Gah, okay I just, oh my Merlin... I loved this chapter so much! The whole thing about her arse was really funny, especially when Remus began to blush about it.

And the end of the chapter has me really giddy, because they are just perfect.

Obsessive rant over (I think...)
Keep up the amazing work!!

;D

Author's Response: You're so cute! Aha I giggled my way through writing that scene, I just couldn't help it. I hope to write my giddy-inducing chapters here real soon. Thank you!

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I really love Remus/Marianne, I have to say.
Cannot wait to read more about them!

;D

Author's Response: Remus Lupin lovers unite!!!

I have big plans for them. You might be frustrated for a bit but it's TOTALLY worth it in the end :)



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Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Please update soon!
I really want to like June, and the way you described each Marauder was really great.
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I really appreciate it.
Courtney:)

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This was really good, but I sort of forgot what was going on for a while. I loved seeing the list again, for some reason.

Keep up the fantastic work!!

;D

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This is really amazing. I love the way you've written Remus.
Keep up the good work!!
;D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Remus has definitely been fun to write about!! :D Thanks for being my 90th review!!

---Rosie

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Oh, I hope everything is okay.
Keep up the good work!!
Don't want the story to end!

;D

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the ending is to your liking!

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Oooh mysterious! Really good chapter! Poor Remus
:(
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: Sorry about the Remus thing. I needed something and it just had to be that. Thank you for reviewing, as always!

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This is truly amazing. You go into great detail at explaining the emotions one by one and make them not too difficult to comprehend.

I love the way it's as though Victoire is battling with herself, and the way she progresses slowly throughout the story.

Teddy is written greatly. I like the way she notices how he has changed since she last saw him - I didn't realise that they were engaged, but that's another bonus, because you didn't make it too obvious, too early on - and that he is quite reserved at the beginning, and only starts to get more comfortable when the awkward barrier vanished. Yes, he is quite manipulative towards the end, but once he says that he loves her, it makes everything understandable.

All in all, I loved this story. The ending was fantastic - not too typical, and very clever - and I think that if it was ended any other way, it wouldn't have been quite as good.

This was just really awesome!

Keep up the good work!!

(sorry about the length of my review. I wonder what'd be like if someone used all 6000 characters?)

;D

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you apologised about the length of your review because I was extremely offended by the amount of time and care you took to compliment my writing :P

I kid, I kid. I love long reviews. And I love you. Hope that's not too creepy, but if it is, eh. I'm sooo ecstatic you liked Teddy! When I began writing, it was all about Victoire, and I honestly didn't care for Teddy so much beyond his role as catalyst, but I found that I absolutely loved writing him this way. Happy to hear you enjoyed it as well.

Seriously though, thank you. Reviews, especially the shining ones like this, really do a lot for me and my writing. Thanks for taking the time to write this up, I'm very grateful you did.

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This chapter was really good! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: padmoonyfoot7,

It was good? Phew, I was always a bit sketchy about this chapter. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Stay in tact for the next, and I'll see ya' around. :)

PhoenixPulse

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Bloody jealous. Lucky Lily! Remus, Sirius and James treating her like a queen!!
I love the way Remus' character is being brought into the story more, and how he's a bit of a rebel.
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: thanks so much for the feed back :)

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Really good, so keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: thank you so much! :)

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Really good! Update soon!
Cos it's awesome and all...
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: Yay! You're my favorite! :)

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Really great! Cannot wait to read more.
Remus has a stalker. creepy *shivers*
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: Thank you! Will see more of the stalker soon. I'm a little nervous about writing her and finding the right balance between obsessed fangirl and evil mastermind haha. I see lots of trial and error in her future.

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Very promising,
keep up the good work!!

;D

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Really damned amazing!
Great idea, and it's great the way most of it is in her mind, because people don't usually write that kind of thing.
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: Thank you! I was really worried that no one would like this story because (in my opinion) it was really dodgy but it's been received so well.

Thank you!
Jasmine, x

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Really promising, could get very interesting.
Are the Weasleys dead, or just missing?

Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: you will know soon enough! hahaha
thanks for reading and reviewing :)

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Thank you! You and your story are awesome.
This chapter was really good and seems to be changing a lot of thing.
Everything is linking together - the files under the matress - it all fits like a puzzle. Have you the whole story planned out or do you just write stuff when you feel like putting it in? Because if it's the latter, then you have an amazing memory!
They're gonna take the rest of the family and leave Rose&Scorpius, that's clever, but will they know that it's a trap and come up with a better plan?

My mind is buzzing!
Keep up the amazingly fantastic work!!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!
(see all those exclamation marks?!)

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If only Sirius knew that what Trelawney said is true *sighs*
This chapter was really good, and loved the bro-bonding with Bruce, Tony and Clint.
It's really nice that Natasha is making friends and loved the way Thor is so interested in magic.
Steve and McKay? Interesting.
Lily and Thor - something has to happen there - but will James intervene?
Keep up the amazing work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: padmoonyfoot7,

Hello there, and thank you for reviewing :)

First of all, about Sirius and Trelawney. It's ironic isn't it, that Sirius was taking life so lightly, and completely diregarded Trelawney's statement?

And the bro-bonding! I loved writing that part. I felt the urge to connect the three together and have them grow closer together through out the year. And yesh, Natasha is making friends. I couldn't leave the poor girl out on her own. That's too cold!

And as for Lily and Thor, they're not a shipment. Lily's just facinated and Thor's just being a gentleman. James and Lily are definately going to be together.

Thanks for your lovely review!

PhoenixPulse

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I dunno if I would. Probably for a best friend, I dunno? I think it's a good plan, but I dunno if Lily will think anything of it for a while.
Remus seems to think James will actually kiss Eva or something.
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: yeah, Lily is particularly stubborn about James. *sigh*

And Remus is just jealous! Silly boy :P

Thanks so much for your reviews :)

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Yeah, I liked Remus' POV.
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you do, I was a little worried about it :P

Thanks so much for the review! :)

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Expressive eyebrows? My eyeborws have just told you that this is a really good chapter and I'm gonna read more cause this story is awesomely fantastic!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: EYEBROWS ARE AMAZING. Like, awesomely expressive. :P

Thanks for the review, I'm very flattered :)

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Poor Remus! Don't let the demons take him away!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the reviews you're leaving, I'm so happy you like my story :)

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Yeah, Sirius would love to hex Regulus himself.
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Regulus can be a bit of an idiot- but then, so can Sirius :P

Thanks for the review! :)

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I don't, but I hope to find out! Llewellyn, I'm trying to think of any pureblooded families with that name. going to read more and see if I can figure it out.
Keep up the great work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Ah, I'm afraid I've made up Eva's family completely, so google won't help!

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're liking my first fanfic :)

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