I just cried!
On the first chapter too!
I didn't cry when I read the Reaping in the Hunger Games, so why did I just start crying to a fanfiction?
Maybe because I have more of an emotional attachment to the characters in Harry Potter?
Yeah, that's it.
100/100 :']Author's Response: Omggg I can't believe it- that means so much to me thank you so much haha (: x Report Review
I siriusly (Pun intended) want to kill Zabini >:C
Breaking up their little moment like that! God, you'd think he'd be with Luna!!
Please write more,
10/10 :DAuthor's Response: I wanted to kill him too! XD
Haha, very nice pun. Thank you for reading! :) I really do appreciate it! Report Review
9/10Author's Response: What!! is it good or bad? Report Review
The little sister could be called Sydney!!!
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more :)
9/10Author's Response: haha yeah maybe. Hermione is still in first year. Report Review
Woah man, woah.
Pansy and Ron? Interesting pairing.
Good job on this chapter! I'm slightly confused about which year Hermione is in. Is she still in first year?
9/10 :)Author's Response: yeah weird heyy. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
UGHH..You are too good :)
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Dramione forever! Report Review
I noticed you had like twenty sum chapters, so I'll try to hurry and catch up :]
10/10 :D Report Review
Watch your grammar and spelling, aswell as capitals..Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
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E) Other=Why can't you let them kiss? WHY?
11/10 :PAuthor's Response: Thanks Sydney! Haha sorry it will come eventually...well it will probably come eventually some times it's fun to be evil! ;)! Thanks as always for another great review! I always love to hear from you and you always put a smile on my face! Thanks a million! Jenna :) Report Review
I really liked this chapter :)Author's Response: Thanks Sydney! I'm really glad you did! Especially since I didn't feel it was my best work or anywhere near so it means a lot to know you still enjoyed it! Thanks so much for the great review as usual! Jenna :) Report Review
I'm really interested to see were this goes! Please update! 9/10 For you ma'am (Or sir).Author's Response: Why thankyou. And yes, it is ma'am. Hah. Report Review
That was very..provocative? I'm slightly stunned.. What is wrong with Charlie? He must be what? Seven years older than Hermione? I just find that REALLY odd..Charlie had never really been very interested in Hermione...
I'm scarred for life :'(
Just kidding :)
9/10 You should re-read some chapters to look for typos.Author's Response: You should continue reading to find out why he's all of a sudden so interested in hermione. It explains it all in the next chapter. I'm sorry that the provocative-ness isn't what you're looking for. I know it may seem pointless but it is very important to the story. If you really read the story the scenes show the different forms of love and romance. They also show a contrast between Fred's relationship with Hermione and Charlie's. But if you don't like my portrayal I'm afraid this might not be the story for you. Because the innuendos will not be eliminated.
I apologize. Report Review
Why must you keep us hanging?! Ughh..I can't take this anymore!
I just want to tell Hermione and George to get a move on and ADMIT THEIR FEELINGS ALREADY!
UGHH..GEORGE..HERMIONE..why? Why can't they see it?? Tell me Jenna, (yay! Got your name right :D) when do you plan to FINALLY, let us read about George and Hermione finally becoming a couple?? GOSH. I can't wait ANY longer..
10/10 as always :DAuthor's Response: I must keep you hanging because I enjoy the delight of knowing I am torturing my readers with suspense to the point they feel they are about to explode...just kidding! Gosh I'm not that evil! ;) I want to stick to my plot line! That's basically my reason for keeping you waiting all this time! I do too Sydney! I want them to hurry up and admit their feelings and I'm the one writing the story so I can imagine how frustrated you are by now! Haha well done for getting my name right! They can't see it because that's how I decided to write the story so really you should blame me not them! If I told you when it was going to happen it wouldn't have the same effect as when you're surprised by it! Well you better get used to waiting Sydney you may have a while to go yet! Thanks as always for the brilliant review! I really appreciate it! Thanks again! Jenna :) Report Review
And I'm stupid!
The last reveiw I posted, (forgotten which chapter), I called you Jenny, when obviously your name is Jenna!
So yeah, sorry 'bout that :)
10/10Author's Response: Um I don't see the link between you being Canadian and stupid! But I love Canadians! I've got a lot of family who live in Canada! I'm a Londoner myself! Don't worry I guessed you meant Jenna! You didn't need to clear that up I'm not that dumb, you know? lol! Thanks Sydney! Jenna :) Report Review
:] I just feel so..so content, right now! I never really took an interest in Oliver, but you have made me see the light!
