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Review #1, by abbynormalluvslunaNo Wands At The Wedding: The Crawl Begins

20th March 2018:
This is great. But wHERE IS ROSE??

Has she been kidnapped? Again? She should just expect things to go wrong by now. Or is she planning Her Revenge still?

My other thought on Rose's Revenge is that she took Hugo's strategy and somehow managed to bring Pyxis Parmenter to the wedding. That would be amazing.

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Review #2, by abbynormalluvslunaFalling For You?: Overrated Complications

11th January 2018:
The letter writing really gives this a fun element. Plus your writing is good! I don't notice anything about it. It just fades into the background while the story comes through.

I can't wait until Scorpius has to tell Rose that they're opening a Diagon Alley store. I can just imagine the amazing drama.

Love it!

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! Best compliment ever. Glad you're enjoying it! I can't wait for that part too ;)

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Review #3, by abbynormalluvslunaLike Catching Smoke: Thirteen: The Third Scene

2nd December 2017:
This story is so amazing! Iím really glad I stumbled on it. You do a great job with the characters and the mystery and the emotions. I LOVE IT :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm on a roll right now in terms of writing, so another new chapter should be coming out today or tomorrow. :)

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Review #4, by abbynormalluvslunaA Place Not Far From Here: The Pendant

5th August 2017:
I want to know what happened at that dang funeral!

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews!

You will definitely find out what happened at the funeral. ;)

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Review #5, by abbynormalluvslunaA Place Not Far From Here: The Jaguar

5th August 2017:
I love the way Amelia narrates! It leaves a lot to mystery but never so much I'm totally confused.

I also definitely entertained the idea that Amelia's mother was Rita Skeeter for a bit when her name was mentioned because of how much ruthlessness they seem to share. I think Rita Skeeter is a bit too old at this point, though.

Author's Response: Amelia begins to find more of her voice as the story goes on, but at the same time, she also leaves some things out. Maybe she doesn't realize that she's doing this, or maybe she doesn't want to rely some information (for whatever reasons). As the story progresses, more clarity will be shed!

As for Rita Skeeter, it's a coincidence in the wizarding world that she and Amelia's mum share the same name. However, I thought that witches sharing names only solidifies the wizarding culture in the HP universe. :)

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Review #6, by abbynormalluvslunaA Place Not Far From Here: The Final Hallow

5th August 2017:
Oh my gosh, this had me hooked right away!

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad to hear it! ;)

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Review #7, by abbynormalluvslunaAnd All That Jazz: Acting, Lying, And All That Jazz

9th September 2016:
YAY YAY YAY DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I HAVE WAITED FOR THIS?!? Yes, you do. Anyway I'm super glad to see you updated and continuing and all that jazz ;) The Jaria action is excellent and the Jett complication is great and the Sophie/Aiden (Aiphid maybe, like the bug?? Just the end part is questionable) is also superb. Looking forward to MOAR. You are great, keep it up

Author's Response: YES I DO BECAUSE I WRITE THE STORY. ahem. anyway, i'm also glad to be back! and also glad that you are back. and glad that all the characters are back. i'm just glad in general. thanks so much for the review! ♥

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Review #8, by abbynormalluvslunaThe Middle: The Kids All Dream of Making It

14th October 2015:
I'M SO GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK even if it's just one update! Keep it up! I love it (but no pressure, live your life you know).

So we got to hear about the great quidditch incident, very exciting. It really shed a different kind of light on Minnie's side of this funky relationship. Honestly Dare was so cute this chapter and now I'm sad that they're having a bump in their road to luurve.



Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! Right now I totally plan on continuing with it, though I can't make any promises of how often I'll update. College and life and stuff, ya know? But I'm gonna try and find time to squeeze some writing in. Thanks again for your review!
-Camila :)

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Review #9, by abbynormalluvslunaThe Family Job: The Opening Job

19th February 2015:
This sounds like it could be awesome! Definitely keep going on this story

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter two is in the works right now :)

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Review #10, by abbynormalluvslunaThe Middle: Karma's A Witch

2nd October 2013:
I love this story... Minnie' and Dare's relationship just makes me so happy. You have mastered a certain subtlety with them that is impressive. I drew a doodle for them, too, but you can't put links, etc, on reviews so :(
Just know that you inspired a doodle!

