Let's start out with me telling you about that completely inhumane noise I made when I read the description of the chapter: "I'm going to fight for you."
Moving on. Use of Jatrina and Katbus in the story, nice touch!
AND OF COURSE OF FREAKING COURSE THEY HAD TO SAY THEY WERE BOTH GOING TO FIGHT FOR HER OF COURSE.
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I can only imagine the noise you made :D I hope nobody thought you were being tortured ;) Haha!
Why thank you! That was fun: I didn't think of it until I actually wrote it, so it was great to add in. It made me laugh writing it so I'm glad it made my readers laugh too!
I KNOW BUT I HAVE TOO SORRY IT'S KILLING ME TOO.
Well, at least now you'll want to read on to find out what happens, right? ;)
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YOU DID NOT JUST MAKE JAMES AND AL BOTH ASK KAT TO HOGSMEDE ON THE SAME DAY.
IT DIDN'T HAPPEN.
SCORPIUS AND MILLA.
WHAT IS THAT.
I'M VERY CONFUSED.
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I
I KNOW I DON'T KNOW WHAT CAME OVER ME
IT WASN'T EVEN PLANNED EXACTLY LIKE THIS
I'M JUST GOING TO ROLE WITH IT
SO AM I DON'T WORRY.
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I'M GUNNA MISS THIS STORY SO MUCH LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA IT'S BEEN PART OF MY LIFE FOR A YEAR I'M GUNNA BE EXPECTING AND WAITING FOR UPDATES AND NONE ARE GUNNA COME AND THERE'S NO POINT IN A SEQUEL BECAUSE YOU EXPLAINED EVERY. SINGLE. THING. IN. THIS. CHAPTER AND I'M VERY GREATFUL BUT I ALSO WANTED A SEQUEL BECAUSE I
I'M EMOTIONAL AND UPSET I'M SORRY. I'm ranting.
Okay so anyway I really loved how you ended it (EVEN THOUGH I'M STILL EXTREMEMLY UPSET IT'S REALLY OVER) and how you said what happens to everyone because some authors just LEAVE SOME THINGS OUT and I'm just wondering for the rest of my life what would've/could've happened to them and thank you for not being one of those people. U da bomb. Okay. Yeah. Bye now.
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Can I please rugby tackle Rose and Dom and break their noses. I beg. They mean.
Aw Scorpius is adorable can I have him.
PLOT TWIST DIFFERENT DADS. I can honestly say I did not see that coming. I congradulate you.
Well I hope you have a fantabulous time on your vacation! I have break in two weeks and I am proud to say I am doing absolutely nothing :) :) :)
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I love you. No, seriously. Your reviews make my day!
I know they mean but we will get revenge, my lovely, I promise.
You make me weird.
ANYWAYS, I know! That is one of the plots I've had planned since the beginning of the story but I kept forgetting to add it in. I'm glad you like it :)
I did thank you so much! The weather was so amazing and I'm sad now I'm back to cold, rainy (and snowy!) England. Least it means I can update ASAP ;) You go girl, doing nothing rocks.
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Yes hi hello, I'm terribly sorry this is late. I've had play rehearsals everyday for about 6 hours and I'M DYING (we're doing Les Mis--lots of work).
Anywho, I am here now. And WHAT. GUH. HUH. WHAT. WHY.
SO KAT QUIT AND THEN ROSALINE QUIT AND THEN AL QUIT AND THEN JAMES PUNCHED AL AND THEN AL PUNCHED JAMES AND THEN I HAVE A HEART ATTACK.
And then Rose is still being witchy (no pun intended) and so is Dom and I just need to read the next chapter right now...or soon...either one. Preferably as soon as possible. But no rush. (writer's block is shiz).
Even though you say otherwise, I do believe it was a fantastic chapter. Update soon will ya?
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: No worries! I do apologize for the lateness of this review- I have not gone of my computer for three days.
THREE WHOLE DAYS.
I KNOW IT WAS WHAT WHERE DID THAT COME FROM? I SURE DON'T KNOW I MEAN I JUST WROTE IT AND IT HAPPENED D:
Yes, indeed she is. Although in two chapters time, everything might be in reverse (*le gasp* SPOILER ALERT!)
I've actually had the next chapter written (what is this? it is organisation I think. I have never experienced this.) so i'll get that out before I die under exam pressure! It's all heating up, and possibly about 7+ chapters left? I don't know :D
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OH MY FUDGING--
SCOROSE BROKE UP.
I WAS WATCHING RERUNS OF SPONGEBOB AND I SCREAMED AN THREW MY PHONE ACROSS THE ROOM BECAUSE I WASN'T READY FOR THAT.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY.
Oh yeah! Katbus. Considering Al was the one who kissed Kat in the first place, the entire family's cognative skills need a checkup. Okay. Yeah. I'm gunna go now. Have a nice day.
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I KNOW.
I FEEL SO AWFUL.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT CAME OVER ME.
