Wonderful Chap!
I was so excited when i saw you had updated
keep the story rollin.

Slytherin Pride!
I'm one to =)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We Slytherins must stick together. I'm sorry for the wait update-wise, but the plot is really starting to move.

Your fellow Slyth,
Ellie

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Hope you finish the story
Every one got me into hysterics

Author's Response: I probably won't with all my attention focused on another of my stories. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Hope you continue the story soon!
it's really growing on me

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Well. Next chap should be interesting.
poor Talon though.
Sirrah's plan does seem a bit too cruel
though she IS a Malfoy
i like the idea of Sirrah's dress business
quite original

Author's Response: I hope the next chapter is interesting, and that I haven't been building up to it this long just to fall flat on my face and fail. Her plan does seem cruel, but it turns out pretty interestingly enough, I think. I hope. But yes, she is a Malfoy. And she hates Potter. I'm glad you like the idea of her dress business! I don't get to go into it too much, because I just like fashion and clothes and don't have a clue how to sew but it was in the original idea so I am trying to make it work.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

xxEnigmaticEyes16

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Hope this story continues, because i'm loving it

Author's Response: Thank you!!

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wow. `I only see Ted`s face, and how he never even moved to save me.` like the last line

Author's Response: Thank you! He's such a heartbreaker, isn't he? ;)

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love how you do the flashbacks
curious on who Julia is
Continue the story! :)

Author's Response: thank you and i will :) continue reading!
~siren song

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yah. it wasn't your best chapter
Can't wait for the next one though!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.. I was having a really hard time with this chapter, I'm not sure why.. The next chapter has just gone into the queue so hopefully it won't be too long 'til it's up :)

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yay! Remus told! Remus told! Mooney told!
glad he finally did.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah :)

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Like the Al's point of view. You should add more of it

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll think about it . . . maybe. I'm not really sure that there'll be anymore situations where it's needed :)

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UNBREAKABLE VOW?
wow. harsh

Author's Response: Yeah. I felt like beating up my characters that day :)

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Well...Said George As long as were gonna be stuck here for a while... He pulled out some muggle cards from his pocket Has anybody here heard of poker?
Love that :)

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OMG! can't wait for sequel to be finished!
Love it :)

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nice start!
hope this story continues :)

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Love the story!
Keep on writing :)

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Cliffie!!!
keep writing!:)

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Freddy whispered the three words that struck terror into every Hogwarts student's heart:
"Mrs. Norris, Jr."

LOVE IT!

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Love it whenever Sirius wonders what Prongs put in his drink. Like how you make Susan a good quiddich player :)
Write on!

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Love the start.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Like the nicknames by the way.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter is in validation. Glad you like it! :)

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Great start
Write away!

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Hope you plan on continuing the story, LOVE IT!!!

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Hope you plan on finishing this story.
It's amazing
Love the very last sentence.
a good cliff hanger

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That much pills? Doesn't that have some kind of effect?
awesome chapter though.
Love the end at James's POV
:)

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nice story
can't wait for the next chapter!

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love the theme.
please please please continue the story.

Author's Response: Haha Thanks

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