This is a really good plot! Can't wait to read more. UPDATE SOON PRETTY PLEASE!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: Thank you! xxx new chapter is up already! Report Review
wow. this is different! but in a good way. keep writing and update soon!
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Wow. That was...interesting. It's like, after Kat's little comment, I was expecting her to either be ignored, or make Ron blow up again. But he like...deflated. He was like a balloon when you let the air out. SWOOSH!
OMG when Rose said: "Well, I got pregnant end of August", I was DYING! Can you say "blunt"? I dunno, I just found the wording hilarious. But it's good that they got telling the Malfoys about the baby out of the way. HA! I can just see Draco being like: "You did WHAT to Weasley!? NUH-UH. I. AM. SHUNNING YOU!" But he didn't. Hey, at least he didn't kill Rose or Scorp!)
AHAHAHAHA that last line killed me. FUNNY STUFF! Now whenever I can't sleep, imma listen to my parents' convos. Thanks for the advice!
REALLY GOOD CHAPTER AND UPDATE AGAIN SOON! I SHALL BE WAITING PATIENTLY (pshhh what patience? harrypotterluver123 has NO patience!)
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I know! I was planning on him blowing up, but then I thought... Nah. Let's calm it people!
AND I KNOW! Rose doesn't have particularly good people skills. She's great :D Oh and I know, I wanted to be different from most people's perceptions of Draco's reaction.
AND I KNOW! It's awesome. I've been doing it for YEARS! No problem!
And thank you so much! Your reviews really do make my day. I'll try update soon-ish! Report Review
BAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! Oh Dom, I guess that holding a grudge isn't an area of her expertise, is it? No mention on Scorose huh? That's alright. I still have my hope :) And Frenny is sooo adorbs. Like,I just wanna squeal whenever you write stuff about them. THEY'RE JUST SO CUTE!
THANK MERLIN that Summer and James aren't, like, ready to kill each other anymore. Cuz that's juts BAAAD. REEAALLYY BAD. That little Christmas gift exchange thing with them was cute! I do the exact same thing with one of my friends too! And how no one even questions when James kicks the seat when Jack and Summer go to exchange gifts. OMG DEAD. (Haha my friends never question my sanity anymore. They already know it's gone.)
I feel major bad for Summer. It's like, you come home, have to get all dressed up FOR FUDGING DINNER AT YOUR OWN HOUSE, and then your parents are like:
"Oh hey Summer! Got some bad news. We're getting a divorce! And did you hear the best part? Your dad is marrying the woman he cheated on me with. And you're going to live with them. Isnt that great!?"
NO. IT'S REALLY NOT. MERLIN! PEOPLE THESE DAYS. I have no faith in humanity anymore. YEESH!
So I absolutely loved this chapter. With Summer and James at the end! THERE IS STILL HOPE FOR JAMMER YET! WHOOP WHOOP!
Update again soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: i would have to agree with you there ~ holding a grudge isn't one of dom's strong points. nooo, scorose aren't really in this story much. i'm not sure why. they're just there when i remember... they'll be back soon. i promise. scorpy and summy still have their birthday party coming up, anyway :D
yeah, no attempted homicide in this chapter! whoo! they were very cute in this chapter, which is strange because normally they're not cute at all. strange people. i have a friend that does strange things like seat-kicking and spasming for no reason all the time, and no one questions it :P
yeah, i think that would be awful ~ not being able to relax at your own dinner table in your own house.
i know, the audacity of people these days. and her dad actually reckoned that she was just going to agree to live with them. does he not know his own daughter at all? but hey.
yeah, humans are stupid.
i'm glad you liked it so much :D and the next chapter is in the queue, and will hopefully be out soon :D muchos love, my darling,
ellie :) xx
ps. yes, i reckon there is still hope for them :D Report Review
Hi! So this story looks promising! I absolutely adore Scorpius/Rose fanfiction, so I immediately opened this one. Keep writing, because this story has a great start to it. update again soon!Author's Response: Thank you! I actually have a lot of chapters written, this one just took a long time to be validated. I'm waiting on another one of my stories to be accepted, but once it is, I'll submit the next chapter. Thank you for your feedback! Report Review
OH. MY MERLIN. That was intense yo. Like...wow. NONONONONONO! BLOODY NO!!! NOT CONNOR AND DOM! THEY GOTTA BE TOGETHER, THEY JUST GOTTA!!! AND SCORPO AND ROSE!!! I just--gah! You make me not able to decipher my own thoughts!!! But that is a good thing, trust me :)
Okay, lemme just say that the tension between Jimmy Boy and Summer is really starting to piss me off. Yeah, Summer was stupid for kissing Al, but she didn't exactly know what she was doing, did she? Ever heard of the effects of alchohol James? IMPARED. JUDGEMENT. DUH. They need to take a chill pill, and be boyfriend-girlfriend.
