I think James might have some competition, so he better get his butt down there and do something... I'm not really sure what he should do... But something. lol I love Nick though, he is just so sad, and it might be weird, but I like sad people. And I cannot wait to see the next chapter! SO UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE with hast(:
Lots of love,
Claire (I think we're on first name basis now ;) Report Review
I think Nick is a wizard and is gonna go to Hogwarts, AND I think Nick has a little crush on Summer... James ain't gonna like that. And I rather like Tessa, she is sassy lol I love this story, update soon and I will be extremely happy! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
~ClaireAuthor's Response: Thank your taking the time to review! My first one for this story as well (I don't really count the first one cos it was just a bit strange)
I like Nick too, and James but I don't wanna give too much away Report Review
I like it. Good story.
Jk I freakin love this story! Update with hast! I really don't like cliff hangers :( lolAuthor's Response: Haha lolz I have the fifth chapter in the queue so will probz be up by monday thanks 4 reviewing and just 2 let u no the next chapter has the return of Ciara Green, Jessia's bully :( xx
~Macy x Report Review
THEY KISSED! AW!!! I LOVE IT! ADORABLENESS ALL AROUND! BUT I'M SURE SOMEONE HAS TO HAVE SEEN THEM AND TAKEN A PICTURE, HER MOTHER IS GOING TO FREAK OUT IF SHE FINDS OUT. I MEAN. WOWZER! AND I LOVE ALBUS, BUT THAT MIGHT JUST BE BECAUSE I'M A SUCKER FOR GREEN EYES... Jeepers creepers this is an awesome story, I also love Molly and Griffins relationship! It's adorable how much she likes him, even if she isn't aware that she likes him... Oh, and just a suggestion, the next chapter would be really cool if it was in James' POV. It'll be awesome without it, but I just thought I would share that..(:
Awesome Chapter, update soon please!!!
Lots of love,
Claire Report Review
WHAT?!?! HE KISSED HER?!?! There should be a law that says you can't end chapters like that. A LAW! I love this story! Update with hast and I will love you forever (in a completely platonic way, not creepy at all).Author's Response: Ha ha..I am updating next chapter very soon now for you.
I love you too. Don't worry I say that to everyone ii meet, people think i am weird but it is really fun to say that to guys, it freaks them out! :D
I love it! I think it's interesting and I look forward to seeing more!(:
~ClaireAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing Report Review
Holy crap on a hole lot of crackers! I cannot believe she told him! Thats just so mean! And I honestly think she should stick with James, as long as he doesn't dump her bum because she snogged his brother. Which is a very reasonable reason to dump someone. But I don't know! Albus is still adorable! But James is hot. It's not fair, I want the Potter boys fighting over me!. Is it weird that I wish fictional characters would fight over me.?
Anyway, awesome chapter! Update with hast!
Love love love,
ClaireAuthor's Response: I know! Very dramatic, yes?
Ah, you're a James fan I see! At the beginning, everyone was, "JAMES JAMES JAMES" and then suddenly it was "ALBUS ALBUS ALBUS" so it's lovely to see some more James fans xD
No, it is not weird. I dream of many fictional characters turning up and whisking me away ;)
Thank you for the lovely review! I shall update very soon- in just a few days potentially- I'm about 90% done with this chapter- it's a long 'un!
Keep reading! Report Review
OMG HE KNOWS!!! It's like the moment I've been waiting for FOREVER! I really hope they find her! I hope James finds her! POOR JAMES! And I love Fred! He is just awesome! But I still want to punch Scorpius in the face! It wouldn't kill the boy to show some emotion! But I still love him, even with his lack of emotion. Update soon! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next!
Claire Report Review
I love a good Remus/OC and this one looks like it's gonna be a good one! I think Lottie might be a seer? Maybe?
Update soon please!!!
-Limwen Report Review
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT!!! I love the idea, it's so new and has never been done before! I can't wait to see where this goes! Update soon please!! I can't wait to read more!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really trying to make something original here, and I really appreciate your review :) Thanks again! - KP Report Review
OH NO YOU DIDN'T!!! You can't leave me hanging like that! Well, you can, but you shouldn't!!! Now you REALLY have to update FAST!!! Because I might die if you take too long. Well, not die die, but everyday that goes without an update I will be left wondering what will happen next! Well, maybe not everyday, I do have a life... lol
update with hast please,
limwenAuthor's Response: I'm pleased to tell you that the next chapter is waiting for validation! So hopefully it'll be up soon unless it's rejected (which I don't think or hope it'll be). Anyways, thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
HOLY CHEESE CRACKERS! They kissed! And she ran! And I think if I was given the choice between 2 potter boys I would pick James. Albus had his chance, now he has to deal with the fact that he took WAY to FREAKIN long to make a move, and now she is a taken women! ! ! And now James is going to be heart broken! And I might cry if she choices Albus and not James, which is weird, because at the beginning of the story I was pro Albus, but now I am pro James! Goodness, this story has come a long way. I remember when there were only 5 chapters, and now there are over 20!!! Story's like this one inspire me to work more on the ones I have up, but then again, it is SO much easier to read then It is to write! :P
Anyway, kind of got off topic there, back to the point: AWESOME CHAPTER! Update soon, darling!
