Quite good, really like the bit at the end. The way he loves her and everything.
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Really good and sad when he saw Lupin and Tonks.
The last sentence was really good.
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Really great story, glad he went back and didn't give up.
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oooh tense!
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Wow, they're all pretty hormonal. An just when you thought things were getting better.
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Author's Response: hormonal teenagers:/
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This was amazing, Sirius can be really mean sometimes...
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Author's Response: he's just an angry teenager, he gets better:)!
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Really good chapter, loved the dares.
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Author's Response: thank you:)!
i like your reviews, they're very encouraging!
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I do likes :D
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Author's Response: gooodie:D!
thank you again!

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This was a really good chapter.
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Author's Response: wo! thank you so so so so much:)!

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Well done! For awhile in the last chapter, I thought Alex was pregnant, but then the way it turned out wasn't too great either.
Love this chapter, can't wait to read more.
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Author's Response: no i didn't want to do something like that, i think if somebody can write a pregnany story line well expecially an unexpected one, then it's great but i had no ways of doing that unless it was cliché!
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Really good, poor Alex. Love how Louise gets all angry and defensive for her friends, and her and Remus are really cute.
Feel so bad for Alex and I HATE Alisha and Jasmine!
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Author's Response: more Louise and Remus coming up soon, pinky promise:)!

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I do really like Louise, I don't know why. And I really like Rosie, maybe it's because she's so quiet and there isn't much drama with her.
The Red Notice, I think it's called, is a good one and another Living with/at the Potters (I'm not sure about with or at, or even if the title is right)
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Author's Response: wo! she's sweet:)
and Rosie's different, both her and Louise are in my plans for later chapters, i'm really excited about writing them:D!
thank you! have to have a look!
thanks for the reviews! you're so nice:)

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Oooh!
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Author's Response: as you continue throughout the story the writing style may change, don't let it put you off it's just because it's more simplistic and i haven't had chance to re-edit them yet!
glad you like it:)!

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Love this chapter. Everyone is pretty moody though. Poor Lily, she hasn't actually done anything wrong, though she could cut James some slack.
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Author's Response: yay:D!
yeah i know, it gets better, the first half of chapters are slightly angsty!
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Poor Alex :(

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Can't wait to read more.
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Hope you had a good birthday! Really love your story, please update soon.
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Really good story. How are Remus and her "practically related"? Just curious.
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Author's Response: Thank you for all three of your lovely reviews! Just thought I would answer this one because it has a question in it, I meant it as in they have grown up together and their families are very close so it is like they are related, i'll have the next chapter up soon.
- Lfg

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Really good, can't wait to read more!

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It brings a tear to one's eye.
This chapter is amazing. The weird thing is that I read this story before I read Moony Eyes and didn't really get what was going on, but then when I read them both in the right order, it made a lot more sense.
This story and the previous one are both beautiful and I do really wish that you would write more.
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Author's Response: You are my absolute favorite, you know that? I never bother to review stories that appear to be on infinite hiatus (like mine), but you took the time to read and review every last chapter. Your reviews actually inspired me to continue writing, so thank you so much for that!

Stay tuned, for the Christmas Special Chapter 5 (featuring James and Lily's holiday) is in validation and will be up soon!

Thank you so much for believing in me!
-Jess
(the author)

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My favourite chapter out of the three I've read so far. It just has so much meaning to it and really is beautiful.

~ Padsy

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's really a turning point for Maddie, so I'm happy you liked it! :)

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I love your story, though I'm rather confused.
Who ends up dying at the end? Teddy or Victoire?
I know it's a stupid question, I'm probably just not reading it right :D Also why did they want Teddy?
Just curious.
Really love this story, because it's not as if it's fully associated with magic, they only use it if necessary.
Monroe is great and I love the way Teddy thinks.
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Brilliant, cannot wait for the Christmas Special!
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Author's Response: The Christmas special is up and running, and Chapter 5 is currently in validation! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review all the chapters! :)

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Answer = (B)
You did a really good job with the Quidditch match! I'm not sure what I think about how the story is unfolding, but it's certainly done VERY well.
Everything seems to link together perfectly though, which can sometimes be hard to do, so I admire you a lot for that.
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Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) The Quidditch match was hard to write, I'm glad it came out well!

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Love this chapter. Sev's hearts desire is really nice, though it doesn't seem like Lily will ever love him :(
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Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really proud of this chapter ;) Thanks so much for reviewing!

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