I'm sorry, Jack is really starting to bug me. You know those people who are always happy, and they try to cheer you up, but you don't WANT to be happy? He reminds me of someone like that. Yes, they are sweet, but they just need to back up, and let us act like Summer once and a while.
And Al and Natalie? They need to move to Mars and make a colony there to never be seen by the human race again. Because honestly, they are the ones who ruined Jammer (James/Summer. My own pure GENIUS!). And ruining something as perfect as those two must PAY.
As always, BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!! OVER 11,000 WORDS!!! WHOOP WHOOP! Update again soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: 'twas indeed, my darling. well, as much as it sounds like a bad thing that you don't understand your own thoughts, i will rest easy under your assurance that it's a good thing ;) and yeah, poor donner (i don't think the other name is 12+) and scorose. shameee :(
the tension between james&summer is starting to annoy me, sweetheart. they're both being stubborn and stupid and neither of them will bother to look at the other side. summer knows she was wrong, but she doesn't like things being her fault, so it all becomes vair vair annoying and stupid.
jack... i love jack. i say that everytime someone mentions him, but i really do. but in this chapter, he was /far/ too clingy. he is one of those people who are just happy all the time, and as i am quite a miserable person, i can tell you that i would probably hate him if he was real.
al and natalie. urgh. booo. i hate the both of them. they need to fall of mars so that mars doesn't even need to suffer because of them. you know, jammer might be the best couple name they have... jummer, sames? urgh. they must pay. PAY!
thank you so much :D i know, this thing was huge. next chapter is in the queue :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
OMG OMG OMG ROBYN'S A WITCH!! I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT!!! NICE JOB ADDING TO THE PLOT!!! YOOO WHEN JAMES TELLS SPENCER WHAT HE IS, SHE GUNNA FIND OUT THAT ROBYN'S A WITCH TOO!!! Ooo I bet she's gunna spazz and be like "YO ROBYN! WHY YOU NO TELL ME YOU A WITCH?! NOT COOL BRO!"
So yeah was extremely happy when I saw that this chapter was out. Like, I jumped around my bedroom and did a (very embarrassing and never shall be seen to the public eye) happy dance. So yeah, I was kinda pumped. THIS WAS A BRILLIANT CHAPTER, AND PLEASE, PLEASE, PlEaSe UPDATE AGAIN SOON OR I MIGHT JUST SPONTIANOUSLY COMBUST!!!
So, yeah, ILOVEYOUFORMAKINGTHISSTORY!!! See ya later alligator *staged whipsers for you to say "after a while crocadile"* KK bye! Until the next chapter and my next (questionably sane) review!
harrypotterluver123Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! I'm glad that you're so surprised (and enthusiastic!) about the plot twist; I'll admit that I was nervous about it. And you're right; what Robyn did was not cool and Spencer will certainly have some choice words for her because of it. I'm sorry that I'm taking so long to update (especially since you get so excited when I do!) This next chapter is giving me a hard time but I will update eventually - no worries!
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D Report Review
I would like you to know that I think that I'm about to die. Why is that? BECAUSE I HAVEN'T SEEN AN UPDATE OF THIS AMAZINGLY FUDGERING AWESOME STORY IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS!
ASDFGHJKL; I THINK I'M ABOUT TO EXPLODE FROM ALL THE PENT UP TENTION OF HAVING TO USE MY (non-existent) PATIENCE!
So, if you would be so kind to update ASAP, I would literally get down on my hands and knees and kiss the ground you walk on. Yeah, I just love Spencer's word-vomit and James's sexyness and your writing THAT much.
(Like, I'm holding my arms out to their widest, and THAT'S how much I love Wonderland. Pretty intense, I know, I know. Nuff said? Kay, I'll stop rambling.)
