This is different from anything I have read so far; different is great! I did feel kind of like it was a little rushed in some places. This seems like a lot to happen in so short a time. Just relax and enjoy creating your story at your own pace.
I look forward to seeing what happens next! ^_^
Happy writing!Author's Response: I totally agree with your suggestion. I was just worried that people would get bored with it, but now I'm going to work on making it not so rushed.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me :) Report Review
I have enjoyed reading your story, I look foward to seeing what happens next!Author's Response: Aww thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
~Nicole Report Review
Quite simply, I love it. Communication is the cornerstone of any relationship. Happy writing!Author's Response: TalaTiva,
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. And I do agree... communication is the cornerstone... so very important as it can make or break a relationship.
Thanks so much for your reviews. They made me smile today. :)
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I am so glad that they got back together! It is better than any crazy plot twist you could have come up with. Perhaps I am simply a hopeless romantic...^_^Author's Response: TalaTiva,
Awe, thank you! Yes... no crazy plot twist. No one hexed her so they could have her and she wasn't leaving him to 'save' him... blah, blah, blah...
Hopeless romantic... haha! You and me both, hon... to the extreme!
Thank you so very much for your review!
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I am new here on this site, and I am glad that I happened upon your story. I love that you are using mythology, it is an interesting twist. I look forward to reading more of the story!Author's Response: Hey Tala,
Welcome to HPFF. I'm kinda new here as well, (around a month now!). I'm glad that you are enjoying the story,
I'm planning that when this story is completed that I will (hopefully) do the Mythos Series - a collection of stories based on different mythologies (Greek, Egyptian, Norse, Mayan, Celtic etc). It'll be a lot of work but it will be interesting.
I'll also have to finish Heart of the Ocean which is about half way-ish done (on my computer, not whats posted of course).
I hope that you will continue to read.
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I love this. I just read the Star Listener and had to see what else you have posted. To tell you the truth, you wrapped me up in your story so well, that it was a dissapointing shock when I abruptly hit the end. It seems you could have done more with it. However, when I got over the shock of it being over, I was able to appreciate the beauty of what you accomplished with only 500 words. I am officailly your fan! ^_^Author's Response: wow, thank you so much, i rarely get unsolicited reviews so getting two from you has been absolutely lovely. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it and yes it's super short but i'm pleased you thought i covered a lot of ground with just 500 words. Thank you again for your lovely and kind words. Report Review
Hey, I am new to this site, and I happened across your story while exploring. I want to let you know that I love it! It has been a long time since I have done any writing of note, and I think that you went a long way to get me into the right state of mind so that I can get back into it. Thanks so much! Author's Response: Hi, i'm so pleased you enjoyed this little tale, it has been a favourite of mine simply because i adore Susan. I'm also incredibly humbled and pleased by your words and i really do hope you can get back into writing again. Good luck and thank you so much for taking the time to review my story Report Review
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