ASDFGHJKL!!! YOU'RE VOLDEMORT RENCARNATED ARN'T YOU? WHY GOD WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT? WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? CANT YOU JUST LET THEM BE HAPP? DEAR LORD. IM SO MAD AT YOU AND THIS STORY. LET JARIA BE TOGETHER. PLEASE. SCREW JETT. IM SO MAD RIGHT NOW. WOMAN PLEASE. FIX THIS IMMEDIATELY.

MY FATHER WILL BE HEARING ABOUT THIS!!

Anyway now that I'm done ranting. great chapter. Update soon!!

TheGirlOnFire xx

Author's Response: AKDLHGHAKLG!!! I ACTUALLY AM. CAN'T YOU TELL? I CAN'T LET THEM BE HAPPY BECAUSE CLEARLY I AM THE EMBODIMENT OF SHEER EVIL. RAWR. FEAR ME. JETT IS A VERY NICE PERSON. DON'T HATE ON HIM.

NO HE WILL NOT!!

Ahaha, thank you very much ♥

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ASZDCGVDHHRHJKVJNLVDF!!! HE TALKED TO HER. we almost. Aldies making progress. YAYAYAY. they need to get back together now. Great chapter.

Update soon!

Hearts and kisses.

TheGirlOnFire

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*Chants* go on a date with James, go on a date with James. ConDom broke up. No. They were ridiculously cute and they were great together. Get them back to gather again. Pretty please with a cherry on top.

Summers mother is pregnant. Duh duh duh. Well that's what I deduced from the blatantly obvious clues you dropped. Who's the Daddy. Mr Lancaster or has Mrs Lancaster got her self a younger boyfriend too.


OMG!!I'm totally on Summers side. I wouldn't support my friend if hey were dating an abusiv monster. Penny completely over reacted. Summer was just curious. She didn't have to say all those mean things.




James asked her out! That's big. And he was soo cute about it. I love James.

Also I loved how you showed that there wasn't any reL hard feeling between Summer and Jack because otherwise it might have been awkward between them.

Don't ruin the progress that Summer and James have made because seriously they deserve to be happy. Sj don't ruin it.

P.S. Sorry about the lack of organisation that went into producing this chapter.


P.P.S. Do Summer and James have a couple name. If so what? Is it Jummer or Sames or neither. Because it would be easier to right those than Summer and James.


Update Soon

TheGirlOnFire xx

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I very much dislike Dan. Who does he think he is? Breaking of their engagement through a letter then coming back and expecting he to take him back with open arms? Seriously woman, you need to get rid of him.

Well, if this going to be like the usual cliche'meetingof the ex-boyfriend/fiance in secret then getting caught' James is going to overexaggerate things and case an arguement. Dan is going to act all cocky. because well that's how things always end up like in these situations. Mix it up a little.

i love yuor story though it's really good so-far. but don't make things complicated for Aimee and James like you did for Summer and James. (thats right i'm reading that one too)

Anyhoo update soon i really wanna know what happens next.

TheGirlOnFire xx

Author's Response: a lot of people very much dislike him... and then there are people who very much like him, and even one person who tells me she loves him in huge capital letters. dan is stupid enough to think that because aimee was going to marry him, then she was willing to wait for him forever, and forgive everything he's done because that's what she's always done.

this story is cliche enough sweetheart, i don't really need to add much more in. i can't really remember what happens, but i do know that he doesn't cause an argument, and he doesn't overexaggerate things ~ he's a pretty chilled out bloke. and dan is a little intimidated by jamesie, tbh ;)

ahaha, well thank you so much for reading both of them! this story is a little harder to write, but i don't think it's going to be as complicated as being summer.

thank you :)

ellie :) xx

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FriedChickenisha and Watermelondrea lol that's from 60 ghetto black names. i loved that video.
good so far. tres funny

Author's Response: Ooh yes! I love it too! Though that reminds me I probably should have put a disclaimer on there. I glad you like it. I have heaps of good ideas that you should hopefully find funny in future chapters. xxx-C

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