Reading Reviews From Member: AussieLottie
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Review #1, by AussieLottieIdentity: Choices Made

30th November 2014:
You're back! I can honestly say that the wait between stories made my Sunday's feel very empty... But the wait is over! And what an excellent start to a story I'm certain will be just as good, if not better than the previous two. I love your writing, love your characterization, love your plots and love waking up to updates on Sundays. :)

Super excited to find out what happens next! Poor Remus. Poor Draco. Poor Quirinus :(

Thanks for writing! 10/10 as always!

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Review #2, by AussieLottieCrime of Passion: The SPY

24th November 2014:
I'm so sorry to hear that you lost somebody, that's never easy. My condolences. Just take the time you need, it's entirely understandable.

Your chapter was excellently written, as always, and I really enjoyed the description of SPY, it seems very very different to Hogwarts, reminding me of Sky High... :)

I'm loving your character interactions and plot and look forward to the next update, but take your time, we can all wait. :)

AussieLottie (10/10)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that really means a lot. Next chapter will be out fairly soon, mainly because writing is easier than doing nothing. Everything is really hard and strange now.
Thanks for your condolences,

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Review #3, by AussieLottieLethargic: About October

9th October 2014:
Well... Another excellent chapter! Definitely curious to find out what will happen next... Like perhaps a prank by Brett against a certain Potter?

I don't think it is possible to get sick of Carrie... She's just kind of endearing. :P I AM curious to find out if/when Brett will mention something else about his parents pressuring him to get married. :P

Was Brett Carrie's sloppy seconds or was Brett Gabby's sloppy seconds? :P

I have to say I like Brett... He acts like a bit of a jerk but I have the feeling he is good deep down. :P And top of the fit list... Well. I think you seem to be on the right track yourself. :P

10/10 and looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked the chapter I found this one a bit boring though, so thank you.

I'm surprised that you're not sick with at least one part of Carrie. I guess she says a few great lines every now and then.

I guess you will find out more (not much) about Brett's marriage in the next chapter. You'll also get the answer to the sloppy seconds question.

I like Brett for the most part too. He is probably the third most dynamic character I have ever come up with. I could be his friend, but never date him. I also know a bit more about him then you though so I have a lot more to make a judgement. Sadly Brett is number two. It piratically makes him and Carrie a matching set.

Thank you for reading and thank you for the review! The next chapter should be out soon!

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Review #4, by AussieLottieWitch: Witch

24th September 2014:
It's very sad... But I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! Any chance you'd be willing to let those who can read know what the letter said?

Fantastic one-shot! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. I'm intrigued to know what readers come up with for what the letter said, actually. Personally I like to think of Lizzy being one of the Weasleys' ancestors...

Thank you very much for the review!

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Review #5, by AussieLottieThe Real Hermione Granger: Chapter one

12th September 2014:
A very good and intriguing start... I'm excited to see where it goes! It's always refreshing to see a unique Dramione story- I hope that's what my own story does too! :P

10/10 and keep on writing!

Author's Response: Why thank you very much. I will definitely check out your stories as well. Please continue to read

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Review #6, by AussieLottieLethargic: Others Say I'm Shameless

26th August 2014:
You deserve more reviews.
This story is fantastic. I mean, I'll admit I'm close to wanting to pull a Dobby and bash my head against my lamp because when this story came to the top of the page again, it didn't have a new chapter... But I'll refrain, mainly because you did update yesterday? (I think it was yesterday at least...)

This story is brilliant though. I love Carrie, I'm absolutely in love with her interactions with Brett and James and really... I just want to find out what happens next. This is why fan-fiction is terrible, you can't always finish a book that you love all in one go! On the one hand, we the readers get to support and encourage the author along the way, but on the other hand... I, as a fast and impatient reader, have to survive the wait between chapters. Thankfully, with this story... I know it's worth the wait!

Thanks for writing, keep it up! (And make the next update a snappy one? ;) 10/10)

Author's Response: Thank you for saying that I deserve more reviews and I apologize for the late reply. The story popped back up because I added a chapter image to the second chapter. Sorry about that. :)

I'm glad that you like how Carrie is interacting with other characters.

I truly appreciate your support and the update should happen soon!

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Review #7, by AussieLottieMy Not-So-Imaginary Fiend: XIX: A Glint of Hope

12th August 2014:
You can't leave me hanging like that! That's cruel! But I suppose I'll forgive you if you update soon. Like now...

But anyway, having read the prequel to this up until this chapter... I'm completely caught up and excited for more! :D

10/10 and please update soon! (Not in 2 months like all your Author Notes claim to be the norm!)