Can't wait for chapter 28 :)
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NO. I WILL NOT ACCEPT IT!
I'm not going to beleive that Draco will forget about Hermione!!
And now, I'm just going to go read chapter 28 D:
I'm so nervous about what's gonna happen :'C Report Review
D: Gwen ruins everything! GOSH.
More please? :)
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I feel extremely behind, mostly because you posted this in May (I think). In my defence, I discovered this addicting story this afternoon.
Anyway, I congradulate you on graduating :)
I really love your story, as I do enjoy a good Oliver/OC.
Again, congradulations, and I'm gonna try to catch up :]Author's Response: Ahh, I posted this story ages ago. Literally. It's been...-checks real fast- like 2 12 years.
Holy crap. It's taken me this long to finish it? Man. I suck.
But thank you! :) I'm glad you're enjoying this story! I set out to write a different Oliver/OC so I'm hoping it fulfills that expectation.
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Happy new year!
Your review means the world to me :D ♥ Report Review
'Why Ginny? Why is it that every time we come close to admitting our true feelings that something kills the moment?' Hermione asked her.
Sydney Blackturned to Hermione, "Ask Jenny" she said in a sullen voice.
:|Author's Response: Uh-oh! Sorry Sydney! I can't help it though! I have big hopes for this story since it's my first fanfiction and I have a basic idea for the plot line which I want to stick to! Sorry :(! This was a very clever review though! I must say you made me laugh! Thanks for the review! Jenna :) Report Review
I think this is my favourite chapter yet, just with the part about the purple dress, and George flattering her, I was laughing so hard my mom asked me if I was okay..yeah, you are officially going on my favourite Author list :DAuthor's Response: Oh wow! Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much! I did really enjoy writing that chapter! I'm happy I could make you laugh with this! Yay! I am so honoured to make it onto your favourite author list! Thanks a million! I love reading your reviews they always make me happy! Thanks so much! Jenna :) Report Review
I LOVE your story, it's become addicting. I love Hermion/George, to me it's one of the most unlikly pairings, but I LOVE it!!
For some reason, I don't really care for Harry in your story.. It's not that you haven't writtin it well (You're doing great!!) but he just seems so whiny, know what I mean? I know he's lost someone really close to him, but he seems to not want pity yet he's bringing it on himself.. I never really liked Harry at all in the books, I'm more a Weasley girl, but I don't like whiny Harry :| Not saying you should change it, I've just never seen Harry as whiny, so I guess it's an interesting way to read about him... yeah... 10/10 for you Ma'am!Author's Response: Thanks a million! That's exactly what I thought too! They're complete opposites but the more Hermione/George stories that I read the more I started to like the pairing and eventually I fell in love with them being together! So that's when I decided to write my own! I do love Harry but he's not one of my favourite characters at all! I never really realised that the way I wrote him made him seem whiny! It's just I write about his moments with Hermione and how she's like his sister so she's one of the few people he can open up to. So I guess because he's telling Hermione how upset and depressed he is it makes him seem whiny but it's really just because they're so close! Maybe I need to be more careful writing that from now on! Thanks so much for sort of making me aware of that! Thank you very much for the great review! Hope you continue to read, review and enjoy the story! Thanks again! Jenna :) Report Review
Percykins for the win!!!
I never really liked Percy in the books/movies, but after reading this, he is now my favourite Weasly (After Fred and George of coarse!).
I think Lucie will say yes to Ollie, but then Percy will get jealous, and make is move :3
I'm just gonna go dream about Percy now, Bye! :)Author's Response: YAY A CONVERT TO THE PERCY FAN CLUB! Haha I feel honored to know that my story made you love Percy. Thanks so much for your review! I think I'll just go dream about Percy now too. :) Report Review
So, I love Hermione and George together, and you have a nice plot, but you need to watch your spelling/grammar.
And when someone is speaking like this:
"Hi Hermione! How are you?" asked Harry. "Great, thanks!" replied Hermione.
You should have a space between the two people speaking, it's easier to understand who is talking at which time, Like this:
"Hi Hermione! How are you?" asked Harry.
"Great, thanks!" replied Hermione.
So every time someone else starts speaking, you need to jump to the next line, and write their response there.
Remeber you need capitals on words like:
I, I'm and things like that.
Before you publish anything, use spell check aswell.
Again, great plot line, I'm hoping to read more.
:) 7/10Author's Response: Thannk you for the amazing review!!
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I loved it! Report Review
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