AWW! (That is one thing I never thought I would say about the Malfoys, so your writing never ceases to amaze me.)
THAT. WAS. SO. SAD.
I am going to die of the brilliance of this.
Poor Narcissa, poor Lucius.
Really, you are amazing.
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: :D
So happy you liked it. :) Please don't die though, we have our baby to think of! :O
Thanks so much. Your reviews make me incredibly happy! :D Report Review
WHAT? Lenny meeting Sirius? Really! WOW!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter- and I dont think I reviewed the last couple about her dad and stuff so here goes:
I felt so sorry for her, the way the girls screamed at her here, the stuff she has to deal with and her brother and father and mother.
It must be really hard for her, and I think I would have done the same thing. So I really feel for her and I think she should be getting a lot more pity from everyone. I like people pitying characters, it gives them a good excuse to be all depressed and weird. Lenny is weird all the time though ;)
I love Lenny, she is so funny. And Sirius, just because he is Sirius Black and hence an amazing god like super hot beast.
I love the way you write this, and your characters, and OH MY GOD I JUST REMEMBERED SHE IS GOING TO MEET HIM AS L.C.
Sorry, but it is very exciting and I just wanna know what happens already!
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: The next chapter will explain all :D. Lily is like that, she finds reasons to yell. She was just so worried and so mother-like that she took it all out on Lenny. Lenny is so relatable, thats what I love about writing her. There's little pieces that everyone can relate to. Next chapter will be put in the queue in the next few days :D. Thanks for the review, love! Report Review
I LOVE the way you ended this! They are so sweet and happy and it's just perfect. I'm glad you didn't go into a snogging fest like I imagined you would, but this is just so much better, for them and for me because now I just have to imagine their whole relationship!
Thanks for the amazing fic, I'm so sad that it's over now, but I'm proud of you for finishing it :D
AND LEA AND SIRIUS WON! I always knew they would, but I thought you might be sneaky and make them come second to Slytherin or something evil like that.
The dance and everything that happened afterwards was just written so well.
Good job, I'm gonna miss Lea and the rest of them :') (hint: new story soon?)
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Thank you SO much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review. And yes, that is one of the reasons why I chose to end their relationship that way by asking her out on date because it allows you lot to imagine however you like what they'd be like as a couple! I never thought I'd post a fanfiction, much less finish it and I am so overwhelmed by the response to it. I'm going to miss writing Lea and all of them but the good news is that I've already put a new story up and it's another Sirius/OC one! xoxoxoxoo Report Review
I loved it. It's really well written and very powerful, plus angsty, which I love.
Ginny's emotions were so powerful and for once I felt a connection with her. I dont normally like her much, because she seems to have no feeling and just be the little sister, girlfriend kind of person added in. This was... different. Her character suited JKR's but also let me see another side of her.
I'm pretty sure I have seen your stuff around, so I'll go and have a look, since this was so good!
Good job :)
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Wow thank you so very much, that really makes me very happy, and I'm thrilled you liked it.
Yes, she doesn't have much of a standing chance in the books, she's kind of a little bit here, and little bit there. So I guess that's why I like writing her so much.
Oh thanks, you don't have to. :)
Thanks for the review,
Lizzie. Report Review
Sorry, I dissapeared for a few weeks and now I am trying to catch up on all the reviews I have missed.
Just letting you know that I read it, loved it and am very intrigued as to the other plan.
AND THEY ARE ARRESTED?!
This is just too far! I am completely lost and my theories are confusing me, so EXPLAIN IT QUICKLY, I waaant to know who this bloody traitor is!
Haha, I cant wait to find out. You are very, very good at keeping me interested. Brilliant chapter :)
PS. You're PM should be coming soon, and I have A LOT of ideas ;)Author's Response: YOU DISAPPEARED AND I SHALL CRY.
I'm glad you liked it! And I know! *gasp* whatever happened?
I'm afraid I will explain it in my own sweet time :D and, the traitor is a secret! SHHH!
Thanks for the review, you always make me laugh!
PS. I has ideas too! Yayay! :D Report Review
Prepare yourself for a very confusing and long review.
Right, I like John and the twins best. Oh and Tony. Mitchell as well. Okay, I like all of them but the twins the most. I loved their reaction to Eva (and Remus as well)
Also isn't it blonde not blond? I am pretty sure it is. Maybe you can do it either way.
