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Review #1, by LittleBabeBlueAnyone: Anyone

2nd September 2012:
Wow. This got me thinking. Good job. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

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Review #2, by LittleBabeBlueGrowing Up Weasley: A Very Hairy Christmas

24th April 2012:
I really, really loved this story, but there's one problem in this chapter that really irritates me. Can you find it? No? Okay, I'll tell you:
You said, "Three-year-old Ron Weasley" had seen "a handful of Christmases", now, in my experience, three-year-olds do not remember "a handful of Christmases", nor can they make connections and decisions so easily. All of the three-year-olds I know (quite a few), I would not trust with a sticky bun anywhere, much less in bed, under their covers when they are upset.
Sorry about my rant, but it's just my pet peeve, ya know? anyways i can only think of a few words to describe your story they are:

SMAWESOME
FANTABULOUS
DELICACIEOUS
HARRY POTTER WORTHY

thank you...

Author's Response: I do think that it is important for you to remember that Ron is three -- as, of course, you stated in your criticism -- and that as such, he's a bit of an unreliable narrator. In case you don't know what that is, in layman's terms that means it's a narrator who cannot be trusted blindly to tell the truth. A handful is not a set amount, too, so I think I'll leave that bit in there. :)

As for the sticky buns -- first of all, I think it's a fairly safe thing to say that in canon, Arthur wasn't always the most pragmatic of parents (remember how he wasn't mad that Fred, George, and Ron flew the flying car until Molly reminded him to be?). Additionally, Ron's just undergone a fairly traumatic experience, and although he initiated it, I'd like to think his father would want to comfort him with his favorite treat, in bed or no.

I'm glad that you told me that you enjoyed the story otherwise. :) Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review!


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Review #3, by LittleBabeBluePeaches & Cream: Prologue

23rd April 2012:
Interesting take on things. I like your writing style quite a bit. Not the usual crap you find. nice.

Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm happy you like it.


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Review #4, by LittleBabeBlueLife Throws a Punch: This Is The Storm That I Thought Would Blow Over

28th March 2012:
Please let James drop the "Marry me?" bit, it's not gonna work. It makes him seem even more insensitive than he is and ruins the specialness of it. When he really does go whole hog (a room filled with everyflower but roses, hmmm?) it's not gonna be so special anymore... Just a thought. Please write more!

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Review #5, by LittleBabeBlueLife Throws a Punch: I'm The Only Broken Hearted Loser You'll Ever Need

27th March 2012:
"This starts now", Still_Fly you are awesome. Please, just be careful that "Will you marry me?" doesn't turn into a running joke, like "Will you go out with me?" Keep writing

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Review #6, by LittleBabeBlueFailure By Design: Christmas Eve Dinner (Epilogue)

27th March 2012:
I loved your story, but PLEASE! PLEASEPLEASZEPLEASEPLEASE write just one more, teensy weensy chapter! Please! You can't end it there! It's just cruel and unusual!

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Review #7, by LittleBabeBlueOpening Weasley Wizard Wheezes: Opening Weasley Wizard Wheezes

9th March 2012:
Really sweet story. I would love to see if Elliot grew up and become a partner of WWW. If your story goes on, please don't kill Fred, or George. 9/10 keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hopefully there are more stories to come! :)

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Review #8, by LittleBabeBlueDetention: Footsteps and Death Traps

24th February 2012:
It's really great! I love the idea! Thanks for writing this. Please post faster!!! *puppy dog eyes* Please?

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