I DIDN'T PLAN IT I SWEAR I JUST WROTE IT AND I WAS LIKE THAT WORKS.
I'LL STOP CAPS LOCKING NOW.
Yesyes you are correct! Silly Wotters, siding with their family... I am having a nice day now I have read this :) Same to you! Report Review
Why. I...I don't have enough emotions to react to this Ellie. My main emotion is anger. THEY WERE JUST GETTING TO BE A COUPLE AND THEN JAMES HAS TO GO AND BE A FUDGER AND JUST LEAVE HER. IN THE COLD. FOR HOURS. WHY.
BUT DONNER IS BACK ON HECK YEAH. AND PENNY HAS THE THOUGHT OF HER AND FRED GETTING MARRIED BUT THEY'RE ONLY 17/18 SO THAT MIGHT NOT WORK OUT BUT THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER AW. But I'm still so mad about James and Summer. -_-
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and I cry. This was one of the best of your works, yay!
Hey Saval, how's life? I totally understand you've been busy and stuff. Life does that. But I was wondering, would you maybe consider writing a summary of what you were going to do with the other stories?
It doesn't have to be soon or anything, but I know a lot of people would love to know just what was going to happen (ARIADNE AND AL?!?!? JAMES AND ARIA?!?!?! DOM AND APOLLO?!?!?!??). You don't have to, as you are the author and it's completely up to you. I just think it might be a good sign of closure, for yourself even.
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CONFRONTATIONS GIVE ME ANXIETY. I was so scared for this, I had to break out the emergency nutella. But it wasn't that bad, bless your soul. I thought James would be more...explosive.
BUT I'M STILL SO MAD AT ROSE. KAT FUDGING KEPT YOUR PREGNANCY A SECRET AND THEN YOU TELL THE ENTIRE FUDGING WORLD THAT YOUR BEST FRIEND KISSED SOMEONE. ONE KISS. THAT WAS IT. GAH. I could rant for ages, honestly.
I like Milla. She reminds me of me when I'm not shy and awkward. I probably should attempt to watch my language as well haha.
THAT WAS A REALLY FAST UPDATE AND I AM INCREDIBLY GRATEFUL FOR IT. Fabulous chapter, and update again soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I KNOW. I HYPERVENTILATED LIKE THREE TIMES WRITING THIS. I ate about eight chocolate bars and three tubes of pringles writing this, so tense and difficult writing it D: Mmm... Nutella...
Yeah, James was trying to be all calm for once! All will become clear.
I actually love that everyone is mad at Rose- it makes me happy in a very odd way. It's lovely to think that I can write something and people will care about it enough to form opinions on characters!
I like Milla, too. I think you should be my new best friend then, because I want a friend like Milla. More Milla in the future chapters, plenty of swearing too ;)
THANK YOU! I'm glad you liked the chapter and my lightening update. I wanted to get it out before I get swamped under the pressure of my three shows, portfolios, competitions and instrument exams (!!!).
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YESYESYESYES AN UPDATE. VICTORY.
Okay so...um...I honestly don't know how to put my thoughts into words right now. Ahem:
THEY WERE LOCKED IN A BROOM CUPBOARD AND ALBUS ADMITED HIS FEELINGS LAST CHAPTER AND NOW THEY TALKED ABOUT IT AND KAT TOLD ALBUS THAT SHE HAD FEELINGS FOR HIM FOR YEARS AND NOW SHE'S MAD AT HIM BECAUSE HE SHOULD HAVE TOLD HER HE LIKED HER BEFORE SHE WENT OUT WITH JAMES SO THAT A LOT OF DRAMA COULD BE AVOIDED AND THEN ROSE FUDGING TOLD JAMES ABOUT THE KISS SO NOW I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN AND I'M REALLY SCARED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON SO I WILL BE PUT OUT OF MY MISERY SOON OK OK.
Ahem. Excuse the rant. I couldn't find it in me to go back and add punctuation. But this chapter caused me so much stress I literally almost threw my laptop out my window. WHY WOULD ROSE TELL JAMES. I GET THAT SHE'S MAD AT KAT BUT THAT WAS NONE OF HER BUSINESS. I JUST. UGH.
Okay I must be going. Have a fabulous day, hopefully full of writing the next chapter :) :) :)
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I KNOW! IT'S BEEN SO LOOONG! Finally got in the queue, it was the foruth day out of the 5 day queue and then I realised I had made A MASSIVE MISTAKE when I missed out some of the chapter and had to edit it, sending it to the back of the queue :(
IT'S UP NOW HOWEVER! The capital letters made me jump in your review, but then they made me laugh out loud!
Thank you so much, this honestly made my day! (I had a rubbish day as I got hit by 18 snowballs- I counted). I'm so glad you're enjoying it, it means so much to hear that I can get people to care about my characters and my story so much!
Actually, I am writing the next chapter ;) It will be up very soon- a quicker update than the last one!
