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2nd February 2013:
Scandalous! Let's hope Grandfather Weasley doesn't find out! Nice story :)
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2nd February 2013:
Your descriptions are seriously impressive. Your first paragraph blew me away. Excellent work :)
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2nd February 2013:
So much suspense! You should add more; it was good :)
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{reviewid: 2768031, reviewer: 'Expelliarmus26'}
2nd February 2013:
It's like the song was written for this exact moment! Very creative :)
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28th January 2013:
I love Ron's rambling internal monologue. Fun story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
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28th January 2013:
You did an excellent job describing the setting. Nice work :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 2694392, reviewer: 'Expelliarmus26'}
7th May 2012:
That story was quite precious! Very cute.
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7th May 2012:
Very cute. I always love a Ron/Hermione story!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am glad that you liked it! =)
-SR17
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29th February 2012:
Cute! I was surprised that Scorpius was a Gryffindor, but I like it.
Author's Response: yeah haha i just felt that it was right! thank you so much for the review! really means a lot!
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25th February 2012:
Wow. This story is absolutely brilliant. About halfway through, I realized that was going to die and it killed me! This story flows so well and is very easy to get sucked into. An absolutely excellent piece; you are talented :) 10/10
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I really appreciate that. This is my absolute favorite thing I've ever written, so I'm quite humbled that you enjoyed it so much. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! :)
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24th February 2012:
Absolutely precious! The beginning made me laugh out loud.
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22nd February 2012:
This is a very lovely reflection :)
Author's Response: Wow thanks! I honestly thought this story would be buried somewhere in the depths of HPFF so it's so cool to get a review! Plus YOU m'dear are my first review EVER on here so CONGRATULATIONS!! You have succeeded in making my day ;D
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20th February 2012:
Wow, this is fantastic! Your descriptions are so clear and beautifully worded. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words ! You made my day :) Sachita
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20th February 2012:
This is funny! I like it :)
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{reviewid: 2662216, reviewer: 'Expelliarmus26'}
20th February 2012:
I think this could be the start of a very good novel. I think you should keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I want to, but I'm still trying to work the kinks out of the plot before I start writing things down. After I do, I will most definitely make it a novel
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20th February 2012:
This was so sad, but beautifully written. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Sad was what i was aiming for, i'm glad you enjoyed
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20th February 2012:
Very cute! A few spelling errors and such, but overall it was very good :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Those darn spelling errors and what nots. I was having trouble with the Word document not having the spelling and grammar check.
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19th February 2012:
This is beautifully written. I can absolutely feel the emotion in it!
Author's Response: Thank you!! That's great to hear, sometimes I get too lost in the wording and the writing feels too mechanical.
Thanks for reviewing :D
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14th February 2012:
I absolutely loved it! 10/10
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12th February 2012:
Very sneaky! I had to reread part of it because I thought he was proposing. Very nice one shot!
Author's Response: I was hoping most people would have too. I liked the idea of Harry making a big deal for something people ignore.
Thanks for the lovely review!
Lizzie
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10th February 2012:
Adorable! I loved this!
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7th February 2012:
Loved this! Awesome story :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! And thanks so much for reviewing.
Alex :D
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6th February 2012:
This was an awesome one shot!
Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you think so, I honestly thought it wasn't that good.
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4th February 2012:
I'd like to take this time to be like the people who yell at the screen when they watch movies.
NOO! Lily, James, watch out! Voldemort's coming! RUN!
Ok, I feel a little better now. 10/10, of course :)
Author's Response: Haha, aww. :) Haha, I'm glad. :D
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.
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3rd February 2012:
Adorable. You did a great job writing this. I love reading about Ron and Hermione :)
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