Well, even though nothing much happened in this chapter, I LOVED IT!
The guys were so, so funny and I can tell I will love them all already. No wonder Eva is so awesome if she lives with them!
But, OH MY MERLIN, POOR SIRIUS! I almost cried for him, he is so cute, and aw so alone. How could you do that to him?! Now he is all alone while his friends go and have fun and IT'S BLOODY CHRISTMAS! He better go to Eva's. Or else I will kill you.
Oh. I see now, since they all have bikes, that's were he learns how to ride and gets the idea to fix it up? Yeah. Seems right to me. Otherwise he can be friends with the guys cause he can ride as well, and he is awesome and so are they.
I can't wait to see Eva's mum now! She seems so funny, such a character.
OH! You better hurry up and get her and Remus together. During Christmas if you can. Just hurry up with it! I KNOW SHE LIKES HIM ANYWAY SO JUST MAKE HER REALISE AND KISS HIM!
Haha, well brilliant chapter, cant wait for the next!
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Hello. *is prepared*
Really? JOHN? He's nasty! He's *must not give plot away* . depending on how much I write, next chapter or the chapter after, you'll not like him.
Silly Kerryn. :P
Okay, I did a google search, and blond is for describing guys, and blonde is for girls. This comes from the French, when an 'e' is added to make words feminine! (are you impressed?) Learn something new every day :D
Why does everyone think Sirius is going to turn up at Runswick? Really? Consider him as a character. He's not, is he?
Please don't kill me- we have our baby to think of! :D
Eva's mum is great; her insanity will become legendary (I hope).
Her and Remus will get together when I want them to! I just enjoy torturing you :P
Thanks for the review :D xx
Not as funny as the other chapters, but I liked it anyways. The bit with Victorie was done really well, and there was a lot of emotion in it.
It was a little too drawn out and...well, boring.
BUT I JUST HAVE TO SAY- Lorcan was pissed the Rose brought Scorpy along, so that means that Scorpius might know something about Lorcan being the traitor, that's why he made Scorpius seem guilty! AHH!
You dont get a super long review this time (sorry!) but I just have to say, it was a nicely done chapter and I am enjoying this story very much!Author's Response: It wasn't supposed to be very funny... :D I was going to write all of this in one chapter, and then I realised I was going over 3000 words, so I thought, yeah, I'll stop now. Sorry for boringness, it had to be done. Exciting stuff next chappy, I promise! :D
So now it's Lorcan? Are you sure this time? Couldn't you also say that the other way around? Not that I'm saying anything, though.
Thanks so much for your reviews, they always make me very happy :D Report Review
I like it so far, especially the relationship between the different characters. Mary and Methelda were cute and funny in a sort of dorky way, and you can tell the she gets on with Albus despite their bickering and that they are really good friends.
I picked up one mistake: You said that Mary was the 'quite' girl, instead of quiet. Just a little typo :)
So far the writing is good as well, a bit jumpy but it adds to her personality. Some sentences were a bit long and confusing though, but overall it was great!
Metheldas character is coming through nicely as well, and I really enjoyed reading it. She just seems so bubbly and full of life, its refreshing!
Mary was funny as well. Scary though... but I guess you meant her to be that way. Albus seemed nice and a typical Quidditch guy.
Anyway, good job so far :)
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Hi inkbutterfly!
Thank you for your review.it's great that you like relationships between my characters. I have tried to make them as real as possible. I know my writing doesn't flow that well. But I am working on it.
Albus needs to more than a just a Quidditch guy. I a hope I make his character is a more real. Once again,thank you! Report Review
AND they still havent danced! Aw. But, wow they have a lot of pressure to deal with now. Poor them.
I cant wait till the next chapter...
LET THEM WIN!
Marlene, oh wow, that was sweet and I got all excited about it because Remus and her are just sooo cute!
Good job, and I am looking forward to the update :)
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: I know, sometimes I'm even surprised I managed to stave off the dance scene for that long for them, but all things must terminate.so here comes the last chapter very, very soon. And I'm so glad you enjoyed the Remus/Marlene scene, you guys had told me over the course of the story that you wanted them to get together and I gave in! xoxoxo Report Review
What do I think? ITS AMAZING!
The emotions are just so strong and it is really powerful.
I cant actually explain how good it is, but you have to believe that it is very, very amazing.
I feel so sorry for Albus, and I really want to see how this progresses.