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ELLIE YOU FINALLY UPDATE AND IM SO HAPPY AND I JUST READ THE WHOLE THING BUT IT IS CURRENTLY 2am SO I WILL FINISH THIS REVIEW IN THE MORNING.
(10 hours later)
Okay okay I'm back. THIS CHAPTER MADE ME SO NERVOUS BECAUSE AT FIRST SUMMER DIDNT SAY ANYTHING BACK TO JAMES BUT THEN AT THE WAY END YOU JUST THREW IT IN THERE LIKE "oh hey I forgot to tell you: I'm in love with you! Bye now!" (I'm giving you one of those blank stares that I give when I am unamused) But at the same time I'M SO HAPPY BECAUSE THEY BOTH HAVE NOW ADMITTED THEIR FEELINGS SO ANY UNCERTAINTY IS GONE AND I REALLY CANT WAIT FOR THIS NEXT CHAPTER.
Dom...if she had told you that she and James were going on a date, you would've exploded anyway. I am now crowning you queen of over-dramatics.
I can't believe I'm saying this but I actually have a social life today and have to finish this review up to get ready.
GREAT CHAPTER AND UPDATE AGAIN SOON BECAUSE I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS OR I MIGHT JUST DIE.
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OH MY GOD YOU FINALLY UPDATED I'M TRIBAL DANCING AROUND MY ROOM. Haha I'm a bit excited.
Awww Kat was ignoring Al. Such a shame. But I suppose the predicament is a bit awkward. Anyway.
Awkward talks with the guys who you made out with when you're dating his brother are never fun. I can understand why she avoided it.
Ouch, shiz going down with Rose. Hormones?
AL SAID HE HAD FEELINGS FOR HER OH MY GOD I NEED A MOMENT SOMEONE GIVE ME A PAPER BAG.
THIS STORY IS SO CONFUSING BECAUSE FOR MOST OF IT I WAS TEAM JAMES BUT THEN I SWITCHED TO AL IN THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS AND I DON'T REALLY KNOW ANYMORE.
It was great! Update again soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I KNOW! I DID A TRIBAL DANCE TOO WHEN I FINALLY FINISHED WRITING IT!!
My god that took a while! I'm so sorry- exams just got on top of me (literally. Like I was drowning under my books).
Awkwards situations are brill. I love writing them because they make me feel better about MY incredibly awkward moments. So you know.
Yep, pretty much!
I KNOW! I WASN'T GOING TO WRITE THE WHOLE "I HAVE FEELINGS FOR YOU!" BIT IN BUT THEN IT JUST HAPPENED AND I WAS LIKE, MY GOD PHOENIX FEATHER, YOU ARE GENIUS! I had to give my loyal readers like you a titbit to make up for my terrible updates!
I KNOW! I CHANGE MY TEAM EVERY DAY! GO WITH IT :)
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I'M CONVULSING THERE IS A NEW CHAPTER FINALLY EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO READ.
**reads for about 10 minutes**
OH MY GOD SUMMER TOLD EVERYONE HER MOM WAS PREGGO. AND TO JACK'S DAD I honestly thought she would only tell James and wait like 3447483 years to tell everyone else, but that's just me.
HOLY SHIZ MUFFINS SUMMER AND JAMES DID THE DIRTY. I CAN'T DEAL I'M HYPERVENTILATING SDKDCMSDKJCKSDF THIS IS NOT OKAY I'VE BEEN WAITING 27 CHAPTERS FOR THIS AND IT FINALLY HAPPENED I'M SO HAPPY. that is all.
JAMES AND SUMMER. DATE. AWKWARD. This story just raises my blood pressure to very unhealthy levels with the amount of funny situations happy. There is no way this can be healthy man.
AND THERE GOES MY BLOOD PRESSURE AGAIN. JAMES TOLD SUMMER HE LOVED HER, LIKE IN LOVE. I AM DONE I CAN'T EVEN DESCRIBE WORDS OR FORM COHERANT SENTENCES. I CAN BARELY WRITE THIS REVIEW RIGHT NOW KDSDFLSKFSDFJLDSFSJ. I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW BUT THEN SUMMER HAD TO GO AND BE SUMMER AND NOT SAY IT BACK AND NOW I'M SAD.
Great chapter as always! Update again soon! I actually almost died with out an update sooo new one soon yes?
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THIS IS SO INTENSE. Oh god, I've been waiting ages for this to come out! It was really good. The kiss was long anticipated, and I think you wrote it wonderfully! Update again soon!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: Glad you liked it! It was actually really hard to write- I knew exactly how I wanted it to go like, but the actual writing was impossible >.<
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Hi! This looks really good. Great idea too. keep writing!
~harrypotterluve123Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
AJKLDSANCSMSDKMFASKJDF WHAT IS THIS?! I'M GONE FOR WHAT, TWO DAYS, AND THERE'S A NEW CHAPTER OUT WITHOUT ME KNOWING?! GAH. THANKS A LOT SOCCER (again I'm american haha). MAKING ME MISS OUT ON BEING SUMMER. LEAVE.