Love your most crazed fan,
harrypotterluver123Author's Response: Fear not, harrypotterluver123, chapter 15 has been in the queue since Wednesday! (And thank you! I'm so glad that you like my story so much :D) Report Review
O this looks really good! Update again soon! Report Review
hi! so this looks really good! i'm guessing james broke up with pippa because she was too "fat"? i hate it when people say that word. i can safely say that it is not in my vocabulary! so yeah keep writing this! update again soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: thanks : ) well sort of, but you will have to wait for the story to unravell a bit before you can fully understand what happened and all that stuff haha. Thats very good! unfortunately it is in too many peoples vocabularys. i will try my hardest too update super soon! Report Review
HOLY. MERLIN. that was intense. like...wow. i knew ron was gunna freak, but...wow. ahhh at least he didn't avada scorpo!
BUT THE WHOLE FAMILY KNOWS NOW! OH. MY. MERLIN! if i were rose, i would go crawl in my sock drawer and sleep for days! (HA! a very potter musical quote :))
sooo *sigh* i GUESS i can forgive you for the slow updates because of this great chapter and the promise of faster updates!
great chapter, and update soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I KNOW. Intense chapters are so much fun to write! :D
I KNOW! SAMES! But Rose is all brave :) (I see what you did there! ;))
Thank you for forgiving me, oh mighty harrypotterluver123! I'll try!
Anyways, gotta go now and revise for my stupid French exam... *sigh*
Thanks again for the awesome review! Keep reading :) Report Review
Merlin this was a good chapter. It was WONDERFUL to see inside Rory's head. He's very hard to figure out. I guess it would help if I was more perceptive than I am...
I feel so bad for Genevieve. I have a scar on my face too, and I know what it's like for people to stare at you for a blemish. Hopefully, she won't let that get her down, seeing as she is so strong, mentally.
This was a great chapter, and I understand the exam excuse (finals are in two weeks; kill me now). Update as soon as you can!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. Yes, he is hard to figure out, and even in this instance I didn't reveal everything that was going on in that convoluted mind of his (where would be the fun in that?)
I'm sorry if I may have offended you in any way, harrypotterluver, or if I've lacked sensitivity with the subject of scars. I have scars on my body that are easily hidden, but not on my face, so I have no such experience with the tender topic. I knew a girl once who had a birth mark that covered almost one whole side of her face, but she was only young so I don't think she paid much (if any) heed to it at that age.
I really had to think about how I would feel if something like that happened to me, and I don't think I've really pulled it off in the next chapter when we get back to Genevieve's POV, but I've at least tried.
I think the scar is one of Genevieve's tipping points, really. It's the real, solid, terrifying truth that *someone is out to get her*, that it's not just a mere threat that she doesn't remember. Someone has really tried to ruin her, at this point. Despite this, I don't think she'll wallow in self-pity too much - as you said, she's (arguably) dealt with worse.
*sigh* I'm getting far too involved.
Thank you so much for your comments and I will try to update as soon as my beta's done with it. A thousand good lucks for your finals! ;D
Bethan.xxx Report Review
Sooo...erm...WHYMUSTYOUDOTHISTOME!!! MEEP! AHHH! ASDFGHJKL; THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS EVERYTIME A READ A NEW CHAPTER OF BEING SUMMER! SHURGAFLUB! *freakout moment ends...NOW!*
OKAY! Sooo Jack/Summer huh? I actually can't say that I'm surprised. I kinda thought they might be good together. (BUT I STILL SHIP JAMES/SUMMER SO IM NOT HAPPY ABOUT THOSE 2!!!)
AND! Oh my dear Jamsie, are you a wee bit jealous? OH HO HO! This story is getting extremely good. Like I wanna jump up and down and squeal everytime I see that you update. SO THIS IS MY WAY OF TELLING YOU THAT I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!! THIS WAS GREAT! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: well... erm... I'MVERYSORRYABOUTDOINGTHISTOYOU. whatever 'this' is :P WELL AT LEAST YOU FREAKOUT AND DON'T FALL ASLEEP AT THE KEYBOARD AND WONDER WHY THEY EVEN LET ME POST MY INSANE DRIVEL ONLINE.
yeah ~ jack and summer are kind of a complicated one, in my head. they go well together, and he makes her happy and all that, but they're still not the POP!FIZZLE! couple that james and summer were. so would they ever work? who knows...
jamesie might have been a tiny bit jealous... not that he made it obvious, or anything :P thank you so much :D i'll try to update soon, as soon as i can escape from the hole i call 'school'. thanksss :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
Okay...Let me just say, that this is officially the saddest, yet THE BEST one-shot I have ever read. I was sobbing. And I can relate really well, because my favorite uncle died a few years back, and I held it in during the funeral, and then completely broke down when I was alone in my room.
