I have to say that this is one of my favorite stories on this site. You are an awesome writer and describe everything in such great detail that i can see everything clearly when i read it. Keep up the good work at please update asap!Author's Response: Thank you very much :) it means a lot that you are enjoying the story! Makes me even more determined to make it as good as possible :P I'll update as soon as I can! Report Review
Please update soon i love this story.please with a cherry on top! Report Review
Hmmm.,how to start.
First off the more of your stories that i read the more i realize you have a true gift of understanding the characters souls. You seem to really get how Hermione's brain works to analyze every detail of every situation. When it comes to draco you bring from within him the heart every fan always knew he had without taking away all of the darkness he fights to rise against. I truly love your stories and believe them to be written quite eloquently. Please keep up with the fantastic work.Author's Response: longlivehpff,
Oh, you found another one of my stories? How sweet of you to seek them out! :)
This was a sad one, with a twist to make it all better. ;)
Wow... your kind words mean so much. I understand what you mean about these characters 'souls'... as I've read some authors that I feel are so in tuned to my take on them, that I've told them they are 'spot on' the way they should've been.
There are many that don't like Draco and Hermione together and only want to see Draco as JKR wrote him in the books.
But then there are those of us who can read between the lines and watch scenes play out differently and pick up on something different... something with depth... of things unsaid and unseen that bring to life feelings and emotions that we wished we had felt and seen between these two.
I am one who believes that Draco's character has so much wonderful and interesting potential... the stories that can be made for him are endless.
It is refreshing to read your words of someone who 'gets it.'
Your review of this particular story shows me that you have a wonderful way with words yourself and I'm wondering when your first fanfic will be posted. :)
I want to encourage you to give it a try and see what happens. Maybe a one-shot first to get your feet wet. It is exciting, I must say. And when you get your first review of it, your heart will soar. I promise.
Thank you so much for your wonderful words. They encourage me along my journey to become an author someday... and I consider them worth their weight in gold, (so to speak).
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Oh wow this is my first review but i just want to say you are a talented writer and i love this story. If i had to take a guess as to the final/key word is my guess would be hermione or forbidden.Author's Response: longlivehpff,
Well first... I love your pen name. Here, here! I do love this wonderfully creative site. The stories are amazing and I love the people here. Regardless of where we live in this world, we all have this wonderful common ground... a love for Harry Potter, regardless if we are the Readers or the Writers.
I consider it an honor that for whatever reason, you chose this story to break out of your shell and write your first review. :)
Reviews are the only 'pay' that us authors ever receive and trust me when I say that each and every one is an absolute thrill. Any compliment that I get means so very much to me.
In saying that, THANK YOU for yours! It really does my heart good as this story is a grand experiment for me... to see if I can actually weave an interesting, fairly complicated story, and actually finish it.
It is a personal goal of mine and feedback gives me the encouragement to continue and makes me feel like someone actually 'cares'.
So thank you so very much for your comment to me as a writer. It means so very much!
Your guess would fit perfectly, but you will have to wait for the next chapter too see what it really is. Gah! I'm so excited!
Please come back for more. This next chapter is turning out to be my most romantic yet. ;)
Thanks so much again, longlivehpff! Your voice is much appreciated!
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