REVIEW TIME! DOM. WHAT THE FUDGE? ARE YOU SIRIUSLY MAKING SUMMER STAY WITH YOU WHEN SHE COULD BE ON A DATE WITH JAMES. GO SLAM YOUR HEAD IN A CAR DOOR. IT WAS YOUR FAULT FOR BEING ALL POSSESSIVE OVER CONNOR, HUN. LEARN.
SHBSJSJFNSLDFJSK KYLE. LEAVE. THAT'S ALL I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT YOU.
JAAAMMMEEESSS. I LOVE YOU. SO MUCH. IT SHOULD BE CONSIDERED UNHEALTHY HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU. WHOOP WHOOP! SUMMER GAINED JAMES'S TRUST BACK...and then just lost it when she said she was going to stay with Dom instead of their date. MOTHER OF MERLIN ELLIE. WHY IS THERE SO MUCH DRAMA. MY HEAD. IS GOING. TO. EXPLODE.
YEAH SUMMER! GOING OUT THERE AND GETTING A JOB! YOU GO SUMMER.
BAHAHAHA SUMMER. MAKING HER FEEL BAD SAYING THAT HER DATE WOULD PROBABLY BE BETTER THAN THE PRINCE OF WHEREVER-THAT-IS. SLYTHERIN STYLE.
...WHAT!? SCORPIUS DIDN'T KNOW THAT HER AND JACK BROKE UP!? WHA--HOW--WHY!? Scorp, I suggest you look in the observation skills department. You lack the right tools there.
OHMYGAWDOHMYGAWDOHMYGAWD!!! ROSE--SHE AND SCORPIUS--KISS. GAH. CAN'T SPEAK. I'M HAPPY.
HOLY SHIZNUTS YOU DID A CONNOR P.O.V. I STARTED FREAKING OUT.
CONNOR, STOP BEING A PANSY AND GET BACK WITH DOM. NOW.
Haha it's so funny Connor knows that Summer ticked James off. It's always her fault.
HOLYSHIZHOLYSHIZHOLYSHIZ. JAMES SAID HE WAS IN LOVE WITH SUMMER. OH MY GOD. I THINK I JUST PEED MY PANTS. *leaves room to scream. Let's out an ear piercing scream that probably broke all the glass in the house. Returns to reading.* BUT REALLY, I STARTED SPAZZING OUT.
YAY SUMMER AND PENNY MADE UP. AND OHMYMERLIN PENNY MADE A SPA DAY JUST SO THAT SUMMER AND JAMES COULD GO ON THEIR DATE. AWWW I WANNA HUG HER NOW. THANK YOU PENNY!
OOOHHH James is listening to Summer and her mom's conversation. Should be interesting.
OH MY GOD I KNEW SUMMER'S MOM WAS PREGNANT. I KNEW IT. AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME, CHECK MY LAST REVIEW. BECAUSE I SAID IT THERE. YEAH BUDDY.
SUMMER CALM DOWN. I KNOW YOU LOVE BEING AN ONLY CHILD BUT--OHMYGOD JACK'S DAD IS THE FATHER. *leaves room and lets out another ear piercing scream, then returns* OMGOMGOMGOMG I'M FREAKING OUT. HOW AWKWARD WOULD IT BE IF SUMMER'S MOM AND JACK'S DAD GOT MARRIED. SHE DATED HER STEPBROTHER. EW. THAT'S INCEST. BUT OHMYMERLIN I'M FREAKING OUT.
Okay, I need to finish this review up, because I'm starving, and I need food. Desperately. GREAT CHAPTER AND UPDATE SOON!
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YOU UPDATED!!! OMGOMGOMG I'M LEGIT SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW. I FEEL LIKE SOMEONE JUST HANDED ME A GIANT THING OF NUTELLA AND TOLD ME THEY HAD 50,000 MORE OF THEM FOR ME TO EAT!
Anyway! James/Tiff OMGOMGOMG THIS IS GETTING INTENSE!!! THEY NEED TO GET TOGETHER SOON, OR I MIGHT JUST PUNCH SOMEONE IN THE FACE. YEAH, I WENT THERE.
UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE DON'T TAKE AS LONG AS LAST TIME!
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I'M BAAACK! Yes, I am back in the land of internet and cell phones, and all that shiz. I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT A WEEK TO GET A LETTER RESPONSE ANYMORE BECAUSE I CAN JUST TEXT PEOPLE! YUS! Sorry 'bout that rant. It was necessary.
Okay, I'm going to take a wild guess and say that Summer's mom is preggo. AM I RIGHT!? WAS MY INTUITION CORRECT!? ...You're not going to tell me, are you...sucks.
I STILL HATE SUMMER'S DAD. SHOW A LITTLE AFFECTION, WILL YOU!?
