Reading Reviews From Member: WhispertheRavenclaw3
  
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Review #1, by WhispertheRavenclaw3Clandestine: Crescendo

9th September 2012:
(Since my author name is different from my forums username), I'm WhisperThroughtheWind ;)

I really liked this story. I loved the love triangle between the three of them :)

In a way, I feel bad for both Rose and Lily. Rose loves Scorpius, but he chose Lily (tear). And then Lily still goes back to him after he hurts her...(another tear).

I have one question though... when Rose was talking about when winter came and Scorpius stayed inside, he stayed in his bed or on the couch, by the fire in the Slytherin common room. You said Rose is a Gryffindor, so does she assume that that's what Scorpius does in the winter when he stays in the dorm to escape the cold? I know I'm poking at little things, and it's not a bad thing, I'm just curious XD

And I liked how you used your quote. It was so creative.

All in all, great job :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for coming by to review :)

I'm glad you liked the story! I definitely feel bad for both Lily and Rose, especially since both of them have this unspoken tension (to which Lily is fairly oblivious) over a boy who doesn't seem to really respect either of them.

You've got it right - that's what I meant by the line (or two) that comes right after that paragraph. You might see it if you look again. I'm glad you liked my use of the quote! :)

Thanks for this very kind review! I'm excited to hear the results of the challenge!

-Amanda


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Review #2, by WhispertheRavenclaw3Hogwarts for dummies: Have yourself a merry little Christmas

22nd July 2012:
Aww I feel so sorry for Cece's dad :(

Another fantastic chapter :D I'm loving this story more and more.

There's one thing I noticed, though: when they were all talking about Megan, Al said that she arranged things with Dumbledore.

Dumbledore is...well, you know. ;)

All in all, 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much! hahahahaha Oh my god I am so stupid, I can't believe it! hahah thanks a lot for reminding me! That's really embaressing, I will fix it now :D

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Review #3, by WhispertheRavenclaw3Getting Away With Murder: Getting Away With Murder

23rd June 2012:
This is good :) Very creative! It shows a dark side of Hermione that no one would expect. And it's written really well. Great job :D 10/10

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Review #4, by WhispertheRavenclaw3Wonderland: If You're Surprised And You Know it Clap Your Hands

6th June 2012:
Yay new chapter! :D

Halarious and brilliant, as always! I did not see the ending coming at all! You've written this story so well; I can't wait to see what happens next :)
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is in the queue :D

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Review #5, by WhispertheRavenclaw3Cherry Blossoms: Silence

3rd June 2012:
I love it! It's so well written...and I love how you've written the characters. I'll definately be reading more!
10/10 :D

Author's Response: Aww thanks!!^^ I love my characters :') And I'm glad I'm not the only one!!^^
It might take a while before I update though :/ What with me doind NaNoWriMo and mostly updating my main fic (called "Screw it!" as I'm specifing as I,m shamelessly advertising my work xD) but I'll try my best to get it soon-ish :)

Thanks for taking the time to review! It means a lot to me :3

-June


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Review #6, by WhispertheRavenclaw3Summer: The Awkward Meeting

30th May 2012:
I love this story :) It's so well written. Wow, I never would've guessed Summer was Mrs. Figg's granddaughter! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you read the next chapter when it's up :)

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Review #7, by WhispertheRavenclaw3Wonderland: Disaster

2nd April 2012:
This story is so full of win! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you think so! I'll try to update soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D


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