FIRST! And I'd just like to say I totallyy guessed she killed herself. Love you and update soon, can't wait for the last chappie! :DAuthor's Response: Well done! Thank you so much - I'll update as soon as possible!
Courtney:) Report Review
agh i luff your story! I just put out my first chapter, and I was wondering whether you had any tips? Your story has so many reviews, not to mention its AMAZING. My favorite part is always little Tyler quote at the bottom, it kinda reminds me of good luck charlie, that disney show? yup, ok well, amazing as usuall, love you, bye! Report Review
oh not you too! whats been going on with the eyebrow as ass, banana as wand, garden shed as arms thing?! but other than tht, great chapter, cant wait for that sequel;)
OH wait, i got it! its the annual april fools day prank ahahaha funny stuff lol ok bye:DAuthor's Response: Thank you! You reviewed despite the craziness!
I got hit too :( everything's been all over the place. I hope you could enjoy the chapter and it was what you wanted for Janel!
The sequel should be up within a week! I'm really excited about it.
Be sure to read and review!
- Kelci x Report Review
erm... i may be missing something but, you replaced the word wand with banana, mouth with big toe, face with purse, fuck with goat, and ass with eyebrow... why? and other than that amazing usual haha
xox miluv Report Review
That. Was. AWESOME. It worked yay lol! So, now Janel (the couple name I made up for them) will officially become Janel, right? Oh and, how many chapters do you approximately think the whole story'll be? James and Nel should go on like a celebratory dinner, and then realize their true feelings for each other, and become the greatest couple of all time. Oh yeah. Okay, well, AMAZING as per usual, and love love love you so muchhh, xox miluvAuthor's Response: Thank you!
They managed to pull it off! And I've given you more James drama ;) I lurve Janel! I might have to write that in AN.
The story is thirteen chapters. I've already put chapter thirteen in so it should be up soon.
I'm not saying what happens in that final chapter, but if youre shipping Janel you should love it! ;) I don't know about the greatest couple of all time though.
I've already written chapter one for the sequel. But I've written some about that at the end of chapter thirteen. Be sure to read that.
I love you too, sweetie :) Keep reading and reviewing!
- Kelci x Report Review
We Indians do like our spices! Just as much as I like this story haha!Author's Response: Haha, hi Miluv!
Seriously ecstatic to come across another Indian! So, you're not in India right now? Nostalgic? Aww. That's sad. I'm glad you enjoyed the little piece of India that has made it into the story so far...
Thanks, keep reviewing!
- M. H. Report Review
I love how you describe India, it's totally accurate! I can picture it right there in front of me haha. I'm Indian as well, so that just brings a huge sense of nostalgia :) Report Review
this looks really really good so far! Can't wait to keep reading! Report Review
november 14th is my birthday lolol :D great story btw xox Report Review
HI! This has so much potential, it got me SO excited!!! I'm like bouncing up and down in my seat as I write this. I like that it's also very different too, bc it doesn't seem like James is a lovesick puppy or like Lily is this perfect sexy school girl type thing, you know what I mean? I could be coming off as crazy right now but... that doesn't matter, it's super duper late and I'm SO tired.. i'm not even sure that this is legible lolol but hey GREAT STORY BEGINNING WOOT WOOT! lol okay good night update soon!Author's Response: Wow it's so nice to have such a long review as my first! You made me feel so warm and happy inside. Thank you so much for reading, I hope that this story will be different from others, it's not perfect but I'm trying! Thank's so much again! I hope I will see you again when I post another chapter! Sleep well! x Report Review
and we love you to the moon and back:)Author's Response: AWW THANK YOUUU :') xx Report Review
i just fell in love... update fast Author's Response: I'll try: Thank for the review :) Report Review
really reallly reallly good. short, but good. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks!