JAAACCCKKK. I LOVE YOU AS SUMMER'S FRIEND. STAY THAT WAY.
WHAT THE FRIG FRED?!?! WHAT--HOW--GAH. HOW IN THE NAME OF MERLINS PINK UNDIES DID YOU KNOW THAT JAMES AND SUMMER WERE SNOG BUDDIES? AND FOR THAT LONG? I DON'T UNDERSTAND THAT BOY. AT ALL.
SCORPIUS, IF YOU AND ROSE DON'T GET TOGETHER RIGHT NOW, I AM GOING TO BECOME A FICTIONAL CHARACTER IN A FANFICTION JUST TO PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE. UNDERSTOOD?
OHMYGAWD I'M HYPERVENTILATING RIGHT NOW. IF DONNER BREAKS UP, I AM GUNNA CRY. LIKE LEGIT.
ASDFGHJKL;ASDFGHJKL; OHMYGAWDOHMYGAWDOHMYGAWD. JAMMER HAS A DATE. HOLY SHIZ NUGGETS. I'M GUNNA DIE OF HAPPINESS NOW.
SUUUMMMERRR!!! HOW THE HUGS DID YOU MAKE PENNY THAT ANGRY? AND WHY FOR THAT MATTER? GAH. STUPID. SHE LOVED KANE. EVEN THOUGH HE WAS A (insert your choice word here seeing as mine isn't 12+). MEEP.
HOLY SHIA LABOUF CONNOR I'M AM GOING TO FEMALE DOG SLAP YOU. YOU DON'T BREAK UP, YOU TALK ABOUT IT!!! I CRIED, JUST LIKE I SAID I WOULD! AND NOW SUMMER CAN'T GO ON HER DATE WITH JAMES. NO. I'M MAD. ELLIE, YOU HAVE UNLEASHED THE MONSTER THAT IS harrypotterluver123's ANGER. PREPARE FOR THE APOCALYPSE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
I AM STILL VERY ANGRY. But I can't stay mad at you, or this story for too long. UPDATE AGAIN SOON! I NEED UPDATES!
P.S. To answer your question, I am indeed American! YEAH MCDONALDS! Just kidding, I actually really hate McDonalds...too fatty and gross. AND I AM NOT A FAT AMERICAN! Sorry, just had to put that out there, what with stereotypes and all that shiz. Not saying that you believe in those, because I actually think you're very nice...based on how much I know about your from this website...and I'm going to stop talking now. Report Review
Omg! This is really good. Keep writing. AND UPDATE LEMONADE WOMAN! I COMMAND IT.Author's Response: Chapter 2 is in the queue and Lemonade is being worked on diligently! STAY WITH ME! :D And thanks for reviewing! Report Review
YAYAYAYAYAY NEW CHAPTER! WHOOT WHOOT!
OHMYGAWD FREDDIE YOU ARE SUCH A SWEETHEART. AND INSANELY HAPPY TOO! And hun, I'm sorry, but you are in ABSOLUTELY NO WAY A GANGSTA!
LOUISE YOU EVIL LITTLE DFKJLAFNDASNFADJNLFNLDANJFNHJDFKLJADKLDNHADNJHDASLKNFDSKNLFJNAFKJLODFAKJDF LEAVE.
AWWW DONNER (other isn't 12+ HAHA) IS STILL IN THE LOVESICK-COUPLE STAGE! ADORBS! AND FRENNY! OH MY GOD FREDDIE IS SOOO CUTE WHEN HE TALKS ABOUT PENNY LIKE, GAH, I WANNA HUG HIM.
HOLY MOTHER OF MERLIN THAT JAMMER TIME WAS DEEP, MAN. I MEAN...WOW. Summer's dad: Holy Shia Labouf. Married at 19 and a kid at 21? I COULDN'T DEAL WITH THAT! I'M NOT RESPONSIBLE ENOUGH. But Summer's dad reeeaaalllyyy didn't have a party-all-night-get-wasted-24/7 period that all teenagers/early 20ish-year-olds have...that's rough man.
BUT STILL! JAMES, YOU ARE SO ADORABLE! I REALLY WANT YOU TO BE REAL CUZ THEN I WOULD FIND YOU AND MARRY YOU (HE SHALL BE MINE!) Very insightful!
So I'm gunna be away for 4 weeks, so I'm not gunna be able to read anymore of your updates till like, September. I THINK I MIGHT DIE. DARN YOU SUMMER CAMP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE WOODS WITH ABSOLUTELY NO INTERNET ACCESS. GAH. CURSES. *sigh*
Well, THIS WAS A BRILLIANT CHAPTER! UPDATE AGAIN SOON (EVEN THOUGH I WON'T BE ABLE TO READ IT! GOOD LORD THAT THOUGHT IS DEPRESSING!)
