Yay happy ending! A very good ending too. The whole time I was thinking "Lily, just get your shit together!" And when Lily owned Scarlet, I actually said, "OH SNAP! BURNED!" I am so happy the way the story ended, and I can't wait to read more of your storiesAuthor's Response: haha I know, even I was getting frustrated with Lily by the end. Oops haha. anyways, glad you liked the story! Report Review
What's that sound I hear? I think its the sound of shit about to go down. I mean really Sirius? Why Would you think that that would be a good idea in ANY universe?! But anyway, this a super cute James/ Lily fic. Can't wait to see what happens to Sirius! Report Review
Oh my gosh THANK YOU SCARLET for finally saying what i have been mentally screaming at Lily. I have just been thinking 'Get over yourself Lily! You are human and have faults just like the rest of us.' But I would be pissed if I was James as well. I don't really know if you should smush the last two chapters together, only if you can get everything in. If you can't, then please don't combine them. Anyway, cannot wait to see how the story winds down.Author's Response: Haha I know, right? Gotta love Scarlet and her bluntness :P Glad you like it! Report Review
Oh My God! This is so amazing. Not to mention extremely creative! I loved the Avengers (saw it twice). Haha i can just imagine them chilling at stark towers eating shawarma! I love how you added the romance between Natasha and Hawkeye. I can't wait to see what comes next!!*mentally freaking out*Author's Response: that random kid,
Really quick, I have to say, I'm lovin' your username. :)
Anywho, YAY! I'm glad you loved it. Thank you so much for the review. I'm aiming on trying to make it as creative as possible. And as for the Clintasha shipment/pairing, I honestly think they look adorable together as well, even though Natasha seems determined to label themselves as "just friends".
And you saw it twice?! You're so lucky. I was lucky enough just to see it once. I know some people saw it three times and I'm like "BRO!".
But anyway, chapter two should be up soon. I'm just going through validation issues with my other chapter for some other story right now. I'm so disorganised. But at the meantime, don't freak out. There's bound to be more soon! :)
Phoenix Pulse Report Review
I this was hilarious, I loved it. Thank gosh that it was only Alice to find out first. And i am so sorry for your loss, you're in my thoughts. Report Review
ooohh starting to get juicy, can wait to see what happens! Report Review
Oh, hello again. I almost thought that you forgot about us readers. I loved Scorpius and Al, Scorp was hilariously childish. Poor Bastard was funny as well, God Fred is probably a very mean drunk. To be honest I am waiting for a plot. But Im eagerly waiting for Louis' demise, so PLEASE don't make me wait so long this time! :) Au revior!Author's Response: yeah...um...sorry? i'm terrible at updating, i know! but i (think) i'm getting better. at least my chapters are getting longer, right?
plot. what's that again? my stories don't really have a plot (which is absolutely terrible and should never, ever be done because it's a very bad idea). but would it make you feel better if i said i'd try to both get a plot and to make you wait a lot less? i love Scorp, by the way. and Freddy is a spectacularly mean drunk. Report Review
Oh my gosh, what just happened? I was not expecting a boggart, but it was the perfect explanation. Its kind of sweet that the thing that James fears the most is a dead Lily, it just shows how much he loves her. C'mon, this cannot possibly add to the fire. After all that, if Lily still doesn't think that James loves her she has some SERIOUS trust issues. I can't wait for another quick update! 10/10Author's Response: haha you'll find out what happens in the next chapter :) Glad you liked this one! Report Review
Yay! Such a great end to the story! I'm also glad that Hugo received to 80 points, he desrved them. I am happy that Hufflepuff ended up in 3 and how extremely happy they were because of it. I am also happy that hey didn't end up in first bcause it's slightly unrealistic for Hufflepuff. It is about time that Connie and Hugo got together, I've been waiting 3 chapters for that! Lastly the scene with Ron and Hugo was so touching. It really did explain why Ron had that attitude for Hugo but how it changed and that he accepts Hugo. The story ended great and I am so happy that I happened across it in the first place! 10/10! Please keep writing at this same quality!Author's Response: Hugo definitely deserved those points but I knew I couldn't go as far as to make Hufflepuff win all around. But, they were more than happy with their third place. You don't have to be first to be happy, after all. Yes, I worked hard to explain why Ron acted the way he did. He was never a bad father, even though sometimes it seemed to come across that way, he just didn't really understand Hugo right away. Now that he understands his son, he can accept him just the way he is. I hope my writing stays at the quality you expect! Thank you! SO! MUCH! Report Review
haha i knew something was going to happen this chapter with snape. i was just thinking during the weighing of the wands scene 'wait for it, wait for it, Oh snap! she just called snape a blind greasy bastard! Atta girl!' Jade needs to apologise to fred! i cant stand for a sad weasley twin! another greatly entertaining chapter :) 10/10Author's Response: Jade was bound to snap at someone. xD Maybe we should be happy it wasn't Karkaroff, who knows what she would have done to him.