-Liz Report Review
im supposed to be studying for midterms right now so this has to be quick, but this story is AWESOME POSSUM and I can't wait for the next chapter so hurry:D im pretty excited for this now too lol. well back to studying for me.. wish me luck haha!Author's Response: I'm supposed to be studying too! It's alright! I'm glad you like it! I'm trying to update as fast as possible! I have a ton written. Validation time sucks though. Anyways, study hard! Good luck! Report Review
update... update...update...update... update... in case you were wondering i'm trying to hypnotize you to... update... update... update... cuz ya know this the best story ever so... update... update... i'm going to use up all my 6000 characters i have in this review box until the message gets across so... update... update... update... update... visualize a swinging pocket watch as I hypnotize you to... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... update... this better work cuz this is taking forever so... update... update... jeezus 6000 is a big number... update... update... update... update... i'm officially at 5334 now... update... update... update... this getting tiring... update... visualize a bunch of other... updates... as many... updates... as 5197 characters would need because my fingers are starting to cramp and the word... update... is start to look like it's spelled wrong... update... visualize your computer and the next chapter of girl being... updated... update... update... update... so in conclusion to my hypnosis... UPDATE! teehee:) Report Review
we should all throw chocolate mice at her, or something like that. though that might be a waste of chocolate mice. LOLLL hahaha you made me burst out laughing, great chapter as alwayss love you update soon:)Author's Response: ahaha, thank you. i was eating chocolate mice at the time and so that was the first food that popped into my head. i do love chocolate mice. thank you :) and the next chapter is in the queue :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
hey there:) i haven't reviewed in a while so I thought I'd use this opportunity to write a super long note about anything and everything, that you don't actually have to read, as long as you know that you're totally awesome, and also the only reason I bother waking up before noon in the summer! Okay you don't have to finish reading now, but I'll keep going anyway:) So, ready, so this story, I think I read like once when it was super small, and then forgot to save it, and then it came up again on the 'recently added' list, and I freaked when I saw it was by you! I was like whaat? How did I not know about this before? So then I started reading, and halfway through, I was like woahh I HAVE read this before, so then when I continued reading it, I was delighted to find it was even more captivating than before! So I kept going and now I'm absolutely positively OBSESSEDD with the world of Autumn and Dom;) Because of this, we're todally getting an update soon! YAYY! Buut, before that, I suppose I'm going to have to tell you what you should already know. We, as a population of TAOS readers are dying! We need an update!! That series is what got me saddled with an unhealthy obsession of you and your stories, leading to the slightly scary result of me wanting to chain you to a pole in my basement. jkjk haha but still. You deff need to update! kk so that's it for today on the Miluv Is Going to Embarrass Herself By Talking About Stupid Things that No One Should be Forced to Listen Too show! UPDATE EVERYTHING! WE LOVE YOU! miluv outt! *cue cool gangster homie sign where they make a fist, pound their chest twice, kiss the fist, and then make a peace sign that miluv completely botches up, and ends up poking herself in the eye* (Yes, that really did happen) (I'm a loser, I know) (and, byeee:D) Report Review
I can't believe this story is actually over! I loved the whole thing to pieces! I loved how in the end, it wasn't about the crap James had done unto her, it was about the crap she had done unto James! Once she got that, the whole thing fell into place, because that's what a relationship is about, right? Learning to take blame for the crazy things that happen in life together, and loving yourselves for it. Your story is truly amazing, and I've loved it since the beginning:) You inspire me.
the crazy chick who followed this story from the
beginning, and once left you a review about birds.
Yes that's right. I'm the crazy reviewer girl:} What
can I say, you gotta love me:)Author's Response: Haha oh my god I don't think I will ever forget the birds review. It still makes me laugh when I think about it! I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story and thank you so much for being such an awesome reviewer! I loved every single one of your reviews :) And I'm glad you liked the end, too. I was kind of worried about it but hurray! Thanks! Report Review
this is so goodd!!! if u don't mind me asking who is the girl in your chapter images? who is she played by? kk thanks, love yur story, my favorite line was "Listen, my dear readers, as I spin you a tale of trickery, guile, and deceit, of bravery and heroism during a misera—
Oh wait, wrong flash card. Oops… Actually this story involves ticklish pears, invisible articles of clothing, first love, some weird advice, and a whole lot of— you’ve guessed it! — cinnamon rolls." I cracked up, it was so smart and funny! :D love you keep writing!Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for the nice review; I'm glad you like it. ^^ And the girl is Ebba Zingmark--pretty, no? xD
~Khanh Report Review
wow the way you wrote the quidditch match is AMAZINGG!! that so good!!! ur an amazing writer, love youuu!Author's Response: :) Thank you so much! Report Review
i like long chapters though!!! and this one was particulary awesome!!! YAYYY!! haha upadte soon!!Author's Response: I like long chapters too! SOUL SISTERS! Wait you could be a guy. . . . .SOUL SIBLINGS. Anyways thank you :) you made my day
And I will try! I just started the new chapter! Report Review
kk so this #100! I can honestly this has been one of the most amzing fanfics like EVERRR:D im following all ur other stories too, so update soon!!! kk byee:)Author's Response: You are AMAZING. Thank you so much, and I'm glad you're reading my stuff. It means the world to me. Thank you so much for the 100th review!!!
Ellie Report Review
hi:)) i finished the story (amazing btw:D) but i wanted to add the last two reviews to get ur story to a hundred:) soo #99! YAYAYAuthor's Response: You are awesome. :) I'm glad you like it, and thank you so much for helping me get to 100!!! :D Thanks for the review!
Ellie Report Review
hi ilove you. i cryed when i read this. u have to update soon! bye:) i hoped i heled with ur 100 review goall!Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for the review. I'll update soon ... I have a one-shot first, though, to give me some time to finish the chapter. :D
Ellie (And, yes, you have. You are review 104. :D Feel free to review any time, though. ) Report Review
I LOVE FLUFFF!!! AND UR STORY!!! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like it! :D
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