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Review #1, by SweetLittleLilySeer: Four

24th February 2012:
Please update soon. I love this story. Things are going to get a bit awkward between Renee and Chris. I think D.H.G is either James or Albus Potter. Keep it up. It's really good.

Lily

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Review #2, by SweetLittleLilyThis Side of Life - Petunia Evans: If only I could Take it Back...

24th February 2012:
I think this story has a potential to be brilliant.I loved the part with James and Sirus. Keep in mind Petunia is only 12. There were a few grammar mistakes but nothing that can't be fixed. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. By the way I added you to my favorites :)

Lily

Author's Response: YAY! That makes me so incredibly happy!!! And I know!!! I get that critique all the time but I have such an issue writing younger...there's an age change coming up soon so hopefully it wont be as bad thank you Lily for your awesome support!!!

XX
Bella Bug


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Review #3, by SweetLittleLilyUnceremoniously Changed: And then black...

23rd February 2012:
"I loved this chapter. You did a very good job with it.Please update soon. I can't waito see if she is okay,and what James is going to say to her!!!.James is still a prick,but James is James :P Keep it up Bella.

Lily

Author's Response: Thanks Lily for your awesome support!! I'm writing I'm writing but th ideas can only take you so far lol It'll be updated soo I promise!!!

XOXO
Bella Bug


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Review #4, by SweetLittleLilyA Common Interest: Moment 3: The Plan

16th February 2012:
I'm probably boring you with my comments but I must say you're an amazing writer Bella.All your stories are very good.They're very interesting and original.Keep them up. :)

Author's Response: YOU SHALL NEVER BORE ME WITH YOUR COMMENTS!!! I love them all!!! In fact Keep Then Coming!!! haha seriously though to hear that from a reader is the best thing an author could hear!!! Thank you soo Much for the AMAZING review!!! I swear seeing it really made my day!!! I will continue to write but the most unfathomable thing has happened I have writers block on every single one of my stories it's horrible!!! I swear I've written the same chapter about a hundred times and am STILL not happy with it gaahhh! But it will come I promise!!!

Thank you again!!!
XOXO Bella Bug


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Review #5, by SweetLittleLilyUnceremoniously Changed: Simple?... Not so much.

14th February 2012:
I love this story.Please continue.James is such a jerk.Lily's awesome.By the way my name is Lilyanna too. :)

Author's Response: YAY for twinners! Thank you so much for the review it is really appreciated and James has to be a jerk haha because thats just how James is haha

Will continue!!

XOXO Happy Valentines Day!!!

Bella Bug


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