And I must say, good job on writing a story as sensitive as this, it can be easy.
-Kerryn xoxAuthor's Response: Your reviews so far have given me so much faith in this story!!
I feel quite sad for Albus too! Especially since I know what's coming, which will be revealed very, very slowly, because I'm evil XD
And thank you for that! The sensitivity is something that's hard to write, but lots of warnings to people help a bit!
Thanks once again for your review!
-Dani! Report Review
I really, really enjoyed this.
It just caught my attention and drew me in to feel their panic and all the emotions. It was really well written as well.
Although you only gave a vague idea of what was actually happening (kidnapping and abuse or something?) I think that the overwhelming emotion and sort of disconnected feel actually added to the effect. So if you do that on purpose or not, it was really good.
Brilliant chapter, and by the way, I like the summary as well, it just made me want to read it and find out what it was about!
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!!
I think I kind of did it on purpose *shrugs* Like, I definitely intended for Albus to be disconnected from everyone else in the story, so I think that's what you're talking about.
And thanks for that as well! I was worried about the summary! Report Review
You know, I think it is actually pretty good.
I've seen it around a bit and never actually bothered to read it, because well... I think the problem is the summary. Maybe try and change it and you will get more people reading? Dont explain what it is about but just give them a glipse of your writing, to lure them in...
Well, the writing is good but the chapters are short and the paragraphs are a bit blocky. Try and smooth it out a bit more and make it flow better.
Rose seems nice and I like the way you showed the relationship between her and Cedric. It was very cute! So the characters and the writing are both good, just try to lengthen your chapters and show a bit more of what she feels or is thinking.
It's got a lot of potential, so keep going!
-Kerryn xx Report Review
Oh my. That was amusing.
Did they just shag on the kitchen floor?! That is so, so hilarious.
Ah! They better end up together, like properly, not pretend. I knew they would end up falling for each other!
It was a brilliant chapter, and the family was very good. We didnt see much of how Harry acts but Ginny was cool.
I just think that the transition from the chat at the dinner table to them drinking later was a bit quick and it took me a while to figure out what just happened.
Yeah, thats 'bout it. Great chapter!
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Yes, they did shag on the kitchen floor. Very classy, yes? We will see if the two end up together. Are they willing to put their careers at risk after all the time they've spent working so hard for them? Who knows. Except for me. I know :D.
Harry wasn't welcomed into this chapter all too much. You'll see him in a few more chapters having a heart to heart with Gigi. I totally meant to make a break between there, but forgot to add it (I will be doing that after I respond to this review). Report Review
Hah hah! Here I am reviewing again, because I normally review ALL the previous chapters on stories that I like... but I really dont have that much time to waste. Actually I probably do but anyways, I wanted to review this one because it was my favourite and I thought you should know. I thought that you did the whole drunk Lenny thing brilliantly, she seemed more open and just bloody hilarious. And the way you did the thing with Sirius coming to save her was perfect, and the way she spoke to him was so funny. I loved her comment "Sorry, I was too busy starting at you." Hehehe... I love Lenny. It was a good way of beginning her crush on Sirius, because she will end up having one right? Right.
But Ludo, gah! I hate him. He was practically going to rape her! Oh and in the later chapter how he and Sirius were fighting and he said she would be a good shag, THAT WAS SO SAD! Poor Lenny, Sirius was very sweet to her though,
Ah yes, I was also writing this to say your welcome for the review, you definetly deserve them. I think its good that they are defined, and they are a little over the top but in a good way. Some authors just end up merging their characters into one big melted trait mess and the story turns into a pile of vomit. Yeah, thats not going to happen with yours though.
And I tend to ramble on in reviews but it is also my way of showing that I liked it so much that I wanted to tell you EVERYTHING that I think! Haha, it also means I think you are a brilliant author and that your opinion means something to me *nods head knowingly* In other words I am saying you are an amazingly brilliant and talented author!
Yay! I am looking forward to the next update... and if you take to long I have plenty other chapters I havent reviewed on to bug you on! Haha, no I wouldnt do that. No pressure at all ;)
Anyways, even thought yes you do get quite a few reviews (a decent amount) I think you deserve to have 700 per chapter! But then you wouldnt be able to reply to mine so...hmmm.
Okay! I think thats all I needed to say, and also I LOVE THIS STORY AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT BECAUSE IT IS AMAZING AND HILARIOUS! I LOVE YOU!!