Author's Response: No way, you doodled for me?! I'd love to see it. Like seriously, that's one of the biggest compliments I've ever gotten. PM me so we can exchange emails because I really wanna see it. Oh and I'm glad you liked the story, too! Thank you so much for your review!
-Camila :)

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Review #11, by abbynormalluvslunaThe Art of Being Bad: The Art of Gormandizing Rejection Ice Cream On Your Knees At Night

19th February 2013:
This chapter has a very excellent name, which almost makes up for it's blatant lack of significant Scorpius interaction. BUT... Sander craziness and "The Incident" make up for that!! I really really super super want to know what her next big mistake is (but I sort of have a hunch *waggles eyebrows suggestively*)! Write! Write! Write! Even when life sucks! (sorry for this disgustingly large number of exclamation points grouped closely together... I swear, comedy fics have a strange effect on my brain)
~Abby :)

Author's Response: Bahaha thanks! I'm sorry for the blatant lack of significant Scorpius interaction. It just took a lot longer to fit him in than I thought. Fortunately the next chapter is waiting to be validated - FINALLY - and its 100% Malfoy.

Thank you for your review! :D

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Review #12, by abbynormalluvslunaBeing Summer: The Twenty-Ninth One

16th December 2012:
Oh my GOSH! Summer is so AWESOME! I feel sorry for everyone around her who have to deal with her.

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Review #13, by abbynormalluvslunaBadgers, Blushing and Gods of Lurve: A Hospitable Visit

6th October 2012:
Isn't it better to live a short, happy life, than a long one with nothing happy, Kats? That's what I would think.

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Review #14, by abbynormalluvslunaWonderland: In the Dark

6th October 2012:
Woah... intense. I have a hunch about Spencer, though: I think she's a squib. She doesn't know what her dad does for work, her mom is dating a wizard, and she managed to get through the barrier onto platform 9 3/4. Her parents just thought it would be better to raise her as a muggle? Maybe am I right? Possibly?

Author's Response: This is an amazing theory! We'll just have to wait and see :)

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Review #15, by abbynormalluvslunaThunder: I hate my job.

20th September 2012:
This sounds pretty awesome. Just a bunch of sexy people who all work at the same place. I want more!

Author's Response: Aww, thank yoouu ♥ Haha, yeah, I guess that's basically what this is. I never thought about that :P More shall be coming soon!

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Review #16, by abbynormalluvslunaThe Art of Being Bad: The Art of Eluding the Scooching Game

6th September 2012:
Dag nabit! I thought Scorpius was going to walk in on her terrible dance-moves. YOU PROMISED US SCORPIUS! WHERE IS HE?? *ahem* anyway... Keep continuing, preferably a little faster, but I understand. Your writing remains excellent. No worries there. Rose is freaking hilarious and Harold is endearingly (not actually) creepy and rapisty.

Author's Response: Hahaha! Your use of dag nabit made me giggle. :) Anyway, yes, I do realize now I promised Scorpster, its just the way everything happened sort of changed though, so it would make his appearance take a chapter longer. I had another idea for how she would encounter him but then I realized that wouldn't make any sense, (not that this story does anyway haha) so I went in a different direction. However, I do seriously pinky swear promise Scorpius next time. And if it ends up being a sloppy, ungodly long chapter to so be it. I've made you guys wait long enough. :) Anyway thanks for the review! I appreciate it a lot! :D

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Review #17, by abbynormalluvslunaRoyalty: Party Princess

5th August 2012:
Wow. She is a COMPLETELY different person when drunk. It's a little mind-blowing. I love the part when Fred hugged Al for his excellent idea. It just put a hilarious picture in my head. This is great stuff!