LimwenAuthor's Response: I KNOW! IT'S SO CRAZY! AND I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M GOING TO DO! HELP ME D:
Haha, I think I'll cry too. If she chooses James or if she chooses Albus. Ah well, I'll figure it out :D
I know! My early chapters just seem rubbish to me now, it's lovely to see from my personal point of view how my writing has grown! Thank you so much for sticking with me, it means so much :)
I'm honored that I've inspired you to write- that made my day :D I know exactly what you mean- I'm always reading other's work when I should be working on my own!
Thank you very much for such a lovely review and for keeping reading :) I'll try just for you!! x Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY! It is just SO awesome!!! Update soon, because I cannot wait to read more!Author's Response: Thank you! It's about to get a lot more interesting... Report Review
love it! I cannot wait to see how Charlie is going to explain this to her!!! :D
update soon please!!!Author's Response: Hopefully I can do so, my next chapter is mostly done :) Thanks for the review! (Charlie/Mel forevs :P) Report Review
AW! I'M JUST SO HAPPY!!! I CANNOT STOP GIGGLING! THEY ARE SO DARN CUTE AND GAHH! I FREAKIN LOVE IT! :D
LIMWENAuthor's Response: Haha thanks. I'm glad you loved it. I hope you read the next one! Thanks to your review! :D Report Review
I FREAKIN LOVE IT! I cannot wait to read more! I can tell this is going to be lots of fun to read! Love it! Update soon please!!!
~limwenAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! :D Report Review
Awesome story! It's very well written, and very original!! Update soon, I cannot wait to read more!!!
-limwen Report Review
Awesome chapter!! Update soon, this is going to be an awesome story!!!
(Side Note: Scuba diving lessons??? THAT IS SO COOL!)Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm hoping to update sometime next week...and yeah scuba lol thanks, I really like it ...it's so weird being able to stay under so long! Report Review
I love this! I love how its from the Death Eaters point of view, and how they truly think they are on the right side! Update soon please!!! :)
~limwenAuthor's Response: Thanks so very much! I love reading other fanfics, especially the ones with characters on Voldemort's side, however they usually see the light and switch sides. And I'm left wondering what the story would have been like if they hadn't. Lol. Report Review
Update soon, please!!! Ilove this story, and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!Author's Response: I'll be updating soon, I promise, love! I'm happy you're enjoying this new instalment!! Report Review
HOW COULD SHE!?
SHE SAID IT BACK!?!?!? WITHOUT MEANING IT?!?!??!
At this point in the story I'm beginning to dislike Albus and his stupid cluelessness!!!
WHY CAN'T SHE JUST LOVE JAMES?
Update soon please, I love this story, it is fan-freakin-taskticAuthor's Response: I KNOW!
I WAS YELLING AT HER TOO!
Ahaha, I actually didn't write her saying that originally, but then I thought this was more realistic for Katrina The Stupid Idiot (as named by Henry) so hey presto!
AND I KNOW! But there wouldn't be a story without Kat's mixed feelings! ;)
I will try! Thank you so(o) much for that lovely compliment- it means so much! And thanks for always reading and reviewing- your reviews never fail to make my day :) Report Review
OH MY MERLIN!!! I love it! please update soon!! I can tell this is going to be fan-frekin-tastic!
~ClaireAuthor's Response: thanks so much!...i'll hopefully be updating within the next week or so :D Report Review
She's all like "I lost the game boohoo!"
But everyone else is like "Its okay winnings not everything"
But then shes like "NO! I'm a terrible quiditch player!"
But then James is like "It's okay to lose, winning isn't everything!"
And then shes like "I ditched an interview,"
And then he says "I'm proud of you,"
And I'm pretty sure everyone reading this went "AW"
At least I know I went "aw". Update soon, I'm pretty sure after reading the lengths of my reviews you already know how much I love this story, but I will tell you again! I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Update soon please!:)Author's Response: I love your condensed version of the chapter! Scarily accurate. But I'm glad you thought the James/Nata scene was cute. I was worried it might be a bit much for them, but luckily no one else seems to think so.
I'm so so happy you like this story so much. Seriously, it means so much when I hear that people like my writing :) And I always get excited when I see you've reviewed because I love your reviews!
Thankya as always for reviewing!
-Rebecca Report Review
AWESOMENESS!!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!Author's Response: Why thank you :-D I'm so glad you liked it! More is coming I promise xx Report Review
I think her "nice side" is not too drastic of a change, but just make sure you keep that "I don't give a rats ass what you think about me" attitude. Which I did see in this chapter! :)
I love it! Her and Scorpius are so cute together! But I still wonder if James has a thing for her or not? And eventful chapters? CANNOT WAIT?!??!?!
I look forward to reading more!!!
~LimwenAuthor's Response: aw good! i'll make sure to keep her essential personality traits the same, and don't worry they should be up soon!
thanks so much! Report Review
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