-hehe, Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: I love you too!! I guess I just have a lot of experience with being drunk ;D. That's why it was so easy to write it! Only kidding (kind of). She's drunk, she can't help but stare at Sirius. There are plenty more of those moments to come, don't worry. She will have more than just a crush on Sirius, trust me.
Lenny's feelings were hurt by Ludo. He won't get away with doing that so easily. He'll get his own.
I hope it doesn't turn into a pile of vomit. It'd probably be Lenny's drunken vomit. I'm very very very flattered you think so highly of me. It's a first. Only kidding (sort of, again).
I would LOVE 700 reviews per chapter. That'd be pretty freaking amazing. Every authors dream though, right? Report Review
I KNEW IT! I KNEW YOU WERE AUSSIE! Thats why you are so amazing and funny, and probably why you swear quite a lot. Did you know/notice that ever? We all swear all the time. Yep, we are just too awesome.
Oh, I am Aussie.
We are amazing because we have Milo and maltesers and koalas and evil spiders and EVERYTHING! You should read my story about an Aussie girl at Hogwarts. Its not up yet, but when it is you should because it will be awesome. ESHAYYYZZZ!
Hm. Anyway back to the story.
I LOVE IT! YOu are ammmaaazzzing! and a genius. I was laughing my ass off the whole time.
Oh Voldy, you are too funny for me.
Okay! Update soon :D
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: You, we Aussies are totally badass (: and extremely awesome. High five!
Of course I'll check out your story, when you post it! I'm going to go and bookmark your page after I finish writing this reply, so that I don't forget (:
Thank you again! It makes me so happy to know that at least 1 person likes reading my story, and I'll try and update ASAP, but you will have to wait a couple of days, because I've got camp tomorrow.
~Lily xo. Report Review
HAHAHAHA! I LOVE VOLDY AND HIS FLAT NOSE!
Hehe, he is so silly and funny. Pity he is evil.
Ah! I love you for being amazing and brilliant at writing :DAuthor's Response: Aww! I love you to, for reading my story and, of course, for reviewing! Thank you thank you thank you!
~Lily Report Review
I never ever ever thought that I would enjoy reading something from Voldy's veiw. I mean, he is evil right?
But he was just so funny! I mean really really pissing myself laughing sort of funny,
But some advice, leave the page number and reference out, it is just distracting. You can mention at the end how it was the actual words. Also with the flashback, just put it in italics and we can figure it out.
I loved it! It was fresh and different (even though I am sure he wasnt like that) and incredibly funny! Good job :)
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Yo!
Thank you so much (: I really wasn't sure if it was any good, so I just posted it anyway, in the hope that maybe one or two people, like you would enjoy it (:
Thank you for the advice - I know that it's distracting, but I wasn't sure how I was supposed to reference it, because there are all sorts of rules about that stuff, and it's annoying to have it get rejected and then have to repost it and stuff. But in the next chapters, I'm going to put an asterisk and put the reference at the bottom. And if there are any other flashbacks, that's what I'll do.
As a matter of fact, I'll probably edit this chapter as well as per your advice (:
I am 100% positive that if J K Rowling had written HP from Voldy's POV, it would be nothing at all like this, but if I did it too realistically, it would be a really dark story, and I prefer to be humorous (:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review, and I hope you continue to read my story! (:
~Lily Report Review
GAH! This is too true! Lego kills, its evil!
Haha, brilliant little story, and I think that Luna/Draco (even though I have never seen them before) are very cute.
Good job :)Author's Response: haha! I know... they're evil.
I really like the Draco/Luna ship as long as they are written well. when the characters get too ooc then it's weird. Thanks so much for reading, and taking the time to leave a review! Report Review
Oh my, so you have so many review because it is actually good!
I just had to read this, because it seems very popular and your other story was brilliant. Well, I normally dont review stories that already get loads of reviews, but you deserve it.
I love Lenny, she is cute and funny and completley crazy. In a good way. Plus she is so socially awkward and doesnt give a damn what people think, which is good. Then sometimes she sticks up for people and cares about them, which surprises me because is very... clueless a lot of the time. I know she will fall for Sirius, at least I am convincing myself to believe that. I mean, its the obvious thing for you to do and... they are destined ;)
Also, I have to say that you are doing a brilliant job in developing her character, she is becoming more social and I feel like I can relate with her a bit more in the last chapters than at the start. Its a good paced progression, not too rushed that it is stupid and not too slow we get bored. Just please dont make her act completely normal at the end, because even though I like her making friends, I love Lonny Lenny!