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: OH MY GOODNESS I AM SO SO SO SORRY ABOUT HOW LONG THIS TOOK! I AM REALLY SORRY! LIFE HAS BEEN SO HECTIC, AND I LEFT FOR HOLIDAY THE DAY AFFTER YOU LEFT THIS AND I WAS GONE FOR TWO WEEKS AND I'VE BEEN SOOO BUSY AND BLARGH. BUT I'M HERE NOW AND I'M VERY, VERY SORRY.
yes, freddie is in no way a gangster. you should probably inform him of that, because he probably doens't know.
LOUISE IS HORRIBLE AND I UNDERSTAND PERFECTLY WELL WHY YOU WANT HER TO LEAVE.
ahaha, yeah, me and my little nicknames aren't exactly 12+. whoopsie. and yes, dom and connor are still sickeningly lovesick. it nearly gives me a rash just to write about it. fred is adorable, full stop. end of conversation.
yeah, married at nineteen and a kid at twenty one ~ it's tough. i mean, he didn't get his childhood or the chance to be a young bloke because he was married with a wife and kid to look after and provide for (because summer's mum was raised to believe that she didn't have to work). but still, does that excuse everything he's done?
james is adorbs. i love him. a lot. AND HEY, IF HE WAS REAL THEN HE WOULD BE MARRYING ME, MISSY. HANDS OFF.
aww, shame :( but i hope you enjoy your summer camp in the middle of the woods with no internet access. small question, and it might be a bit weird, but does that mean you're american? just because in england, generally, you don't have summer camps. our entire summer is six weeks, anyway. but maybe you're just at an english one i don't know about :P
thank you! and enjoy summer camp :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
Hi! So, I've always seen this story, whether it be when I'm being a stalker and looking through other author's favorite stories (Congrats on that! You wouldn't /believe/ how many people I've seen with this as one of their favorite stories! Well you probably do...since you're, you know, the author and can see how many favorites you have. ANYWAY!) or just seeing that it's been updated. But, for some reason or another, I just never read it.
Then about a month ago, I read the first chapter, but I never read the rest because Agatha was a Slytherin...Which I find is completely insane, because I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!! LIKE LEGIT I'M GUNNA FAVORITE RIGHT AFTER I FINISH THIS REVIEW AND PRAY EVERY DAY FOR AN UPDATE.
I'm also extremely disappointed with myself! I mean, I'm a Gryffindor (POTTERMORE OFFICIAL), so I already know that there is a bit of tension between Slytherin and Gryffindor, but I SHOULDN'T HAVE JUDGE!!! I MISSED OUT BRO!!! I am giving myself a time-out for not reading this fanfic soon, I promise!
So, so far, I love this plot thingy. I know that I probably shouldn't say that yet considering I still have like, 31 chapters to go so I don't exactly know EVERYTHING that's gunna happen, but IT'S JUST. SO. GOOD.
So yeah. I kinda gotta go. I'm a little sleep deprived. GOODBYE FOR NOW, O FUDGING AMAZING shenanigan!
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OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OHMYGOD!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! I THOUGHT YOU *DIED*!!! GREAT TO KNOW YOU'RE STILL ON THE PLANET!!!
OH MY GOD NOOO!!! JAMES REJECTED HER!!! NOOO THEY NEED TO GET TOGETHER AND HAVE PRETTY BABIES!!! LIKE NOW.
HOLY MERLIN. JAMES TRIED TO GIVE HER "THE TALK"?! THAT IS BEYOND AWKWARD. IF MY BGF TRIED TO DO THAT I'D GO ALL APEPOOP ON HIS BUTT (12+ to the max!).
YAYAYA OREGON IS SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. UPDATE AGAIN SOON. I COMMAND YOU.
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...Okay so I kinda forgot to review yesterday...and the day before. I'M SORRY! I JUST JOINED A SWIM TEAM TO GET RID OF THOSE ANNOYING 10 LBS THAT I JUST CAN'T SEEM TO LOSE, AND I DIDN'T HAVE TIME! BUT, FEAR NOT, I AM HERE NOW!
SKDFAJJFVNJIJEILFJVNCXMDFKJDHSFKM. OH. MY. ROWLING. SUMMER'S DAD WALKING IN ON THEM ALMOST DOING...STUFF!?!??!?! OHMYGAWD OHMYGAWD OHMYGAWD!!! I LEGIT STARTED HYPERVENTILATING. WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SUCH A THING! BLASPHEMY I TELL YOU, BLASPHEMY! AND THEN HE FUDGING KICKS JAMES OUT. RAWR I WANNA *FEMALE DOG* SLAP HIM!
BUT HA. HA HA. HAHAHAHAHAHA SUMMER. "shot a random spell at the entrance to my room, launching my dad out of it and slamming the door behind him. YOLO and all that, you know." She just made my day, like Siriusly.
HOLY SHIA LABOUF. SHE JUST SAID--SHE WISHED HER DAD DIDN'T WALK IN!?!?!? IS THIS REAL LIFE!?!?!?