She's a bit socially awkward, I don't think she knows how to handle the Fred situation. She knows how to lie and how to do it well, but there's also a lot of guilt with every lie. You can't have a relationship built on a lie. She's going to get a push, well more of a rough shove in the right direction in the next chapter though. Report Review
yay! another great chapter! and a fast update too. do you know approximately how long this story will be? however long it is, the story is entertaining and is constantly accumulating. i wonder what james is going to so with the information that lily remembers the attack. so many questions relating to this story that i cant wait to find out!Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed this chapter. Things will start getting resolved with the next chapter, but it won't finish up quickly. I am looking at at least six more chapters. (last time I said something like that it grew to sixteen chapters as the story kept developing as I wrote.) Report Review
Hey there, its me again. I am a crap reviewer because this is my first review for this story, I apologize for that. But anywho, I am loving this story and I can't wait until the next chapter (iopefully the wait wont be long). I really want Snape and Jade to make up because lets face it, Jade kind of needs him. Moody's character is really a jerk, way different than how he is portrayed in the books. but it makes sense coming from Jade's POV. Keep on writing please, and i promise to be a much better reviewer!Author's Response: It's a great review, no worries lol. I admit that even I don't review the stories I read >_<
Yes, Jade needs Snape, she realizes that too but she's not quite ready to forgive him. I also think Moody would be kind of a...well maybe not a jerk, but certainly not nice. You only really see him from Harry's view. I imagine he was not so pleasant to the Slytherin students, especially ones who have Death Eater parents. Report Review
wonderful chapter! i was kind of sad when we didnt read the play. but oh well! i cant wait to see who the next two chapters! i know that they will be a great end to the story.Author's Response: I played with a lot of different ways to tell this chapter, and I know I didn't spend much time on the production when it was actually showing for real. I guess I just figured everybody probably knew the stories already. Your review was great and really encouraging! Thank you! =) Report Review
hooray, a new chapter! This was so good, I can't wait until the next. Was the reason for the last part because the bond between Lily and James was being broken therefore weakening Harry's future? I cannot wait to find out! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it. You may be right. If you are then it would mean that Lily always had some type of feelings for that arrogant prat Potter. Report Review
Yay! First match in the bag! I feel like you snuck in a Hunger Games-specifically Mockingjay- reference, that was awesome. Other than that , i have no real critiques, the story is very good and i like where it's heading. Report Review
Wow usually i love ginny. U made me think "ginnys i bitch". Funny how you thought of this while in the way to disneyland.Author's Response: Im a ginny lover too. I just dont love her with harry. Report Review
Whoa wait... Its done? Aw man! I loved this story and how it stayed on the canon track without directly coliding with the books. I really want to see jade's and snape's relationship after their fight. Cant wait to read the next part of the series. 10/10Author's Response: Next story shows them more and how they handle the situation. And yes, the idea was to have a character, not so much on the outside of everything happening so that she doesn't affect it, but someone who gradually slips into the story. Only changing a few details at first, then you'll begin to see bigger changes.
The next story is in process, it just feels like it's going slower because of the 3day waiting period, but I already have it finished so it's coming
Also, must say that I like your name xD Report Review
I have to tell you, faldo is my favorite oc ever. The story was very good and covered a large span of time. I hope you keep writing :)Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I don't have as much time as I used to, but I'm working on two new stories, actually. Hopefully they won't take long. I'd love to finish them completely and then start posting so that the readers don't have to wait as much. I hope you'll like them if you ever come back to read more from me. :) Report Review
1st id like to say that i like this story. And 2nd its funny that you mentioned no interruption because i just bought his whole album like 5 mins ago :) Report Review
TEAM ALIBUS ALL THE WAY! Please dont give up or get bored with the story! I love it!!Author's Response: I won't get bored, well I haven't yet but even if I do I won't give up as I am determined to get the story complete XD
A lot of people are Alibus and wanting to kill me secretly!!! D: But as I've said it's a novel plently more action ;}
~BlameItOnTheNargles Report Review
I have a question. Would'nt Ginny be Mrs. Potter, not Mrs. Weasly? Report Review
Hmmm waiting for the drama to play out.. Lol.Author's Response: oh it will. =] just you wait. gets better very shortly Report Review
Awww this chapter was really short. Im not gonna lie, i am i little disappointed. But the content was good, so that reconciles it a bit. Cant wait until the next chapter!Author's Response: I am sorry to disappoint you with the length of the chapter because there may be more short chapters coming up. I try to write a chapter by what happens in it rather than word count. Hopefully the future chapters are interesting enough to make them tolerable.
Thank you for the review. Report Review
Pretty pretty please update soon! Great chapter and i cannot wait to see James' and Albus' reactions. 10/10Author's Response: I know! I'm working on it right now! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Oh this is amazing. Plot twist!! Oh my, i was expecting their cover to be conpletely blown, but no you go and twist the plot so that everyone is obliviated! I love this story and cant wait until the next chapter!!Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed my little twist. Report Review
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