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Review #8, by AussieLottieMy Not-So-Imaginary Friend: I: Welcome to My Life

11th August 2014:
Why is he so creepy?! :O
I just read the first chapter of your sequel before you sent me here so I'm very curious to continue... But thought it best to inform you that I'm thoroughly creeped out by Benjamin. No quite sure what in particular is MOST creepy but believe it is the fact he is so cruel. I think changing from a child with no qualms about having an imaginary friend and then growing up and realizing something isn't quite right would be terrifying. So not particularly jealous of not being in her position!!!

Off to the next chapter!! 10/10

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Review #9, by AussieLottieCrime of Passion: Legendary

1st August 2014:
This is such a cute story. :P
I wasn't sure from reading the summary but your regular updates have meant that I've definitely noticed and decided to give it a chance and I'm so glad I have! This is turning into an excellent story and I'm excited to see the next chapter! Enjoy wherever you are now and update soon!

10/10 and keep on writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The update is currently being validated but it should be out within a day or two.

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Review #10, by AussieLottieImmune: Chapter 3

29th July 2014:
This is such an interesting story!!! You're really drawing me in :)

I'm thinking he's hypnotizing them or something... But the poor first year! :(

So I'll be looking for an update.. Hopefully that'll be soon? :D

10/10 and keep on writing!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!! It honestly makes scream with joy getting these reviews!! I know how it feels to be waiting for chapter uploads, believe I was an avid hpff reader and I know it's the most excruciating wait, and I'll try my hardest to put something up sooner then I did with the last chapter, but my degree is so full that yikes! Hardly any spare time! But I'm hoping at the latest mid semester break you'll get and update or I'll try for sooner! So it might be a couple of weeks and I'm sorry about that but hopefully it's worth the wait!! :)

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Review #11, by AussieLottieLethargic: But It Shouldn't Matter

27th July 2014:
So am I correct in thinking that of the girls Brett's parents have named as possible suitors, Carrie is on that list? Because that would be cute as. I mean I can tell James and Carrie are going to happen because that's how this story was advertised but I mean... Brett is sexy. :P

I like the way you write as well! It makes things very believable and I think this is only accentuated by the realistic flow of conversation you create. Great work so far!!

So all that is left to say is that you really have to update as soon as possible because I am desperate to find out what happens next!!!

10/10 and keep on writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Thank you for letting me know that the conversation is flowing well. I was a bit worried that it sounded awkward. Yes, Carrie is on that list, but neither of them are the type to point it out and talk about it.

I'm hoping to submit the new chapter very soon!

Thank you again!

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Review #12, by AussieLottieInfamous: Aftermath

27th July 2014:
I can't handle this. :'(
I just get into the story and go to press next chapter... and it's not there! :O
You need to update. ASAP. :D
I'm loving the story and kind of sort of really want James and Hazelwood to happen for real. Because they're adorable. And I kind of want Hazelwood and Albus to happen because like- that's what you're moving to and again. Adorable. :)

So anyway, update now. Like seriously... Write a chapter now. :P 10/10.

Author's Response: Ugh, don't you hate that feeling when there's no next chapter of a story you're really starting to enjoy? Good news though (I hope), the next chapter of this one just posted :) I'm really glad you're liking the story so far. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Review #13, by AussieLottieBeing the Other Woman: First Loves

24th July 2014:
Well, it's what I feared... An excellent story. :P
I'm absolutely in love with this story and am desperate for an update!!! You can't write multiple stories at once! It makes updates even more agonisingly slow. :(

But I will be waiting because, honestly. I love this story. :)

Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Fear shouldn't be your response to an excellent story, darling. ;). I can't help but write a million stories at once!! It's an addiction!! I really think they should have a Harry Potter support group for those of us who are a little too obsessed with this stuff.


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Review #14, by AussieLottie'Till Death Do Us Part: Rabastan

23rd June 2014:
I personally prefer having a regularly updated story. :)
It's sad when it comes to an end but really, having a completed story is such a good feeling too! And the more often you update, the less likely people are to forget what is going on in the plot and the more people will be attracted to reading this fantastic story.

Not sure if that made sense... But great chapter and make sure to update soon!

Author's Response: I have to agree with you! Every last bit b/c I feel that way with other fics that I read (which is why I tend to read completed works). Thanks for letting me know and leaving a review! =D

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Review #15, by AussieLottieI Specialise in Murders: Turning me Legal.

13th June 2014:
That was an excellent chapter. :)

I'm looking forward to finding out what will happen to the next victim!


Author's Response: thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

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Review #16, by AussieLottieTug Of War: Lessons from James

9th June 2014:
You do IB too?! Someone to share in my pain! ;)

But otherwise a fantastic chapter! :D I am curious about one thing though... How is James getting up into the Girls Dorm? Or is this just a little change of yours to make things work out? It's not a big problem just something I noticed. :)

I'm loving the story and will be moving on to the next chapter... now. :D


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Review #17, by AussieLottieThe Rise of the A.W.L.: Howling at the Moon.

