I earnestly hope you continue this story.
if i had a REAL say in the voting for "best this" and "best that", yours would the the story "I wish I had written".
this is humorous with just enough vanilla to make it a smooth read.
Im very appreciative of the use of 'asides' to make things feel so much more personal.
while i feel the story is a bit unorganized i also have to admitt that in this case it WORKS.
other than that, cheers to a good story... now if you'll excuse me, im hungry for cinnamon rolls...Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! It means so much to me that you would have nominated this for Dobbys. :') I'm really glad you liked it! *virtually hands you some cinnamon rolls through the screen* Here you go! ^^
~Khanh Report Review
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