AND SIRIUS, oh my golly gosh! I always love him, he is like my complete favourite character and you just did him so perfectly. Kinda mean and very big opinion of himself, but then he cares so much about what L.C. thinks. Its cute and really sweet, while making me laugh at him anyway.
Mary is an ass hole. Really, no offence to your character (okay, yes, offence) but she is a little slag! I hope Alice gives her what she deserves. Ohhh, Alice! She is adorable, and shy and aw I wanna eat her face off... Yah...um.
Okay! Lily is great as well, perfect to canon and just how I pictured her.
AND I HATE LUDO! How dare he!? Haha, you are good at making unpleasant characters :)
Anyways, looking forward to an update. Love the story and your writing is simply amazing- good job!
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: It's these kind of reviews that make an authors day. Seriously, it did. I didn't think my story was that popular, just because i've seen so many stories that are at 700 reviews by their 15th chapter like this. +I'm so happy that you like this story. I'm dead serious. Lenny is my baby and I love to write her. One of my biggest worries is that I'm over exaggerating all of everyone's personality trait, you know? Like Lenny is too loopy, Sirius is too charming and loveable, Mary is too slaggish, and Ludo is too much of a...whatever he is. I better stop babbling, hey? Anyways, I really really really enjoyed this review. It was so nice and made me smile way too large. Report Review
Poor Lily! Poor James, he better come and rescue her now. But its full moon so how can he? AH!
Why didnt he kiss the poor girl? Damn, he was probably in shock.
Awww. That was really cute and sad! Looking forward to an update.
Brilliant chapter :)
-Kerryn xxAuthor's Response: Actually, full moon has already happened. I may have been accidentally ambiguous, but the Prefects' meeting occurs on a Monday or Tuesday night, with the full moon the following night. When all the drama goes down, it is Friday night, so the Marauders are unoccupied past their routine gallivanting and such. And yes, James was shocked. I think the next chapter will be at least partially from his point of view but I am totally swamped with schoolwork so I don't know yet.
Thank you again! Report Review
What!? LILY??? No.
Gah. You always manage to make me doubt my theories on the traitor/s! Farrr outt, this is soo confusing now. I KNOW! Maybe someone put it there, so she looks guilty???
I love it and I love how you always keep me guessing. My Lysander theory was so good! Argh. FRUSTRATING! But in a super amazing, oh my goodness I love this story so much kind of way.
Lily? I really cant believe that. No wait, I dont believe that! ITS NOT TRUE! See that? Yep, Lily is innocent.
Maybe. I mean a TOP SECRET folder is very suspicious, but is Lily so silly (hehe, rhyme) that she would write that on the folder, instead of disguising it? I mean, if I had a secret that I wanted to hide because I was a little traitor and a slimy rat, I wouldnt go declaring it for anyone to find.
I also thought that it was a little unrealistic that Rose would be able to get in so easily, or is that just because she knows her. I mean a kick ass spy and super villian robber wouldnt just let anyone in with a simple spell. Especially if she was a traitor as well. I mean, that is just a bit too over confident.
There we go, I am happy with the way I disproved that little trick :)
Oh, I know I havent PMed (is that even a word) you in agggeesss and I am sorry! Its because my computer crashed, I lost my phone charger and the forums are blocked on my school laptop. It really sucks. But when my new charger come I will be able to talk to you again! :D YEAH!
Haha, did I mention how much I love this? BECAUSE IT IS AMAZING AND PERFECTLY ADDICTING. Really, sometimes I forget to praise you because I am too busy with the plot and the characters, but that should be proof of it anyway. I just love the way you write and what you write.
Oh and there is a second chapter of someones (ehh, mine?) story up... just putting that out there ;)
I LOVE YOU AND YOUR AMAZING STORIES! And, of course, I love Rose!
Oh, and I thought it was funny how Lily is so messy, I think it suited her character...
AH! I ALMOST FORGOT! Vic and Teddy *have heart attack* WHY THEM? WHY NOT ROXY OR SOMEONE ELSE? Right, she is a traitor (maybe, maybe...) ANYWAY, back to the point. I like the loveys, they are cute! Dont hurt them! If you do I will hurt you. Oh and it is a kind of unexpected plot shift eh? I mean it at least proves they arent traitors, so I can swipe them off my supect list (NOT that they were even on it!)