5th June 2014:
Great chapter! Really enjoying the story but quick comment... You say Neville entered the History of Magic classroom at the end, did you mean Nathan? :)

Otherwise excellent chapter! Can't wait for next chapter.


Author's Response: Yeah, it should have been. Thanks for pointing that out. It's really not a good idea to create an OC with a name that begins with the same letter and is much the same length as a canon character they have some personality traits in common with. It make confusion WAY too easy. I've corrected it now.

Thanks for the review. Glad you're enjoying this.

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Review #18, by AussieLottieNight of Betrayal: Night of betrayal

3rd June 2014:
I wouldn't say boring! It really sets the tone for 'Reincarnation' and having already read the first chapter, I know that it'll be great! Very good to know what happened to her... Now to find out what happens! :)

10/10 and keep on writing!

Author's Response: Thank u so much!! The first chapter has been validated today, so keep on reading, i promise i won't disappoint you!

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Review #19, by AussieLottieSirius Black's Personal Relationship Adviser: After Hogsmeade

11th May 2014:
I have to say it was a very pleasant surprise to find this story! I wasn't entirely taken by the summary of the story but am so glad to have given this story a chance! It's cute, funny and the way you write makes the conversations natural and not forced which is sometimes the case in other stories! I'm already into the plot and looking forward to the next update!

Congrats and keep on writing! 10/10

Author's Response: I'm really happy you gave it a chance, too! I wrote that summary in about thirty seconds haha Maybe it will be changed one day!!

Stay tuned for more!


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Review #20, by AussieLottieMoonlit Sonata: The King is Here

27th April 2014:
Wow fantastic chapter! Looking forward to the next one!!! Things are getting good! Can't wait to see if something happens between Ana and Sirius!


Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! That was really sweet. You'll find out soon enough about Ana and Sirius. It's not a long wait to the end now. ;)

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Review #21, by AussieLottieDon't Say The "P" Word: Surprise?

19th April 2014:
Haha wow! :P
That was a cute chapter! I love how evil you made Molly! It's not very Weasley-esque though... Poor Rose! D:
But not the nicest place to leave me hanging! Please update soon as I'm excited to see what happens next :)

~AussieLottie (10/10)

Author's Response: Haha, I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!!

Can't have everyone be nice!! Besides, in a family as big as the Weasley's, someone is going to be bitter. I hope to update within the next couple of weeks! ♥

xoxo LL

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Review #22, by AussieLottieInitiate: A Proper Welcome

6th April 2014:
Wow... That was fantastic :)
I absolutely LOVE this story! The hardest part for me is waiting for updates!!! I loved how emotional Fred and George were and how the reacted to uncovering who Moony actually was. The fact that McGonagall and Dumbledore reacted like that just made it all the funnier! I've been laughing aloud for the whole chapter and can't wait for the next one.

I also want to say how impressed I am with your writing! You write extremely long chapters with fantastic content which, I know from personal experience isn't always easy... I actually finished my first fanfic about a month ago, that had been a project for nearly three years so I'm beyond impressed with your weekly updates and fantastic plot and characterization. So anyway, to recap... Don't stop writing! You have a knack for it and I wouldn't be surprised if you began writing own books someday and having them published!


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Review #23, by AussieLottieInitiate: The Professor's Intervention

23rd March 2014:
OH! That's cruel! Leaving us on the edge of our seats to wait for another chapter!! Harsh!!! :P

Another fantastic chapter! You amaze me with your writing. I can't wait for the next update! Don't make us wait too long! :)

10/10 AussieLottie

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Review #24, by AussieLottieEmbracing the Madness: The Plot Thickens

15th March 2014:
You definitely don't have to worry about that review!! I'll admit that I'm an absolutely awful critic in my own right, but I don't leave nasty reviews, nothing is accomplished by it. Everyone deserves to be able to develop their skills and improve and the the kind of person that can write a review like that is just a nasty pessimist. I can't remember a single time you've spelt something incorrectly... Maybe a typo but nothing that intereupts the pleasure of reading your story. Your plot has drawn me in and I intend to keep reading to the end of this story! :)

Thanks for writing!
AussieLottie (10/10)

Author's Response: Thanks so much fore reviewing. I try to catch all the typos and mistakes, but sometimes the slip through when I get caught up in my own writing haha.

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Review #25, by AussieLottiePlaying House with Malfoy: The Mother In-Law

9th February 2014:
You updated!!! YAY! I love this story so much... You need to finish it. And update again... Don't leave us hanging for that long again! It was cruel. :P

I could scarcely believe my eyes when I saw you had updated... But it was a great chapter! :D
Why did you say it had mild violence though?


Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to update sooner next time. HPFF wouldn't validate my chapter unless I added 'mild violence' to the warning for my story. I'm not sure either?So I just did as I was told so I could get my chapter up for everyone to see.

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