James, you are such a sweet heart. Your points about how much it sucks to be cheated on are like, EVERYONE'S inner most insecureties. Is is possible to marry a fictional character? Because, if so, JAMES SIRIUS POTTER YOU ARE MINE.
Jack...please explain to me WHY you would show up at your girlfriend's house UNANOUNCED, and NOT BRING CHOCOLATE? If you are going somewhere uninvited, ALWAYS. BRING. CHOCOLATE. IT IS JUST A FACT OF LIFE.
SUMMER'S DAD! OH MERLIN I WAS DYING! He was TOURTURING Summer when Jack was around. Evil little slimy Slytherin ain't he?
Is it safe to assume that Sumack (Summer/Jack. Pure genius) is officially over? BECAUSE I WILL SING PRAISES TO MERLIN IF THAT IS SO. AS MUCH AS JACK REMINDS ME OF PEETA FROM THE HUNGER GAMES (Josh Hutcherson you gorgeous mother*), THEY BOTH ANNOY ME AT SOME POINT OR ANOTHER. TOO NICE.
Despite all the BAD drama *COUGH COUGH SUMMER'S DAD CATCHING JAMMER ALMOST DOING THE DIRTY*, there was much GOOD drama *COUGH COUGH JAMMER ALMOST DOING THE DIRTY. BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!! I EAGERLY AWAIT YOUR NEXT UPDATE AFTER THIS FUDGING STAFF VACATION!!! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: hey, don't you worry about it ~ i feel bad that you feel bad about not reviewing when it has taken me this long to respond :/. blargh, i feel like a terrible author.
AHAHA, YES, SUMMER'S DAD WALKED IN ON THEM ALMOST DOING, AS ANOTHER REVIEWER SAID, THE DANCE WITH NO PANTS. CAN YOU PICTURE ANYTHING MORE AWKWARD? NO, PROBABLY NOT. I WOULD WANT TO CURL UP INTO A BALL AND DIE. AND THEN HE KICKS JAMES OUT... FEEL FREE TO SLAP HIM, MY LOVE.
i hate the phrase YOLO. like literally, with every burning pore in my body i absolutely cannot stand it. it makes my blood BOIL. urgh! but it felt like the right thing to say... even though i wanted to take a shower after writing it because i hate it so much.
YES, IT IS REAL LIFE AND YES, THAT IS WHAT SHE SAID. she trusts him enough to go all the way now.
UHM, NO. JAMES SIRIUS POTTER IS MINE, LOVE. that is how james feels about being cheated on, it just took him a while for him to remember that what he and summer were doing technically counted as cheating.
ahaha, he thought he was being sweet! the poor thing :( but yes, i think i would be much happier about someone just showing up at my house if they were clutching a nice big box of chocolates ;)
yes, he is a right little slimy slytherin. he wouldn't have cared if jack had split up with summer on the spot because of what he was saying.
you'll find out in the next chapter and chapter twenty six if they've officially kicked the bucket. but for now, yes, they're pretty much over. done. caput. whatnot. he is lovely, but he is too nice. too nice for summer, that's for sure.
ahaha, thank you so much! the next chapter is in the queue and will hopefully be out soon. and again, so sorry about how long all these reponses took! much love, thank you :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
BAHAHAHAHA OMG. "Stay with me tonight." James's reaction. I DIED! Wow Summer. Talking about emotions! Honestly, I don't think that ANYONE likes talking about emotions, so don't worry!
YOU KNOW, SUMMER MAY NOT HAVE INTERPRETED THAT VISIT TO THE ARCADE AS A DATE, BUT I SURE AS HECK DID! I MEAN, COME ON!
Ummm, can I have your permission to Avada Summer's dad? Cuz I feel the need to. NO ONE, I REPEAT, NO. ONE. GETS. IN THE WAY. OF. JAMMER. MOMENTS. IT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL. LIKE LEGIT. IF THEY WANNA SLEEP IN THE SAME BED, THEN GOSH DARN IT THEY WILL.
HA! Yelling at someone for forgetting their pajamas sounds like something I would do :)
OI! NO ONE, ONCE AGAIN, I REPEAT, NO ONE, SHOULD BE LEFT ALONE ON CHRISTMAS. THAT ALSO SHOULD BE ILLEGAL. WHERE. IS. THE. CHRISTMAS. SPIRIT?!
ASDFGHJKL; SUMMER SAID SHE FANCIED JAMES. BIG MILESTONE RIGHT THERE. WHOOP WHOOP! FINALLY ADMITTING THOSE FEELINGS, HUH SUMMER!
EQWROIENJ VDLFJALFNMCNDHSFDSFKDJSFNHHSFDSJLAFKDKNFHJDNHFADSJFDAKFVADF OH. MY. MERLIN. JAMES. KISSED. SUMMER. HALLELUIAH! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA I'M HAPPY. THANK YOU. YOU MADE MY DAY.
Okay, I am really sleep deprived, because it is now close to 3am. So I'm going to leave the review for the next chapter, TOMORROW. I WON'T FORGET!