I am so suspicious. Ah! Did I say that I feel sorry for their parents yet? Well I do :'( They dont know and what if someone gets hurt and almost dies and then they have to tell them? OH NO! WHAT IF THEY FIND OUT? It would be horrribleee!
I am not going to be to kind, because if I suffocate you with a super kind and long review, I wont find out who the traitor is. AND I HAVE TO KNOW!
Give me a hint, or a little puzzle? Pretty please, since I always give you nice reviews ;P
Oh, on the topic of hints- what on earth did you mean with the Carrow but not Carrow? I was like. ahhh...what? I was only talking about one Carrow, like the death eaters son, or relation or whatever. LIKE A DEATH EATER REFORMED! But then you just confuse me, and I went from whoa its a Carrow to oh its a ..Carrow?
Yeah, even if this made no sence, the length should prove how much I liked it :)Author's Response: Oh my lord, Kerryn. The length of your reviews both astounds and confuses me. And, I've got a little warm fuzzy feeling inside because you like my story so much :D
I'm not disproving any of your theories- I'm just throwing more people in the mix. I'm sorry. It's fun. And it provokes long reviews... :D
The thing is about Rose getting in so easily, is that Lily lives in a Muggle neighbourhood, and her boyfriend is pretty anti-magic. If he can't get home, he'll be very annoyed. Also, Lily wants to blend in. Having four locks and a guard gnome (like a guard dragon, but smaller and more feisty) is a bit obvious. Like the Top Secret thing. So, who knows about that. (by the way, be impressed that I made all of ^that up just now because I accidently made it too easy to get into Lily's house).
It' okay about the PM'ing (totally a word) I'll get you back some other time... actually, I won't because I've got a brilliant (in my head) idea and I think we should collab :D
Why Vic and Teddy? Because I needed some victims and someone else mentioned in a review that they wanted to see some Vic/Teddy action, so I thought hey! Let's make them really ill. I'm nothing if not obliging.
Why aren't Teddy and Vic on your suspect list? I think, all other accusations aside, that they are pretty good suspects.
And also, you're not going to suffocate me with a long review? That ship has definitely already sailed :)
With the puzzles- as soon as I think of a good hint, I'll hint it. But until then, all you've got is a Carrow but not a Carrow.
I think the identity of the caller is obvious. I think I've slipped it in clearly enough. So :P
Thanks so much for such a beautiful review. and keep an eye out for my PM xx Report Review
I have been meaning to read this for a long time, but never got to it. Well, I am very glad that I remembered now. IT IS SO GOOD!
I love Gigi, she is just so sarcastic and perfect. The relationship between her and the other team members is really cute and funny and I love it. The whole story, its just amazing.
xxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you got around to it! Gigi is my baby and she needs to be shared with the world (only kidding...kind of). Report Review
LOOK I REVIEWED IT NOW YOU CAN WRITE MORE! Yeah? YEAH!
Okay, just so you know- if I start reviewing your story, chances are that I will keep going till the very end. So look, now that you have one dedicated reviewer, you can write more. Yay!
I laughed so much, so if you are aiming to be funny or just naturally are, good job! I think all stories should be funny, or just really sad.
Well, the storyline is brilliant so far and you writing is very good. You manage to keep me enthralled (nice word, hey?) throughout the whole thing, but keep the mood light and fluffy. Very, very skillfull.
Okay I am a bit high right now, but I am serious when I say I like it and that is is AMAZING!
So keep going, please. Oh, and good luck.
And by the way, I LOVE SIRIUS AND I HOPE THAT AMY GOES OUT WITH HIM AGAIN! :D I bet that is your little plan? Yup!
Haha. You, my darling, are amazing.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review/advice, i literally just did a little happy dance after i saw the reviews...
It's nice to know that someone really likes it and i promise to keep continuing with the story..
I do love Sirius, and Amy of course. You know, I have the feeling this story will get very interesting...
Well, I love it and your writing is amaaazinng! Report Review
Haha, this is very amusing! And written nicely as well. Oh, are you from Australia? I am!
Yeah well I thought that the boy would be Sirius Black? I mean, good looking and in that time frame, seems right.
I like it :)Author's Response: Hey thanks again for review and yes i am from Australia. Go Down Under!!!
Nice guess... Report Review
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