{reviewid: 2750160, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
3rd November 2012:
PLEASE keep on writing i want to know what happens, this is an amazing story!
Author's Response: well thank you very much I'm flattered! Yes, I will keep writing. I'm just a little busy with two jobs and school :P. Plus i just moved... but I'm getting a hold of everything and will continue writing soon!
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{reviewid: 2740298, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
16th September 2012:
PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT AND I HAVE TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS.
SO PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE.
Your writing is so good. I love the story so far and i cried in the last two chapters.
Author's Response: Oh jeze! I am writing more right now, don't worry! DON'T CRY THOUGH! WAIT UNTIL THE END TO CRY! ;D
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{reviewid: 2739880, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
14th September 2012:
Going good so far... can't waste time need to read next chapter!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad to see someone coming into the story! Keep reading, lovie.
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{reviewid: 2739534, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
13th September 2012:
Interesting... and yes she is clinically insane. That's all right, it makes things more interesting.
Author's Response: She gets better, promise ;D.
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{reviewid: 2739265, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
12th September 2012:
I'm confused... Maybe that's a good thing
Author's Response: It gets more weird... Good Luck!
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{reviewid: 2736359, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
31st August 2012:
I'm loving it... Keep up the good work and please post up more chapters.
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{reviewid: 2736358, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
31st August 2012:
Cute! I thought it was adorable. Poor Remus, she must have hit him real good...
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{reviewid: 2705991, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
8th June 2012:
Creepy. I like it... I wanna know more. Keep on writing
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{reviewid: 2704140, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
3rd June 2012:
Interesting. i'm loving the story it is soo good. keep on writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I rather plan to stick with it! :D
~TFM
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{reviewid: 2688382, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
22nd April 2012:
I love Remus! Oh my goodness... I'm loving this story and Elena's relationship with Sirius to. By the way i've actually read the book 'Murder on the Orient Express' and loved it...
Keep on writing, i can tell this is going to be a great story!!!
10/10;)
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{reviewid: 2688041, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
21st April 2012:
It's so sad how she is treated... I just want to give her a hug!
Nice story, still loving it.
Author's Response: Heh. Yeah. But I promise that things get better! Just keep reading.
~TFM
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{reviewid: 2688038, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
21st April 2012:
SOUNDS INTERESTING. I like it so far. Good work.
9/10:)
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Please keep reading!
~TFM
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{reviewid: 2687713, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
20th April 2012:
Wow.
Your writing is amazing, you must continue with this story...
Author's Response: i'm really happy you think so... and i'll be continuing, no doubt! ;)
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{reviewid: 2687711, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
20th April 2012:
I honestly don't know what to think... It is soo different to any other story i've read before... i think i will keep on reading.
9/10;)
Author's Response: the fact that you thought the story was worth continuing to read is enough in MY books! thanx a LOT for that!
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{reviewid: 2687698, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
20th April 2012:
So cute!
I think this story is very funny and sweet and amazing. I love how awkward and embarrassed she was by speaking to Remus and Effie is hilarious and reminds me of someone i know.
Author's Response: I try to give Elena that "I feel like I know someone like her" feel. I think it makes her seem more realistic if you think she reminds you of someone.
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{reviewid: 2687696, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
20th April 2012:
I love your idea! I love Remus and Sirius so this is going to be very interesting.
The name Elena is very beautiful and i liked how you developed her character although i think that after her tom-boy moment with the makeup she needs a very girly-girl moment to even things out... You know to keep with the idea your going with.
I'm really impressed with your style of writing (it is one of the best) and i can't wait to read more.
10/10 ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Also, thank you for pointing that out! I'm trying to balance things out. :)
Also, thank you so much for the compliment on my style! It really means a lot.
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{reviewid: 2684645, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
12th April 2012:
Sounds interesting. I LOVE Cinnamon rolls so i cam understand her predicament... Keep on writing..
Author's Response: Thank you! And cinnamon rolls are awesome, but then again, I have an extremely sweet tooth, so all sweets are. xD
~Khanh
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{reviewid: 2671308, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
12th March 2012:
I completely adored the first story 'cause and effect' and i can't wait to read more.
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{reviewid: 2647991, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
23rd January 2012:
This story is awesome and you must continue or i shall hire an angry mob and that won't be pretty... I must say that your story is a little fast for me to keep up with and it felt like it was jumping a bit, maybe try to slow down and go into a bit more detail. great story and love the fact that you mentioned how lily missed snape.
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{reviewid: 2647989, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
23rd January 2012:
That was interesting... And i kinda hope Sirius is falling for the girl instead of just trying to get in her pants. Keep on writing your very good.
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{reviewid: 2647987, reviewer: 'Chesh'}
23rd January 2012:
I think that this is a really good idea and that you MUST keep on going although i find it hard to believe that Lord Voldermort could or would ever bring himself to father a child (Disturbing image ahhh!). but i think that this story has a lot of potential.
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