish Rose could get better soon.
So cute when she couldn't speak to Scorpius properly. Also, the headmaster sounds awesome.Author's Response: I know, me too :( but she'll get there. Here's a little secret - the chapter that you just read is the start of her getting-better journey!
Thanks for another lovely review! Report Review
Wow so much progress in this chapter. They were both really sweet, even if they were rather drunk.
It was kinda weird that she practically made him take her clothes off, but like you wrote - she wasn't thinking straight and stuff, so all is forgiven.
Can't wait to read the fallout from this one...Author's Response: I just wish they could do it sober, but you're right. It's progress, and surely it can only get better from here on.
I really struggled with writing that scene because it was so out of character for Rose that I didn't want her to be a completely different person. I'm not sure if i succeeded in tying it in, but I did my best.
Next chapter is just waiting to be validated. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Haha I loved the Monster Mash! An oldie but a goodie. This chapter was great. Can't believe how long it took me to realise that you've updated several times.
I wish everyone could just get together like theyre supposed to! You've paired them off so perfectly.
Will we see more of Jake? It's a shame that he's sort of faded into the background, he was interesting.Author's Response: Isn't it a great song? Couldn't resist throwing it in, suave ball or not!
It sort of sickens me sometimes, how I paired them off. It was actually unintentional at the start! Can't go back now, though.
Jake will come back into it. I sort of forgot about him for a little bit, but he shall definitely come back.
Thank you for yet another awesome review! Report Review
Adorable. So many ups and downs in this story! But I feel that this chapter is a definite step forwards. It was so lovely! I want to be Scorpius and Rose! Although, rather impossible in so many ways... anyway! Loved it!Author's Response: Thanks, I love this chapter. Everything is starting to come together!
Hehe I want to go to Hogwarts - also impossible! But we can dream and we can write fan fiction! Report Review
Oooh great chapter. I was about to coment on a few inconsistencies, but then I read 'Courtney's comment - I'm glad you're aware and you're going to edit it. But the only reason i noticed is because i love this story so much and actually think about what the characters are doing! But really, this is really well written apart from the characters doing things, well, out of character.
I loved it!! Can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: I'm unbelievably thankful for those readers who are paying so much attention and helping me out! I can't improve without you guys :)
Thanks for reading, the next chapter is waiting for validation! Report Review
Another chapter!! So quick with the updates!
I love this one. You've really developed Rose's eating disorder in a believable way. But I do hope you turn it around soon so she can get better.
You locked them in the bathroom! I laughed out loud at that. Someone is bound to be killed :P I can't wait to read part 2! It's gonna be great.Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for being such a dedicated reader, it means so much to me.
I did indeed lock them in the bathroom - it was good fun! Lucky the Weasleys are such a big family and they have a huge bathroom!
I just posted part 2, so it's not far away ;) Report Review
I love how your characters are very believable, and your writing has like, no grammar or spelling mistakes. Its such a nice change from other authors! I'm desperate to know what has happened between sohpie and scorpius - what about poor freddy!Author's Response: Another compliment from someone about my characters - thank you!
Soph and Scorp are going to be explained in two chapter's time, so never you worry! I loved writing those chapters, can't wait for you to read them
Thanks for reading and reviewing, it really makes my day! Report Review
Things took a bit of a turn for everyone in this one, but its been building up for a while hey. Its so good, can't wait for more! Hope Rose gets better soonAuthor's Response: It has been building up - since the very first paragraph of the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, i'm so glad you like it Report Review
My oh my, you've written another story!! This makes me veeery happy. I love what you've done so far. Lily is so.. everything that I'm not. She's awesomely stuck up and rich! Can't wait for more (but please don't neglect Love Rules!)Author's Response: She's so opposite of me, too. She's a bit intense, but i'm loving her so far Report Review
Gosh this made me giggle at times. But poor Rose - Jake is a loser! I thought that he was going to be lovely and make her fall in love with him instead of Scorp, but no. I just want to hit him. I hope Rose is okay! Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Jake is a knucklebrain, he drives me crazy. But its okay, because he's pretty much out of the picture now! Thanks for your review, the next chapter is currently in the queue! Report Review
Giggles all round for this chapter! Scorpius is such a hero, how can she fail to not see how awesome he is?!
Oh lala, Hugo's gf is a mess..Author's Response: I think Hugo's girlfriend had no idea what she'd get from Rose, can't wait for you to all find out! Hugo deserves far better.
Thank you for you review! I love Scorpius in this one :) Report Review
Gosh I'm back again. Can't get enough of this story.
You're right - your endings are getting much better! Overall, the story is very readable and very awesome.Author's Response: Yay you came back! I'm loving writing this story, so I really do hope my writing is improving.
Thank you for reading, there is more on the way! Report Review
This is very cliched, but dont be offended! - aren't all stories these days full of cliches? I love it.
One thing that is really standing out to me - Rose seems very focused on exercising and eating?Author's Response: Hehe yeah, cliches keep this fan site rolling!
Glad you've noticed Rose's eating etc - very important to the story ;) Report Review
Great story so far. Maybe the ending was a blunt though? But so far, it has awesome potentialAuthor's Response: I appreciate the honesty, thank you. Hopefully you'll find that the story improves overall as I practice writing more. I'll keep that in mind! Report Review
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