Reading Reviews From Member: Hermmy
  
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Review #1, by HermmyThe story of Lily Potter the 2nd.: First time at Hogwarts
8th January 2012:
I like it so far. But here is a tip, try to put some description between dialouge. Say like:

“OI! HARRY, GINNY, ALBUS, LILY, OVER HERE!” screamed Ron Weasly
Hermione rushed over and silenced him with her finger.
“Oh Ronald please keep your voice down!” whisper-scolded Hermione!

Just a thought :)

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Review #2, by HermmySectumsempra: Saved
7th January 2012:
Aw thanks for staying up for us! It was worth it! My eyes have just read an amazing chapter. What am I saying? They are ALL amazing!

Author's Response: Hermmy, you are too kind! I'm glad you think my chapters are "amazing," that's great to hear!

I am pleased to say I got a solid eight hours of sleep last night and am feeling very good.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear! And as always, next chapter will be up as soon as possible. :)

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