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Review #18, by abbynormalluvsluna30 Days of You and Me: Trust

26th July 2012:
This seems like it will be an awesome fic. The setting is described beautifully. It reminds me of a backpacking trip I took this summer to the Trinity Alps in California. Nature on reserves and national parks like these is just so peaceful and amazing. Then you add a Scorose ship and anything is possible :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I drove through the Smoky Mountains a couple summers ago and something about it just stuck with me. Your backpacking trip must have been absolutely amazing. Thanks so much for the review! I really hope you like the rest of the story!

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Review #19, by abbynormalluvslunaRoyalty: The WotterLufoyManderBottoms.

10th June 2012:
Oh my gosh this is so good! She is amazingly ignorant. I liked her interaction with Scorpius but when will you get back to the James Potter evaluation?? Keep awriting!

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Review #20, by abbynormalluvslunaNobody: Rosie

9th June 2012:
I'm glad you got this up :). HA! I was right about Willow and Al. I am all-knowing. "Felicity is a ...not nice person" I have used this so many times when I almost curse around my parents. Too true.

Author's Response: You ARE all-knowing! The whole situation between Al and Willow will unfold throughout the story! I hope it will surprise you! (though with my love for cliche, who knows!) Thank you Abby for the review! Again, you are my favourite person!!!

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Review #21, by abbynormalluvslunaetc. etc. (and life goes on): Denial, What's Denial?

3rd June 2012:
The beginning of this chapter reminded me of an article I read. It was about this guy recovered from a really bad concussion to the front of his brain. He seemed to recover completely, except that the emotion center of his brain was compromised. Without it, he couldn't make decisions. He was able to weigh the logical pros and cons of a situation but there were no emotions there to push him over the edge in either direction.

Example: Should I buy apples or oranges?
The oranges are healthier but the apples are cheaper. He wouldn't be able to choose between the two without emotional input telling him that he was in the mood for oranges or that the apples looked so pretty just had to have them.

Maybe that's what is so frustrating to Clemence about not having a heart. She has no emotions and just doesn't care, which is a problem when making decisions.


Author's Response: That's really cool! I've never heard of that before. And I can definitely see how it relates to Clemence. I love writing both side of her apathy - she doesn't care about a lot of things and she's kind of proud of it, because she feels like it's the trick to life. She doesn't have problems, because she doesn't care enough to be bothered. But now, she's beginning to care about not caring, because the consequences are getting harder to ignore - like not knowing what she wants. If that makes any sense xD

♥ thanks very much for the review!

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Review #22, by abbynormalluvslunaRoyalty: Princess in Royal Distress

23rd May 2012:
I hope you continue writing this. It's super awesome! This is such an original idea. I can't wait to see what happens next and how Elisabeth changes. I want her to meet the Wotters!! update soonly please :)

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Review #23, by abbynormalluvslunaThe Prime: Turbulence

22nd May 2012:
This sounds awesome. Ian is hilarious. If I were Charlotte, I would have screamed when I heard Al got prefect. He's going to make a terrible prefect. I didn't notice any grammatical errors and your style really fits Charlotte's character. Keep going! It's really good!

Author's Response: haha, thanks. Ian is quite the joker :) I would love to meet someone like him.

Charlotte was restraining her urge to scream obnoxiously. As you'll see later on she doesn't like showing Potter her "emotions". If he wants to play it unflappably calm then she will too...

although the truth is, she's rubbish at keeping calm :D

Ha Al making prefect! Yes as the fic progresses we'll go deeper into his character. But he will make a terrible prefect. He's a rule breaker himself ;)

Thank you so much! Yes i'm having a few exams at the mo, but chapter 2 is 30% done. It'll be up soon :)

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Review #24, by abbynormalluvslunaBreaking the Quidditch Code: Like Father (like son)

17th May 2012:
Ravenclaw is gonna get another female beater and Fred is going to you-know-what (keep it 12+ :)) with her. Duh. Then he will have f* the whole Ravenclaw team!!

Author's Response: Yes, yes he will have. It's going to get real. haha. Thanks!

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Review #25, by abbynormalluvslunaBreaking the Quidditch Code: The Worst Type of Hypocrite

15th May 2012:
I almost cried when Al and Lily came to the hospital wing with him.

Author's Response: OhmygoshIknow. It was so warm and fuzzy. thanks!

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