This is HARRYPOTTERLUVER123 signing off until next time! :)Author's Response: sorry about how long this response took! i've been really busy for my last two weeks of school and this is the earliest i've been able to sit down and just plough through them :D i've been answering them all in such a random order :D ANYWAY. ahaha, yeah. poor james got the wrong end of the stick, there. yes... magical, really. and no, i hate it too :D
NO, I REALLY DON'T THINK IT WAS A DATE. SORRY TO BURST YOUR BUBBLE THERE, LOVE. BUT HEY, YOU CAN THINK WHAT YOU LIKE. YOU CAN'T BRAINWASH PEOPLE.
sure, if you want to. though the chapter that is about to come out may make you feel a little bit sorry for the guy ~ not that it excuses everything that he's done over the years. ahaha :D trust me, if summer wants to then she will XD
i would do something like that. if one of my best friends came for a sleepover then i'd probably start pelting them with my little brother's teddies or something.
NO ONE SHOULD EVER BE LEFT ALONE ON CHRISTMAS. THAT IS SUCH A HARSH THING TO DO. REALLY, CRUEL.
that was a big milestone ~ she thought it was obvious, so she never bothered to mention it. but james didn't actually know that. so it was really a big thing for her to finally stand up and admit that.
ahaha :D yes, james did kiss summer.
close to 3AM? if i was answering this on the night you sent it, then i would have been yelling at you to get some goshdarn sleep, woman! well, i really hope you liked the next chapter :D
ellie :) xx
(and sorry for how long this response took ~ but it was a lovely review, so thank you!) Report Review
OH MAH GAWD!!! So, I just came back from a week long vacation, and I just read the last three chapters in about 10 minutes. A. M. A. Z. I. N. G. Like, Merlin I'm not even exaggerating! The plot just keeps getting better and better, and more twists. MANY OF SAID TWISTS ARE EXTREMELY AGGRIVATING AND CAUSE MUCH FRUSTRATION, BUT WHAT CAN YOU DO?
Ya know, in all that discribing of Lily's room, I honestly could NOT tell what her favourite colour was! Just kidding. BLUE, RIGHT!? But wow. Lil Lily is very perceptive! I mean, I think that it's obvious to everyone EXCEPT Summer that she and James love each other, but she really picked that up, didn't she?
I think that it is safe to say that the tension (hopefully you will know the certain kind because I don't believe that it is 12+ and I don't wanna get in trouble!) between Summer and James is as thick as ever! They really need to talk about what the bloody H. E. DOUBLE TOOTHPICKS is going on with them.
Awww! Summer and James dancing! AND THEN ALBUS HAD TO GO AND STICK HIS *HANDS* IN THE MESS AND ALMOST RUINED THE PATCHY FRIENDSHIP THAT SUMMER AND JAMES HAD FOR A SHORT TIME. ONCE AGAIN, HE AND NATALIE NEED TO MOVE TO MARS, NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN. BUT I FEEL BAD FOR MAKING THE MARTIONS GO THROUGH THAT HORRIBLENESS! YOU GO SUMMER! KNEE HIM WHERE IT HURTS!
Louise. Please go jump off a cliff. That is all I have to say about you.
Wow. This review was one of the longest I've EVER posted. Might have to do with the fact that it's 2:30 in the morning and I'm rambling. Excuse me while I go leave 2 more reviews on your other chapters!
Till the next chapter,
P.S. Who in their right mind would reject this chapter twice?!?!?Author's Response: oooh, get you, missy! jetting off on holiday when i am still in school for another week and a half! the plot gets more and more confusing for me to write, i'll tell you that one ;) i don't know why i have to make things so difficult for me to sort out in the end. YEAH, WHAT CAN YOU DO? I WRITE IT. MWAHAHA. YOU JUST HAVE TO READ IT & WEEP :P
UMM, HOW DID YOU KNOW? of course it's blue. it's quite obvious from her room... she's a regular tomboy. no pink or anything like that. ew. no. lily is very perceptive ~ she loves her brother enough to notice these things.
ahaha ~ yeah, i think i'm pretty sure what kind of tension you mean :P it's thick enough to cut it with a knife in this chapter. they really do need to talk about everything ~ but summer isn't a big fan of talking :P
james and summer dancing was one of the cutest things that i have ever written for them. i can just imagine that being absolutley adorable. YEAH, ALBUS HAD TO GO AND GET INTO THE MIDDLE OF WHAT WAS ALREADY A VERY DELICATE AND MESSED UP SITUATION. albus and natalie can't go to mars because there is no rocket ship that would be able to hold all their evilness.
louise is pretty horrible. albus vs louise... who would win?
awh, well don't i feel special! you're so lovely to me ~ thank you so much :D and sorry this reponse took me so long. i have had a very, very busy week.
thank you so much!
ellie :) xx
ps. ahaha, it was my fault. whoops :P Report Review
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