I also think that you portrayed Lily's sadness and regret extremely well. She reminds me so much of myself.
You definately reached your goal of trying to make people cry. After I read this I ran to my dad and said:
"Dad, no matter what I say, know that I will always love you. Even if we get into a huge fight and fall out for a while, remember that I will love you no matter what." And then I tackled him in a huge bear-hug.
So, this was officially amazing. Enough said. Great Job!
P.S. I think that this is the most serious review I have ever left. I'm extremely...let's call it different...so I usually try to laugh off sadness. But not this time. Because I just thought that this one-shot was THAT brilliant. Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much! I can't believe the amount of positive feedback I'm receiving from this story- I wrote it for a competition but it seems like a lot of people like it!
Thank you! Report Review
WHOOP WHOOP! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! BUT THAT'S OKAY BECAUSE I HAVE READ AND GREATLY ENJOYED THIS CHAPTER! AND I AM GOING TO COME OFF CAPSLOCK...now.
Okay first things first. FIRST REVIEWER OF THIS CHAPTER WHAT NOW NARGLES! (oops got on capslock again).
Okay second. Dom...no. Just...no. You don't do the dirty with guys two years younger than you unless your like, older than twenty. Get it? Got it? Good.
Third, SARAH, WHY MUST YOU MAKE ME LIKE YOU!? Jane Austen=My life! And she seems so nice! But I'm thinking I ship Jatrina now. Sabus (Sarah, Albus. Get it? Haha I made a funny) seem happy. So I'm gunna let them be. But James needs to understand that Al is Kat's BFFL, so she made up with him. Yeah he was an idiot, but all guys are idiots at one point or another.
SO! Yeah that's all I have to say about that (haha i made anothe funny! That one is a quote from Forest Gump! It's an American movie, and as I'm not sure if you are English or American, I am going to assume that I had to explain that). GREAT CHAPTER AND UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!! LOVE YOU!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: DON'T WORRY! I LOVE CAPS LOCK! IT MAKES ME HAPPY :)
I know, Dom's just a rebel :D And naughty...
I KNOW! SHE'S SO NICE IT'S ANNOYING! Hehe, it had to be done! I like the Sabus thing- I might just use it :) Boys are permanently idiots: FACT.
I LOVE FOREST GUMP! I'm English, but it's such a brilliant film :')
THANK YOU FOR ANOTHER WONDERFUL REVIEW! LOVE YOU TOO! Report Review
oh my god. your chapter pics are joey richter and darren criss!!! AVPM for life! (should i assume you know what that means considering they are in it?) so this looks really good! i've never read a freddie POV story, so it was a nice change. Its really great so far! update again soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: Yes, haha. I know what that means :) I have always pictured them as James and Fred so I was so happy to have an excuse to use them! And I'm so happy you like the story so far! YAY! Freddie has been an amazing character to work with so far. Hope you like the rest! Thank you! Report Review
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Wha...I...I have no words. I'm mad. I'M IN A RAGE! (Hehe it's an "A Very Potter Sequel reference. Oh I'm such a nerd.) But I believe you when you say that things are gunna get better. Because I WILL find some Nargles and set them on you (I'm having a slight obsession with Nargles) if they don't.
But have to say that this was a very good chapter! Extremely depressing, but WHATAYA GUNNA DO? UPDATE AGAIN SOON WITH SOMETHING HAPPIER AND I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER!
harrypotterluver123Author's Response: ahaha. i am very sorry that you are in a rage. *oh my gosh, a very potter musical is my /life/, yes* yes, you do seem to have a slight obsession with nargles ~ but hopefully the next chapter will sort a few things out so you don't have to set them on me. :D
thank you so much :D the update will be soon, and james is nowhere near as angry in that. which is good.
ellie :) xx Report Review
OH. MY. GOD. YOU. DID. NOT. JUST. DO. THAT. WTF!?!?! ALBUS AND SUMMER!? ARE YOU INSANE!?!? NONONONONONONO! JUST NO! I FEEL SOOO BAD FOR JAMES RIGHT NOW LIKE IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY! HE AND SUMMER ARE MEANT TO BE, EVEN IF THEY BOTH DON'T KNOW IT YET! THEY WILL GET MARRIED AND HAVE PRETTY BABIES!!!
Moving on! It was really great to see what James though of the whole "him and Summer" thingy. But I'm still VERY curious. Like I wanna investigate. And I HATE investigating. (I'm not a Ravenclaw.)
I'm still very mad at you for the Albus/Summer thing. So you better update soon or I WILL set the Nargles on you. Like legit. So update soon. Pretty please?
harrypotterluver123Author's Response: OH. MY. GOD. YES. I. DID. JUST. DO. THAT. MWAHAHAH. NO, I'M NOT INSANE. IT ALL MAKES SENSE IN THE GREAT MIND THAT IS ELLIE. YOU SHOULD FEEL BAD FOR THE BLOKE, THIS IS GOING TO BE INSANELY HARD AND UPSETTING FOR HIM. WE WILL SEE IF THAT IS EVER GOING TO HAPPEN, MY FRIEND.
yeah ~ a little bit more of what james thinks about the whole summer and him thing is in the next chapter, and i hate investigating too. i die a little when they ask you to do that as part of a project in school.
well, will you be less angry with me if you find out that the next chapter is in the queue? :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
AHH CHASE AND DEL!!! THEY SHOULD BE TOGETHER! I DONT LIKE BRAY!!! CHASE/DEL ALL THE WAY!!! GREAT CHAPTER! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!Author's Response: Hahahah! :D I am really glad you're this excited about my story!(but it just may be the CAP letters that are fooling me xD)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
*Maria Report Review
awww albus! so loyal (coughcoughWHIPPED!) to lucy! KATHERINE WAS THE PAINTING NEAR THE HEADMISTRESS'S OFFICE RIGHT?! ha! i didnt even have look that up! well...FINE I DID! but i was curious...great chapter! it was great to see what al thought of that situation! update again soon!Author's Response: Hahahaha I love that you lied about looking up the clue about Katherine and then confessed straight away! So funny! And yes, she was the portrait, so you can have ten points!
I think it's funny that you said Al was whipped because Lucy really has no idea he's doing it all for her...she just thinks he's a nice guy!
Thanks for the review, please keep reading :) Report Review
ooo this story is looking really good! i can't wait to read more! update soon!Author's Response: Thankyou so much!! Report Review
AHHH THEY MADE OUT!!! ARIA!!! MERLIN!!! YOUR LOVE HIM, SO WHY DONT YOU GET YOUR EMOTIONS IN CHECK AND TELL HIM!!! AND ALEX!!! I HATE HIM!!! HE JUST--HE--AUGH!!! HE NEEDS TO LEAVE, LIKE RIGHT NOW!!! great chapter!!! update again soon!!!Author's Response: YES, THEY MADE OUT (KIND OF)!!! AND YES, SHE KNOWS SHE LOVES HIM, BUT SHE DOESN'T WANT TO HURT JETT!!! ALEX IS EVIL!!! I'm glad you liked the chapter so much!!! Thank you for the lovely caps lock-y review!!! Report Review
SUPERMEGAFOXYAWESOMEHOT SHIRT!?!?!?! I WANT ONE!!! i guess ill have to stick to my"REDVINES" shirt. aww this was an adorable chapter! i ship bonnie/josh! im gunna keep reading now.Author's Response: I have one :P mwhaha.
I ship Bonnie and trainers. Boy does she love her running ;)
Thank you so much for the loverly review! xx Report Review
YES YES YES!!! YOU UPDATED!!! AND ARIADNE AND AL ARE GOING ON A DATE!!! AND THEY KISSED!!! AND RON DIDNT KILL SCORPIUS!!! AND IM SO EXCITED RIGHT NOW I COULD SCREAM!!! great chapter!!! update again soon! Report Review
OHMYGOD SPENCER! IF A GUYS AS SEXY HOT AS JAMES KISSES YOU, AND HE'S YOUR FIRST KISS, YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE A PROBLEM IF HE WANTS TO GO FRENCH!!! oh spencer my dear, you DO remind me too much of myself with the socially awkwardness. "Do you want to be my girlfriend?" "Do YOU want me to be your girlfriend?" YES OR NO CHICKIE, YES. OR. NO. AND IT'S A YES. great chapter!!! update again soon!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! AND I KNOW! WHAT'S HER DEAL?!?!?! She just got panicky - that's all. I can totally see myself doing that, haha. I'll try to update soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D Report Review
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